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What do you want to see?/What are you sick of?
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knifeman
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Fair enough, even though I'd have to argue that the crossover has not been the highlight of the series. I feel the same way about the TJAprojects. I just couldn't get into it...can anyone tell me why it is so highly regarded?
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knifeman wrote:
Fair enough, even though I'd have to argue that the crossover has not been the highlight of the series. I feel the same way about the TJAprojects. I just couldn't get into it...can anyone tell me why it is so highly regarded?


'Cause it had girls in it.

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'Cause it had girls in it.


Plus, I think it was one of the more early series, so it had less competition.

I kinda agree with you...I don't think diversity makes a story better. I'd like to see more girls in the Slenderverse...as long as they don't pull a series-that-should-not-be-named

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I'm really tired of seeing "So I'm looking back on videos from years ago and just now noticed this thing" and "I just got released from a mental institution and this thing is following me" type ideas. I'd really like something where there is heavy user input, like if the series started out like normal vlogging, like "Today I'm going to do stuff and I'm going to film it" and Slendy appears in the background and the person doesn't even notice. Then when people point it out, they go back and look at it. And then maybe they try to investigate during livestreams (that get recorded and put on youtube), kind of like the "The Sick Thing That Happened To Emily When She Was Younger" segment of V/H/S. And the mystery just gets deeper and deeper and they try to find what this thing is doing and stuff. Also, PLEASE GOD, N O M O R E P R O X I E S . We already have Masky, Hoody, The Observer, HABIT, and whatever other proxies exist. We're all tired of those, no matter how cool your mask looks.

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knifeman
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I kind of disagree with you about how a vlog should progress. I think that having a normal vlog, but slowly incorporating slenderman has already been done a lot (EMH, KeratinGarden, 5zer02, MichaelsCamera, the list goes on...). I like instead to know if something weird is going on (MarbleHornet's beginning for example).

And there are some series that are very user heavy. TheRiddleOfTheTreeMan most notably. I also kind of disagree about proxies too...I mean, generic proxies I don't care for. But if the proxy is a complete badass (the ancient creature from OurGodEvil, and Victor from MyDarkJournal) or has some sort of power or something, it is a character with purpose and depth, if you do it right.

A lot of a good vlog is execution. The phrase "the difference between a trope and a cliche is execution," is kind of what I go by. Tropes are useful tools, but can be cliches if overdone, too generic, or play no part in the story.

That being said, a series doesn't need tropes either. MichaelsCamera and RotTM break most of the trope rules, such as slenderman being immortal, or even physical, not showing the act of violence, and having a supporting character.

Spoiler (Rollover to View):
Michael kills slenderman (and other monsters), shows you cutting himself, and is completely alone. In RotTM, you see Hero pull a stick out of his arm, cut his finger off, and again, has no constant supporting character.


Even breaking those unwrititten rules, the series are fantastic in my eyes, and the eyes of many others.
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veronica2199 wrote:
Also, PLEASE GOD, N O M O R E P R O X I E S . We already have Masky, Hoody, The Observer, HABIT, and whatever other proxies exist. We're all tired of those, no matter how cool your mask looks.

I agree, but I would like to point out that Masky/Hoody are not proxies, neither is HABIT - the general definition of a proxy in the slenderverse is a person who is controlled by/an extension of Slenderman. Masky and Hoody seem to be fighting against Slenderman (technically the Operator seeing as it's MH) and HABIT is an entity separate from Slenderman.

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Lithp
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I've said it before, I'll say it again: Plot details should come from several different sources. When they are coalesced into a single character who just happens to present everything when the time is right, that's just a Deus Ex Machina.

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Tying all mentioned details together seems (from what I can tell) to be important. For example, if you take the time to mention that there character has a favorite pen or something in one entry/video/post, then that pen should come up again later in the story, preferably having some plot importance. Things shouldn't be mentioned once and then simply forgotten.

Additionally, foreshadowing is a great way to improve a story. It shows forethought and planning on the writer's part, and it is nice for the audience, as well.

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If we could have more coughing in video. April Fools.

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JAL13
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fezstudios wrote:
veronica2199 wrote:
Also, PLEASE GOD, N O M O R E P R O X I E S . We already have Masky, Hoody, The Observer, HABIT, and whatever other proxies exist. We're all tired of those, no matter how cool your mask looks.

I agree, but I would like to point out that Masky/Hoody are not proxies, neither is HABIT - the general definition of a proxy in the slenderverse is a person who is controlled by/an extension of Slenderman. Masky and Hoody seem to be fighting against Slenderman (technically the Operator seeing as it's MH) and HABIT is an entity separate from Slenderman.


I like everything that doesn't use things on this list. I'll also address the proxy issues.

Dislike:

- Totheark Wannabes: To begin I see too many people who wish they could make a Totheark video, but instead it ends up looking like a parody, has too much distortion, too much to read, video is too long, and the fear factor is absent. Its okay to be inspired, but find your creative side and make up something new.

- Deus Ex Machina: This can be used in 1 or 2 ways. (1) Your story revolves around the idea from the beginning so using it was pre-planned. (2) You didn't plan out your story well enough and your story has worked itself into a corner. You use this technique to answer all questions without having to explain your story. Its a cheap way to answer things and is a slap in the face to your audience.

Number 2 is used too much. If you're story is actually fairly decent, take the extra step and think of other ways that you can bring your story out of the corner.

- Proxies Dilemma:: This is an odd one. Typically the fan base is responsible for naming the proxies. Marble Hornets never once used the term proxy. There needs to be a fine line between what is a proxy and what is not which some stories (such as TribeTwelve) have not made clear as quoted above.

- Stop Trying To Be Marble Hornets: Please. It's OKAY to be inspired, but please stop trying to be like another series. I can't say much more.

- No Reason for Filming: This can fit in with the above dislike. Why the hell are you filming yourself and others? Don't just say you were filming around for shits and giggles and, "Oh no the Slenderman who we call 'The Organizer' appeared. Yeah we nicknamed him too! Let's film some more just incase we die." I'll shake my head until it falls off or cringe until my jaw snaps.

- Don't Nickname Slenderman: At least don't give him a name that has 4-6 syllables. EX: Operator & Administrator. Is this a trend?

- Time travel: Unless you can find a way to make everything write without Deus Ex Machina don't do it. Watch Back to the Future or play Chrono Trigger for ideas. Not the best examples, but they do it right.

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Lithp
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You know what I think would be neat? If the characters nicknamed the Slenderman & then, after a video or 2, found out that it actually has a name already.

Also, no idea. I am only familiar with The Operator & Administrator. I have no idea why Tribe Twelve did it, & Trosephim basically said that they were trying to personalize their version of Slenderman, which makes sense, because the Slendervlog Mythos was springing up around them.

Since we're all clearly sick of "Proxies," what alternatives do people have in mind? I frequently say that there should be multiple characters who know different things, but I've heard the complaint before that it's difficult to get enough actors. There's always the Found Documents Trope, but I have heard complaints about that, as well.

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The problem isn't even that people overuse the common tropes, it's that they don't use them for a reason. What we need is substance. We need more Slender Man series that pull you into the story and make you feel like there is actually something to them. For instance, applying weight to the story events, building an atmosphere, justifying the usage of the Slender Man by actually taking advantage of what makes him unique... not just standing there in jaw-dropped awe at the fact that you even managed to turn the camera on at all? I used to ask Slender Man series to try to meet the standards that the best ones have set... now I'm just asking that they try to exist!

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The problem isn't even that people overuse the common tropes, it's that they don't use them for a reason. What we need is substance. We need more Slender Man series that pull you into the story and make you feel like there is actually something to them. For instance, applying weight to the story events, building an atmosphere, justifying the usage of the Slender Man by actually taking advantage of what makes him unique... not just standing there in jaw-dropped awe at the fact that you even managed to turn the camera on at all? I used to ask Slender Man series to try to meet the standards that the best ones have set... now I'm just asking that they try to exist!


I agree with you. I don't want to hate on TribeTwelve, but any immersion factor I would have felt was taken away the moment they did time travel and started to add demons and proxies that use pop culture references. The atmosphere was ruined by that and I care about Noah as much as I care about a celebrity's love life.

However, I will say that Marble Hornets gives us little background on the characters so we have less to sympathize with them. We cannot connect easily with some of these Slenderman series characters because their backgrounds aren't clearly stated and the memory loss doesn't help.


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Also, no idea. I am only familiar with The Operator & Administrator. I have no idea why Tribe Twelve did it, & Trosephim basically said that they were trying to personalize their version of Slenderman, which makes sense, because the Slendervlog Mythos was springing up around them.

Since we're all clearly sick of "Proxies," what alternatives do people have in mind? I frequently say that there should be multiple characters who know different things, but I've heard the complaint before that it's difficult to get enough actors. There's always the Found Documents Trope, but I have heard complaints about that, as well.


I wouldn't say I'm sick of the proxies, but I would like to see is some diversity and reasons as to why certain people are more prone to becoming proxies than others. I think there are characters who know different things (at least in Marble Hornets) but we never are able to truly know that! It drives everyone insane. Found documents, journals, books, scrapbooks, etc are okay by me. Although, it would be hard to pull off I would use a website, blog, radio, or a television station.

TO ANYONE MAKING A SLENDER SERIES!

There's more to Slenderman series than distortion, proxies, cameras, and Totheark videos!


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OK, to all the people complaining about "why are you filming this?", I mean, if they weren't, we'd never hear the full story, right? No matter what, the writers have to find SOME kind of excuse for them to be filming.

Has anyone thought about using ACCIDENTAL film? Like how about for some reason, Slender Man's powers makes cameras turn on? Or maybe you could use security camera footage?

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Lithp
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Still think "what can you do besides Proxies" is a good sub-topic.

BEING filmed without one's knowledge would be believable & scary.

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