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dmax
Unfictologist
Joined: 09 Jan 2003 Posts: 1387 Location: Location: Location!
The redkore site has gotten a haircut. Three pages only.
Redkore haiku redux
Off on a journey
Wear the magic lanyard but
Going nowhere fast.
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Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2003 3:40 pm
Nyght_Shyft
Decorated
Joined: 05 May 2003 Posts: 243 Location: everywhere and nowhere
You guys give up too easy.
Perhaps the rabbit hole was too deep?
Shame, shame, shame...
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2003 1:12 am
vpisteve
Asshatministrator
Joined: 30 Sep 2002 Posts: 2441 Location: 1987
Nyght_Shyft wrote:
You guys give up too easy.
Perhaps the rabbit hole was too deep?
Shame, shame, shame...
Or, perhaps the rabbit hole was just a black circle painted onto the street.
Or, perhaps my fat ass was just too big to go down.
Or, perhaps it wasn't a rabbit hole.
Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2003 5:05 am
jamesi
Sentient Being
Joined: 25 Sep 2002 Posts: 2195 Location: Canadia
Nyght_Shyft wrote:
You guys give up too easy.
Perhaps the rabbit hole was too deep?
Shame, shame, shame...
Dude, that's so not a haiku. A haiku has a syllable structure of 5 in the first line, 7 in the second line, and 5 in the third line. Your poem has 7-9-3.
Might I suggest:
You guys all gave up.
The rabbit hole was too deep.
Shame on me, the shill.
See, that's a proper haiku. Glad I could help!
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2003 12:45 pm
Nyght_Shyft
Decorated
Joined: 05 May 2003 Posts: 243 Location: everywhere and nowhere
jamesi wrote:
Dude, that's so not a haiku. A haiku has a syllable structure of 5 in the first line, 7 in the second line, and 5 in the third line. Your poem has 7-9-3.
Twasn't meant to be.
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Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2003 10:18 pm
dmax
Unfictologist
Joined: 09 Jan 2003 Posts: 1387 Location: Location: Location!
Nyght_Shyft wrote:
jamesi wrote:
Dude, that's so not a haiku. A haiku has a syllable structure of 5 in the first line, 7 in the second line, and 5 in the third line. Your poem has 7-9-3.
Twasn't meant to be.
Good start.
---
Twasn't meant to be.
A vague idea at first
Ends in a whimper.
---
Your turn.
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 1:19 pm
tanner
Entrenched
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 875 Location: (x,y,z,t,i, ...)+
hey its gotta the most minimilalist site ever -- check it out -- nuthin there at all
Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 1:44 pm
vpisteve
Asshatministrator
Joined: 30 Sep 2002 Posts: 2441 Location: 1987
Maybe it was a mercy killing.
Somebody put Redkore out of our misery.
Thank you, whoever you are.
Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 3:25 pm
luxandpoe
Boot
Joined: 25 Mar 2003 Posts: 37 Location: Silicon Valley, CA
R.I.P.
Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2003 7:08 pm
tanner
Entrenched
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 875 Location: (x,y,z,t,i, ...)+
he he he
its grown alil bit
white hex on black square like the magnet
what is this about -- are we being played with like lil fishes
Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 12:15 pm
ramiles
Unfettered
Joined: 28 Aug 2003 Posts: 362 Location: Chicago
Letter from Red Kore Hi Reid,
We used to sell a product called TELEPORT, but we no longer offer it.
We now provide an information resource called the Redkore Reseach Journal, which explores the noble pursuit of high-minded sentiment.
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Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2003 12:58 pm
Nyght_Shyft
Decorated
Joined: 05 May 2003 Posts: 243 Location: everywhere and nowhere
Re: Letter from Red Kore
ramiles wrote:
Hi Reid,
We used to sell a product called TELEPORT, but we no longer offer it.
We now provide an information resource called the Redkore Reseach Journal, which explores the noble pursuit of high-minded sentiment.
And just who might you be?
_________________Nyght_Shyft - Happy Hunting
"Victory? Defeat? Irrelevant. What's important is the battle, and nothing else."
Posted: Thu Aug 28, 2003 6:02 pm
Guest
Guest
excuse me...but i dropped in on the Redkore site a couple of days ago...is Redkore still going on, is it an ARG *confused*
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 12:04 pm
Nyght_Shyft
Decorated
Joined: 05 May 2003 Posts: 243 Location: everywhere and nowhere
Anonymous wrote:
excuse me...but i dropped in on the Redkore site a couple of days ago...is Redkore still going on, is it an ARG *confused*
Beats me.
But the discussion is no longer here.. go to www.redkore.com and enter the forums.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 6:27 pm
SpaceBass
The BADministrator
Joined: 20 Sep 2002 Posts: 2701 Location: pellucidar
Anonymous wrote:
excuse me...but i dropped in on the Redkore site a couple of days ago...is Redkore still going on, is it an ARG *confused*
It maybe 2/3 of an Alternate Reality Game, in that it does not appear to be a game...at least, not for the audience.
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Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 7:02 pm
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