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Serenity

Wow! Those are freakin' incredible, Dray!

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:50 pm

JKatkina

I told you this'all already, but here it is again for future reference:

Jay isn't coming across as the focal point just yet, because Alex is bigger than him and further up, while having about the same amount of detail. Don't make Jay bigger, but bump him up so the top of his head is higher than the top of Alex's head. (That'll move the flashlight too, which is a good thing. Very Happy

It's quite close to the edge for such a dominant element.)

Alex looks like he's holding a compact. XD Either change the location of that script or get rid of it.

Don't stress about moving things up too much. Maybe cropping it in a little closer on the top and right edge would be helpful -- try it and see, though, I could be wrong.

Hmmmmm...

NEEDS MOAR MASKY

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:54 pm

Mops · Decorated Joined: 24 Feb 2010 Posts: 174

Dray, have I told you lately that I love you?

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 7:56 pm

Dray

Thanks JKat! Those totally help. I've included a modified version... any better?

(Also, thanks guys! Very Happy

Yay fandom fun!)

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:07 pm

MissDelirium · Boot Joined: 11 Feb 2010 Posts: 38

Oh my god, That is absolutely stunning!

I would totally hang that up in my room. Very Happy

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:11 pm

Cheshire01

I likes this. I likes it very much.

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:12 pm

JKatkina

Better indeed! Bloody hands much more poignant now.

I like the side-benefit of the drawings now being a kind of 'halo' around Jay's head. XD

I'd almost consider bumping Masky up a little bit now too.

How about (for the final) doing something with the glow of the flashlight that was similar to the glow behind Slendy's head? Having more to do with texture and maybe even graphic shapes than a smooth glow? The softness of that glow gradient is throwing me a bit, even if it is just a rough.

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:14 pm

Serenity

Whatever the final product is, I'm going to make it into a bookmark/my wall paper.

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:15 pm

Dray

Hey JKat, this better?

(Makes me want to try to chuck in the title copy all Saul Bass-style blocky letters, with that flashlight. XD)

Also: Ha ha, we'll see if the final ever gets done. X33 If it does I'm probably going to submit it to the creators first for approval before plastering it everywhere as in here. (I'd hate if I made it and they were all "...that looks really lame please never show it again. T_T")

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:25 pm

MagicNein · Veteran Joined: 30 Dec 2009 Posts: 99

That's pretty sweet, Dray. I love the flashlight effect, it reminds me of something, but I can't quite figure out what.

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:53 pm

raelyn

Dray...

You just earned several Raelyn Stamps of Approval~

And like a planet of wifin's.

**Posted:** Wed Feb 24, 2010 9:26 pm

dotman4114 · Veteran Joined: 27 Jan 2010 Posts: 133 Location: Florida

I think I just came a little.

**Posted:** Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:31 am

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Dray

Raelyn, that is a lot of wifins. Slendy may not well be pleased... but I am! >:D

Dotman: Marble Hornets, now requiring you to bring an extra pair of pants for so many reasons. D: (XD)

eta: MissD, apologies for the lower quality on the Alex & Slendy thread. I realized that it was getting late and I knew that if I spent all the time I needed on it I wouldn't get any sleep... but the jokes, they must keep flowing!

**Posted:** Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:38 am

lifegospel

**Posted:** Thu Feb 25, 2010 1:53 am

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Dray

Oh you kids these days, all filled with piss and vinegar. (I really have no right to be calling anyone 'kids' but shh. XD)

**Posted:** Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:21 am