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The top one makes more sense given the light source.

On the other hand, the bottom one guides the eye to the focal point better. Not sure how, but it does.

**Posted:** Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:15 pm

MissDelirium · Boot Joined: 11 Feb 2010 Posts: 38

dray, I like the top one more. It goes better with the lighting. C:

I also pieced together the painting in photoshop. My scanner isn't a flatbed, so getting the painting to lay flat on it was difficult, but I managed!

**Posted:** Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:05 pm

xxxblindxxx · Decorated Joined: 14 Oct 2009 Posts: 220

that is sick. new facebook picture =D

**Posted:** Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:10 pm

Dray

Also, desktop'd -- I hope that that's okay! ^_^ Again, amazing job!

**Posted:** Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:20 pm

dotman4114 · Veteran Joined: 27 Jan 2010 Posts: 133 Location: Florida

**Posted:** Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:27 pm

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Dray

Ha ha, I don't mind in the least. XD It's pretty damned awesome!

**Posted:** Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:30 pm

Selanthas · Boot Joined: 24 Sep 2006 Posts: 14 Location: Maryland

Dray, I'm with xxxblindxxx in liking the bottom one better, sure it makes the light source a little out of whack but how you use shadows in the faces to the left will fix that. Also nice touch, including the film slice like that.

**Posted:** Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:46 pm

dotman4114 · Veteran Joined: 27 Jan 2010 Posts: 133 Location: Florida

Quick sketch ( and side profile practice) of Seth and Tim, because subscribers to the Seth and Tim theory (not me) need luv too Very Happy

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 12:44 am

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MissDelirium · Boot Joined: 11 Feb 2010 Posts: 38

Oh snap, the timburns!

Thanks for all the feedback guys <3 And I don't mind if you use it as a desktop, hehe. I kind of feel like doing another one now. We'll see Cx

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 10:20 am

xxxblindxxx · Decorated Joined: 14 Oct 2009 Posts: 220

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:16 am

Dray

T_O I'm finding Seth to be difficult, in that poster-thing, because he looks pretty similar to Jay, at least in the 2 seconds that we see him. Looks like you were drawing 'em more realistically, Dman, that's good! Very Happy

One thing that popped out at me was that the back of their heads are a little flat; the backs of skull cases are shaped more like a sloping round... shape. Though it might just be that their faces are a little long.

(Ha ha I like that your letters mimic the ones we see on those wall-scribbles! XD Awesome!)

Miss D: Oh man, if you did I would be gleeful. XD I'm still hoping that we can get more out before the next entry, though I think it would be more of a competition if we had some idea of when the next entry/response was coming out.

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:26 am

dotman4114 · Veteran Joined: 27 Jan 2010 Posts: 133 Location: Florida

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 3:27 pm

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MissDelirium · Boot Joined: 11 Feb 2010 Posts: 38

Well, I'm at it again. This time it's gonna be a two-parter C:<
First part WIP:

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 10:33 pm

Dray

Ooh, dividing it into acts... that's going to be pretty cool! Your lettering is great, by the way! (Damn, you're totally beating me. XD I'll never be able to catch up at this rate!)

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 10:39 pm

xxxblindxxx · Decorated Joined: 14 Oct 2009 Posts: 220

*zombie growl* MUST HAVE!!!!!!!!!!!!

**Posted:** Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:35 pm