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[LOCKED] [Video Side Story] TribeTwelve
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Jordan
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First off, great entry...but....I do have some criticisms of it. But first, Tribe Twelve is back and for that we rejoice Smile

For me, the conversation felt and sometimes too much like exposition rather than a natural conversation. That's not to say what we learnt wasn't interesting or haunting or affecting (such as poor Mary's knowledge that even the remains of her son weren't safe in death from The Collective), but that it didn't quite ring right as a conversation sometimes.

The gun scene also felt a tad video game/Hollywood and did jar with the naturalism that Tribe Twelve otherwise does so very well, but it didn't really affect for me what worked – the spooky as hell investigation of the house (which had my heart racing) and Noah crumbling before our eyes, as well as Slendy. Oh God, Slendy. Those tentacles...:shivers:


Anyway, I can't wait for the next entry! Smile

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ThinSuit
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Did adam shot a few bullets in his house, or was it a fake gun ?
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Dr.Block
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Probably a fake gun, with that recoil you would probably drop it if you tried to fire it with one hand.

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UnreadierLizard
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My guess is that he used blanks.

PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2012 8:53 am
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Ol'Slendy
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About the gun (OOG, adam said this)
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The gun is real, and he didn't use blanks. It was ALL edited in in after effects. Adam's freaking amazing and editing!


PostPosted: Sat May 19, 2012 9:17 am
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Cursor
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I loved this entry. The effects were amazing!

I feel like the acting was forced in some parts from both Noah and Mary. I'm gonna' be thinkin' 'bout that Slendy-warp all day. SOMEONE MAKE A .GIF

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mokie
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Anyone else want to shake him and tell him to shut up and listen for a minute, in case she called to say something more important than "Oh yeah, Milo? They ate him"? Eh, just me then.

That's not a criticism of how it was handled, btw--perfectly in character, very proactive paranoid. Just a reaction to the character on my part.

Not directly related to the video, but I appreciate the efforts he's made to keep the audience into the story between videos, even when real life ate into his time.

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Oscar Langley
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Noah's "oh hey buddy" reaction is possibly the greatest line in Slenderman history.

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nyc_jester
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Am I the only one that thinks there's a Slendy Mini-Me standing next to Slendy in the hallway? It was hard for me to tell. Could just be a nightstand or something, but it definitely looked like there was something next to Slendy before he held down the B Button so he could run super fast at Noah.

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McWeird007
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These frames were at the very beginning during the static. It looks like someone with Noah's hat from "Nature Trail Visit"
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JustJim
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McWeird007 wrote:
These frames were at the very beginning during the static. It looks like someone with Noah's hat from "Nature Trail Visit"


I noticed those, too. Just couldn't screengrab them. It doesn't look like Noah. Could be Kat? Or even Milo?

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UnreadierLizard
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Whoever it was, this entry was just non stop badassery.

My hat goes off to Noah/Adam for all his hard work.

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Seraphim
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This entry was....wow.

The entire thing was just totally flawless. Even if the acting was forced, we didn't come for Oscar worthy performances...we watch TribeTwelve to shit our pants and listen to Noah drop more f-bombs than Osbournes.

And this entry delivered in both regards.

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Tharol
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Fire your gun memorial day.

Movie Playlist
1. So Alex get your gun Marble Hornets.
2. Canada Guns Dirge of Earth
3. The APC Murder
4. SAPH Minigan fire the night.
5. Films 502 Proxy Bullets
6. Choice FPS Noah Tribetwelve

Coming Soon

Save the Rod Gun
The Undecide five Pistols
Black Elephant Guns in my Kitchen
The shot are not Spying
Dark Night Scope Target Harvest
One Hundred Yard Firing Range
Caught Not Sniping
One Bad Round
The Coyote Lady Proxy For Hire

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Daniel Kay
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To be fully honest I was actually hoping they wouldn't do the whole "weapons don't work" thing, just having the "monster" be immune to everything makes it kinda bland in my opinion.

It would be better if it was "trying to fight it conventionally doesn't work", pointing the gun at it and it will manage to evade, but it can still be hurt in some way, you'd have to manage to surprise it somehow which itself is very hard but not just "can't hurt it".

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