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[SPEC] Cloverfield Dialog
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IronJ146
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Sasori wrote:
Al Gore's Head wrote:
What makes this seem bogus is when Rob says

"That's why I was late to the party"

Wasn't it a surprise party?

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Rob also can see into the future. It's subtle but there is a small piece of text in the water of the movie poster. It reads: "Rob knows a lot about biology and astrophysiology, but his real talent lies in reading the future.


You a lie!

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AfterDystopia
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I dunno... a squiddy, tentacled beast sounds quite nice.

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With only a slight churning to mark its rise to the surface, the thing slid into view above the dark waters. Vast, Polyphemus-like, and loathsome, it darted like a stupendous monster of nightmares to the monolith, about which it flung its gigantic scaly arms, the while it bowed its hideous head and gave vent to certain measured sounds.


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I cannot think of the deep sea without shuddering at the nameless things that may at this very moment be crawling and floundering on its slimy bed, worshipping their ancient stone idols and carving their own detestable likenesses on submarine obelisks of water-soaked granite. I dream of a day when they may rise above the billows to drag down in their reeking talons the remnants of puny, war-exhausted mankind --of a day when the land shall sink, and the dark ocean floor shall ascend amidst universal pandemonium.


Yes, I know it isn't Lovecraft, but something squiddish seems pretty good, if it is sort of man/bipedal reptile shaped.

Although I'm not so sure about the dialogue. I think that "that's why I was late to the (surprise) party" thing punches a huge hole right in the middle of it.
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Although I'm not so sure about the dialogue. I think that "that's why I was late to the (surprise) party" thing punches a huge hole right in the middle of it.


Sure, but a lot of surprise parties get blown. It is a bit unnecessary to say surprise party in a moment of duress. He could've just said "that's why I was late" and left it at that. Poor writing like that can dampen a few opinions of a film...or expose a fake...

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IronJ146 wrote:
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Although I'm not so sure about the dialogue. I think that "that's why I was late to the (surprise) party" thing punches a huge hole right in the middle of it.


Sure, but a lot of surprise parties get blown. It is a bit unnecessary to say surprise party in a moment of duress. He could've just said "that's why I was late" and left it at that. Poor writing like that can dampen a few opinions of a film...or expose a fake...


Rob: Wow, thx for throwing this party for me
Friend of Rob: No problem, but we were expecting you a bit earlier.


OMG HUGE hole patched.

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I find it quite easy to believe the part about him being late to the party, as they could have explained they were expecting him earlier during the time of the party. But the dialogue...it just doesn't seem plausible. Who explains all this crap right in the middle of a monster attack? Granted it may not be right in the middle of the chaos, but still...
Although it fits perfectly with the storyline we have, it is coming from a suspect source and fits too coincidentally with what we have figured out so far.

Is there any way we can see if her ass gets canned within the next following days? That would definitely help...

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There seem to be a lot of statements in this thread that 'this fits well with what we know about the plot'.

I don't think I agree.

Here is what we know:

A monster attacks the city of NYC. We know someone is wearing a Slusho shirt. We know that the characters have MySpace pages and are responding to some people.

And that's about it.

We don't know for absolute certainty that anything in the trailer is in the film itself. (A secod trailer would make this much clearer, but given the secrecy about how the first trailer got made, there's no guarantee). Yes, the actors are the same and that strongly suggests it--but we are not certain.

AICN claims the film will be about footage found afterwards. Was that gained from any other source? AICN has lost some of its cred recently.

AICN also apparently got an email from JJ Abrams. Although I, for one, cannot guarantee that it's accurate (which is not to say that EH is connected--it is NOT). But there is something about that email that's a little strange in my experience. It could be him, it could not.

We have a call sheet that has some strangeness to it. Not the least of which is how it was given.

And now we have this dialogue, that I agree sounds patently terrible simply as the dialogue itself.

There are lots of reasons to not believe this dialogue to be legitimate in any fashion. I've never -heard- of someone being that willing to break an NDA in the entertainment industry...and I work there. If this actually is the dialogue, then the film is going to have real believability problems--which is interesting, given the cinema verite style it's being shot in.

After all, our friendly camcorders make the film seem like everyone's home movie. Then a real monster attacks--that's stretching the believable already (and pretty brilliantly, actually, in the trailer). To then make the monster backstory TOO complicated--and the dialogue too damn wordy and expository--defeats that entire purpose.

The trailer is better than this dialogue.

So I think everyone should remember that we know very, very little so far. And that this dialogue we are discussing could match some of it...and could very, very well be completely false. IMO, it is.

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The Beast

Hasn't a giant squid been killing monstrously before ie Peter Benchley's The Beast, Kraken in Thousand Leagues and the giant squid in Pirate of the Caribean - Abrams stated this is an original monster. Therefore fakey fakeness!!!

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UnseenPresence wrote:
There seem to be a lot of statements in this thread that 'this fits well with what we know about the plot'.
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i think what most people are saying is that it fit very nicely (too nicely) with the ideas put forward on on these and other boards and the plot has been put together from these. not saying that these ideas are right though just this supposed real plot put forward matches these concepts.

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[SPEC] Cloverfield dialog
Questionable dialogue

Near the end of the supposedly leaked dialogue provided by the Anonymous Makeup Artist there is a rather troubling sentence:

"Maybe binded with something that we thought was extinct or just something else."

*BINDED*? I hardly think, even given the atrociously poor English that one finds spoken on the streets, that any scriptwriter would use the term "binded." "Combined" perhaps, or even "fused," but "binded"?

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So I think everyone should remember that we know very, very little so far


Could we make this into T-shirts and buttons and have everyone wear one? Speculating is great fun. I enjoy it as much as anyone else. But we only have a couple of very limited sources of "solid" information.

I'm not sure why there isn't more to this campaign. I expect they didn't quite think they would generate this enormous thirst for more information.

Maybe they'll make more later. I'm thinking that the slusho site was pulled in because it was something they already had up. A complicated ARG takes a lot of planning and design work - you can't just throw it together. Maybe they just aren't ready yet.

The beauty of this is that, eventually, we will get the answers. And there are so few things in life you can say that about with any degree of certainty.

So, carry on. Smile
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Re: [SPEC] Cloverfield dialog
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skeptical1 wrote:
Near the end of the supposedly leaked dialogue provided by the Anonymous Makeup Artist there is a rather troubling sentence:

"Maybe binded with something that we thought was extinct or just something else."

*BINDED*? I hardly think, even given the atrociously poor English that one finds spoken on the streets, that any scriptwriter would use the term "binded." "Combined" perhaps, or even "fused," but "binded"?


It's fan fiction. Just be thankful they didn't throw in some slash with Voltron to liven things up. Shocked

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Rob: Cause he didn't disappear Jason. They found the boat on the coast of Hangzhou in China with lion claw marks in it. ****ing lion claw marks. And and and…thats why I was so late to the party tonight.


Edited for humor.

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Re: [SPEC] Cloverfield dialog
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It's fan fiction. Just be thankful they didn't throw in some slash with Voltron to liven things up. Shocked

It's about time someone realizes it's just a movie!!! a fictional one at that.......durr. and if i read right that "news" site just said that they got an email from someone and didn't know what to think about same as everyone else on else on here. and one more thing. why is it unbelievable that this dialog is too far fetched for fiction and that it came out when it did. i mean the history has to be told sometime to the audience. it would come out at the party.

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Re: The Beast

dunce wrote:
Hasn't a giant squid been killing monstrously before ie Peter Benchley's The Beast, Kraken in Thousand Leagues and the giant squid in Pirate of the Caribean - Abrams stated this is an original monster. Therefore fakey fakeness!!!


It was a Kraken is Pirates, too.
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I have to disagree with you on that point WHATEVER. They don't have to tell the history of anything. They could just speculate like we are. All three Dead movies (i.e. night of the living dead, dawn and day of the dead) never gave a clear explanation of what happened and for my money thats what made it better. I mean yea they could do the history but I mean normally in monster movies they find the origin and then they find the way to stop it. Come on thats played. Even the origin is played. Not everything has to have an origin.

Also I can suspend my imagination with the best of them but this dialouge was just made off of what other people have said about the monster. Come on, a giant squid just so happens to bond its dna with something older than the giant squid (which by the by if there really was a giant squid there wouldn't be to much that could be older than it). And first it attacks Japan or China, then just winds up going to New York? Why? Its not like New Yorkers taste different then Oriental people, and its not like this creature would even know that. And plus they said the thing was smart, what I kind of sense would it make to swim its ass from the Middle East to Northern America? It wants to see the sights?

No I'm sorry but I'm not buying it. Once you say the monster has some sort of thought process then you have to give it a reason for doing what it does; fear, anger, hunger, whatever.

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