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Slender freak · Unfettered Joined: 17 Oct 2009 Posts: 368

its sounds great so far

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:23 am

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I dislike it, the idea of a physically violent slender man just doesn't appeal to me at all. I don't mind the idea of dismembered, disembowelled bodies found in trees and the like but having slender man physically injure or kill the victims like that seems to reduce his fear quotient significantly, as he becomes "just a violent tall guy". Some telekinetic ability (like in supernatural where the body of the mother slides up the wall onto the ceiling and she starts bleeding) would be more fitting. Also, if he doesn't have real hands I think it would be better if the "knobs" were black, such as made from his suit material.

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 6:16 pm

Minish · Boot Joined: 19 Dec 2009 Posts: 53

Slender Dude will get you >;o

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 7:20 pm

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 521

lol. No, I take every opinion and try to incorporate the pros into my story, while taking the cons out. I apologize if I tainted your views on Slendy. Doesn't mean I will change it, but it doesn't mean I won't.

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 7:22 pm

Minish · Boot Joined: 19 Dec 2009 Posts: 53

Its really nice. I liked it. Well done.

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 7:32 pm

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 521

Thank you, Minish. I will have the next chapter up MAYBE next week.

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:04 pm

red223 · Boot Joined: 13 Jul 2009 Posts: 40

spectacular writing!
Though....I'd think Slenderman should be more spider like and subtle.
Ahhh, Me. That's just my opinion, I'm sure lots of people disagree.

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:17 pm

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 521

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:23 pm

red223 · Boot Joined: 13 Jul 2009 Posts: 40

The scene in Trainspotting with the baby turning it's head 360 degrees upside down on the wall.
That could go well with Masky!
Haha.
Razz

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:27 pm

gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 521

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 8:28 pm

AshleySix · Decorated Joined: 28 Nov 2009 Posts: 160 Location: Texas

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:00 pm

chaos

it would really depend on whether ye wanted to stick to the true slender story or just go with the MH take on him

personally, i'd just mention him in passing, more of a reference than an actual character

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:20 pm

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gordon_ramsay · Unfettered Joined: 27 Sep 2009 Posts: 521

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:22 pm

chaos

that would work too Very Happy

it's really quite interesting how the internet has spawned it's own fairy tale/boogey man/whatever

**Posted:** Tue Dec 22, 2009 9:27 pm

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Slender freak · Unfettered Joined: 17 Oct 2009 Posts: 368

make masky a good guy but so that the detectives dont know what he is doing

Edit: i'd like it more if it was just about slendy killing people and the detectives get too close to the truth or to slendy that slendy kills one of them and the other goes insane. and the insane one will be stalked by slendy until he dies of old age.

**Posted:** Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:21 am