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Gamer's Law [Chapter3 is up!!]
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Tiny
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 		Hey Saev, have you been writing anymore lately? I really enjoy your style, hope you haven't given up on it.
Tj-
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But I, being poor, have only my dreams.
I spread my dreams at your feet.
Tread Softly, For you tread on my dreams.
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Current Arg's: Rookery Tower
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Saevitia
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 		No, I haven't given up, its just likely to be a few more weeks til the next chapter.

If you want a definintive reason it's because I am currently obsessed with death -> http://www.deviantart.com/view/20801047/
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tsondie21
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 		keep......writing.....cant.......wait.......much............looooooooooooooooonger
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Tiny
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 		It's been like a moooooooonth, what happened to once a week? Very Happy
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But I, being poor, have only my dreams.
I spread my dreams at your feet.
Tread Softly, For you tread on my dreams.
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Current Arg's: Rookery Tower
Gamertag: DanteThePoet


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Atrophied
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Tiny wrote:
It's been like a moooooooonth, what happened to once a week? Very Happy
Tj-


seconded...

/me pines for fjords (and chapter 3)
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Tiny
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 		Seeing as how this topic got brought up again, I spent some time and doodled out a few cool symbols for Gamers Law in Government today. I'm going to Gimp them up later and I'll post my favorite one or two for the curious of you.
Tj-
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But I, being poor, have only my dreams.
I spread my dreams at your feet.
Tread Softly, For you tread on my dreams.
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Current Arg's: Rookery Tower
Gamertag: DanteThePoet


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Rendon
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 		whats a cameo? Embarassed
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 		A cameo is a guest appearance/inclusion into the storyline.
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Saevitia
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 		Chapter three of Gamer's Law is now up. Sorry for the long wait.

http://www.livejournal.com/community/notanarg/4931.html
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Axys Denyed
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Saevitia wrote:
Chapter three of Gamer's Law is now up. Sorry for the long wait.

http://www.livejournal.com/community/notanarg/4931.html


Firstly, great job on this story, Sae. It's really intriguing. Now, here are some typos I found...

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...they are conscious in their decisions to...


Should be "of their decisions"

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ARG players more than participants any other video game genre are...


Should be "ARG players, more than participants of any other video game genre, are..."

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This is the point where you choose decide your fate, your world, your future


The word "choose" should be taken out

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For their own power, satisfaction, and goals., they will break you, or try to control you


Period should be moved from behind "goals" to behind "you"

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And maybe a can point the way.


I'm guessing this should be "And maybe I can point the way." I'm not sure

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...and 'how?1' and a few expletives Orlando and...


Should be a period after "expletives". I'm not sure if the 1 after "how" is a typo, but I like it that way Smile

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There was a momentary silence, as everyone...


No comma needed here

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"there's nada in the source...


You should capitalize "there's"
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Saevitia
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 		Fixed all the typos except for the in dialogue grammer 'typos'. Which are supposed to be that way. Thanks for helping me edit! <3
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Axys Denyed
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 		I wasn't sure which ones were intentional, so I went ahead and listed them all Smile
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I've searched for the Cube, played poker with the dead, hunted monsters, helped stop Spoocheee and helped find a dimension hopping cat. What else you got?

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TJ229ER
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 		Excellent job Saevitia can't wait for the next installment.

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Enigmaster
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 		Some really great work here, please keep it up! Especially love what you did with the 'crowded room' idea, it's original stuff like that which makes it such an enjoyable to read. Maybe suitable material for Seaside Press once complete?

And come on, lets be honest - who didn't check heavyastheearth.com for kl00s? Very Happy
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Tiny
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 		Wow, I thought you had given up! Keep up the good work Saev.
Tj-
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But I, being poor, have only my dreams.
I spread my dreams at your feet.
Tread Softly, For you tread on my dreams.
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Current Arg's: Rookery Tower
Gamertag: DanteThePoet


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