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[SlenderSniper]

I'm fine with the evil Bri, so long as we might end up bringing her back to her senses. And Deimos, J.T., asked John to go check out my other character, so we're waiting on you.

[Mr.Beyond]

I'm just gonna go with what feels natural for her, but I doubt she'll be staying this way forever. I'm just leaving it open-ended right now, though. At the very least, her fucking things up is a good way to kick-start a dying plot.

Looks like things are back in action, YAY!

[blahblah]

Nice, I like the way the story is going. Idk if this is just me, but the story is moving way more towards a "Part Two" feeling, that will have way different situations and thinkings and stuff in it.

Once this ends, I think it will be sick to go back read through all the posts, even if it will take weeks, just to get the full story in one gulp

[blahblah]

PLEASE READ

I may or may not do something that may or may not affect your storylines badly. If it does though, I can guarantee that it will most likely make it 100x more interesting

[SickSlickMan]

[Mr.Beyond]

Blahblah:

DO NOT KILL ME, first and foremost. Obviously Sniper has plans with me, so that'd fuck him up as well as me.

Secondly, if it IS more interesting, it better be worth it. I had things a little planned out at this point. I mean, I'm flexible, I'll roll with whatever you're doing, but don't like.... grab everyone, stuff us on a plane and ship us off to Tokyo or something. As long as it's worth it though, I'm willing to adapt.

[blahblah]

Way more intense than that way more.
I was writing and finished and then accidentally clicked close window instead of close tab for facebook... so now im starting all over

[SickSlickMan]

And that's why I word document everything I write, then post it on here. Saves me the hassle.

...I'm very, VERY skeptical, but I'll see where this goes.

[Mr.Beyond]

I may have to start doing what you do, SickSlick. I've lost my work a few times.

Also I'm prepared to adapt but too much change too fast may be as bad as inactivity. We just introduced TWO new characters AND had someone pull a face-heel turn....

[blahblah]

FINALLY DONE. Its a marathon to read, but its pretty damn intense

[Mr.Beyond]

OKAY WHAT?

The jumping around confused me. Correct me if I'm wrong, Chris and Jean got sent back in time to the start of the night and now they're trying to stop the night's events from ever happening?

[blahblah]

yea. idk if it should be that it's only Chris and Jean notice the time change, or everybody works together

[SickSlickMan]

NO. NO. NO. NO. NO. NIENTE. NADA. NIEN. NOPE. DOES NOT COMPUTE. NO.

Seriously, dude? I've been winging most of my stuff so far, but I cannot flit between past me and future me. This is not an episode of Heroes, you're not Masi Oka, Adrian is not Milo Ventimiglia, Bri is not Hayden Penettiere, and just...NO, DUDE. Bad idea.

[Mr.Beyond]

One one hand-
LAWL, my character gets to be Hayden Pantierre.

Uh, here's the deal- I don't know if I have the energy to write goodBri AND BadBri- so we can work it like this, how about only Chris and Jean notice the time shift? It can move YOUR plot along really well, and if anyone else feels like helping out with the shift, they can write their character both in past and present. I give you permission to pilot Bri if you want- you can ask me how I'd react to any situation or something and I'll give you a short answer, so you'll have the info to keep her from being OOC but I won't have to write TWO perspectives cause I'm going to have enough trouble keeping up with who I'm sabotaging as it is.

And I don't think this should work as a reset button- I've spent a lot of time building up to Evil!Bri, so for a timeshift to suddenly throw her back to the way she was at the very beginning is pretty tough.

It's an interesting plot twist, don't get me wrong- really cool, I just don't have the time to write into it since I'm in college now. It's the main reason I was thinking of killing Bri off, just because I never have time to write her D: now I'm pretty immersed in the plot, so I can't get out- I don't know if I can handle jumping. It's the same reason I didn't introduce a second character when everyone else brought one in, too much writing.

[blahblah]

No man, you dont have to write your present and future self. This isnt lost or something.

Just write in the past mode, but with all info from present mode. Forget present time. Your back when the bus first broke down now.

I wanted to do this because it was a cool and non-cheesy way to get out of beams creek. Im sick of it now.