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amrith777
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Shiawase wrote:
New Tweets

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Looking through the tapes. I'm hoping I'll have something by tomorrow.


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This feels all too familiar.


Edit: Ninja'd. As usual. Mad


Yeah..me too.I thought I would be first finally--'tis but a dream,LOL. Laughing
But I'm thrilled anyway that we may get a new entry soon!! Rock On

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awakeasaurusrex wrote:
This is a topic which I've been thinking about recently but which probably doesn't deserve its own thread... how do people think Season 2 has been handling the whole interactivity thing? Or, rather, MH's pointed lack of interactivity?

I don't think it's necessarily a bad thing that MH isn't really interactive at all - the Hornets want to make an episodic story rather than a full-blown ARG, that's cool with me. But I think making a decision one way or another as to whether you're going to tell a story or run an ARG carries with it a certain responsibility to manage people's expectations accordingly. It would be frustrating for something to appear interactive but actually not be, just as it would be irritating if something terrible happened in an ARG because the creators expected its audience to intervene at some point but hadn't made the situation look interactive enough to prompt the audience to do so.

By and large, I think MH has been better at expectations management in season 2. One thing which irked me about season 1 was that all of the codes in TTA's videos were actually, when you think about it, kind of pointless - when did a message decoded from one of TTA's videos ever prompt Jay to change his mind about something or take a particular course of action? They served no purpose except to throw out pointlessly oblique hints to the audience, and in general if a character in a story is doing something which makes no sense except as a means of slipping information to the audience that's a sign that your story is kind of badly structured.

We haven't had anything like that this season, with one really kind of major exception. That's the code to the safe, which I think a very large number of people here thought was a puzzle which we would collectively have to help Jay solve, but in fact was an insoluble riddle which Jay more or less stumbled into the solution to without any input from us. To be honest, I was pretty disappointed by that aspect of Entry 33, because it meant that a plot element which seemed to suggest "this is something you guys can interact with" was actually never interactive at all.

Obviously it can be kind of hard to predict how the audience will take a particular aspect of a story (and goodness knows we're prone to zoom off down some weird tangents here), but I think it should have been easy to predict that people, on seeing a missing code, would think "puzzle".

Yes, perhaps we should have known from last season that MH wouldn't be very interactive. Except... the existence of the safe was revealed right towards the start of this season, and a new season is inherently an opportunity for the creators to shake up their approach and change the way they do things. I think we can be forgiven for jumping to the conclusion that season 2 might have been a bit more interactive than season 1; I just wish the creators would be a mite more careful about not giving the impression that there's a shiny button for us to push when in fact the button isn't actually wired up to anything.


You've nailed my opinion of this season pretty much on the head; the TTA videos were /fun/, and it was really thrilling to get a message back from him, but in the end the interactivity was toned way down... and having the code randomly crop up in a later video seemed like a letdown. :/ The way that they presented the safe seemed to scream for some input from the audience... why not make it something of a puzzle that people could solve, and even if Jay didn't outright interact with anyone, in the video where it was opened, show that some of that input had been considered by the character and put to use? The audience'd probably go nuts with things like, "I GUESSED IT RIGHT YEAAAAH!" and "OH SNAP, THAT WAS MY NEXT GUESS!" etc. They could even still have had Jay search Jessica's room and have Masky show up, y'know? I'm sure there'd be some way to work it together.

I don't know, for me, that's a minor irk. This season, the regular updates are nice, but it seems like not only are they ignoring interactivity, now they're (to an extent) shunning timeliness. By that I mean, Jay's been MIA since January 18th. Just now he tweets that he's begun to look through the tapes and hopes to have something by tomorrow? What happened to the last three weeks? Is he even aware that three weeks have passed between then and now? Was he on the road all of that time and only now settled in to watch the tapes? I'm beginning to wonder if they're even considering keeping in line with real time at all, or if this is more of an awkwardly paced weekly episode sort of deal.

It's not so much that I'd like to see more updates, but being a little more eloquent with the tweets that Jay uses would be really nice to help the series feel like it's an alternate/parallel/whatever reality. Maybe instead of 'looking through the tapes', 'been on the road, just started the tapes' or 'have been looking through the tapes when I get the chance' would drop some hint of what he's been up to.

Blah, I don't know. I honestly don't mind that Marble Hornets feels like an ARG but isn't actually interactive. It does bug me that they have set up the pretext of running parallel with our timeline in that events and reactions have tended to happen within a reasonable amount of time, but that seems to be more poorly managed this time around. Part of the appeal of the series has been in the suspense between entries: "What's happening right now?!" If that's taken away, a great deal of the scare factor is taken with it. Video and audio tears and stings are great, but the suspension of disbelief gets more difficult and sympathy with the victims just isn't quite there the way it used to be.

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Dray wrote:
awakeasaurusrex wrote:
*My apologies, awakeasaurusrex, this was just looking too huge in preview.*


You've nailed my opinion of this season pretty much on the head; the TTA videos were /fun/, and it was really thrilling to get a message back from him, but in the end the interactivity was toned way down... and having the code randomly crop up in a later video seemed like a letdown. :/ The way that they presented the safe seemed to scream for some input from the audience... why not make it something of a puzzle that people could solve, and even if Jay didn't outright interact with anyone, in the video where it was opened, show that some of that input had been considered by the character and put to use? The audience'd probably go nuts with things like, "I GUESSED IT RIGHT YEAAAAH!" and "OH SNAP, THAT WAS MY NEXT GUESS!" etc. They could even still have had Jay search Jessica's room and have Masky show up, y'know? I'm sure there'd be some way to work it together.

I don't know, for me, that's a minor irk. This season, the regular updates are nice, but it seems like not only are they ignoring interactivity, now they're (to an extent) shunning timeliness. By that I mean, Jay's been MIA since January 18th. Just now he tweets that he's begun to look through the tapes and hopes to have something by tomorrow? What happened to the last three weeks? Is he even aware that three weeks have passed between then and now? Was he on the road all of that time and only now settled in to watch the tapes? I'm beginning to wonder if they're even considering keeping in line with real time at all, or if this is more of an awkwardly paced weekly episode sort of deal.

It's not so much that I'd like to see more updates, but being a little more eloquent with the tweets that Jay uses would be really nice to help the series feel like it's an alternate/parallel/whatever reality. Maybe instead of 'looking through the tapes', 'been on the road, just started the tapes' or 'have been looking through the tapes when I get the chance' would drop some hint of what he's been up to.

Blah, I don't know. I honestly don't mind that Marble Hornets feels like an ARG but isn't actually interactive. It does bug me that they have set up the pretext of running parallel with our timeline in that events and reactions have tended to happen within a reasonable amount of time, but that seems to be more poorly managed this time around. Part of the appeal of the series has been in the suspense between entries: "What's happening right now?!" If that's taken away, a great deal of the scare factor is taken with it. Video and audio tears and stings are great, but the suspension of disbelief gets more difficult and sympathy with the victims just isn't quite there the way it used to be.


This is something that's only started getting to me since season two began and I actually got involved in real time (I hadn't seen the MH videos until after season one ended and all speculation had pretty much come to a halt). I'm very new to ARGs, but they've really piqued my interest (to the point that I'm considering doing a small-scale one as a project for a new media class I'm taking right now). I always saw MH as a sort of 'Internet serial / ARG hybrid' sort of thing, where there was some puzzle-solving and intense speculation along with a more personal storyline. The former elements seem to have been nixed in favor of a more deeply personal storyline.

My wonder is whether or not those elements will return. Like awakeasaurusrex pointed out, starting off season two they had a huge opportunity to set the tone for this season. Although I'm an avid defender of their time gaps, having shot and edited video myself and knowing that it's not something you can just throw together in a few days and have it look good, I'm softening to this view that they could at least immerse us a bit more.

The Twitter is the biggest thing, and Dray you say it more eloquently than I will here, but it's like, why do almost three weeks pass by before he looks at the tapes? Maybe he did look before today, but he could have 'told' us instead of waiting for the release. Maybe even said 'Still on the move, barely have enough time to rest, will try to look at the tapes soon' just so we know 'Oh, okay. He's still running from Masky, THAT'S why we're waiting.' I know Jay's prone to being impersonal having read through the Twitter archives and having watched the damn white-on-black text in the videos, but it's getting to the point where I'm not checking uF daily like I was when I started here because I know nothing's gonna be there.

Not to say I don't stand by MH still, and I think we're gonna be pleasantly surprised by this next video based on Troy's blog posts, but I'm still putting out feelers for other more ARG-y ARGs to keep myself interested (although I'm sad to find I'm either coming in half-way through a chapter or have already missed it entirely... does anyone know of any live ARGs that are worth checking out?). Hopefully now that the last big 'we don't have footage to use' hurdle has finally passed we'll start feeling more immersed. Or Troy will read some of these posts on here and make some big changes to help keep the fans from getting restless. I'm hoping for both, but I'd be pleased just to get the latter for now.

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tl;dr
Puppetmasters, pay more attention to timeline and twitter.

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The twitter thing is a good point. Jay did at least used to interact with people, if only slightly, by doing things like the livetweet of the red tower trip. But even then, he never actually uses twitter to talk to people - just to make general announcements.

You have to wonder why he's bothering. If he's not accepting any help from outsiders in the first place, why advertise his movements to Masky and the Slend*? Why not go dark completely and hope that the obscurity will at least help him to hide?

I don't think the series has ever provided good answers to that. The only reason I can think of for Jay to continue posting to Twitter and YT at this point is so that we, the audience, can see what happens to him - and again, if the only motivation you can scratch together for a character's actions is "because the audience needs to see them do it", that's a pretty clear failure of characterisation.

* Sudden mad thought:
"What are we going to do tonight, Slend?"
"The same thing we do every night, Masky - stand around and stare at Jay!"
They're Masky, they're Masky and the Slend, Slend, Slend, Slend, Slend...

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It'd be interesting, if Jessica was revealed to be more thoroughly implicated, if he were using them to keep in contact with her (or with Alex, for example) and that we are by proxy getting that info, too.

Who knows, maybe they have some reason for posting everything that we're just not seeing yet, beyond the creators "WE ARE TELLING YOU GUYS A STORY, SETTLE DOWN!"

The red tower tweetfest was pretty cool. I have always figured that Jay doesn't communicate directly with the audience with the audience much anymore due to the ramped up levels of paranoia and his fear for his life, and his inability to trust himself, let alone place his trust in others. Still, it would be interesting if something along the same vein were put into use some time this season

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Dray wrote:
The red tower tweetfest was pretty cool. I have always figured that Jay doesn't communicate directly with the audience with the audience much anymore due to the ramped up levels of paranoia and his fear for his life, and his inability to trust himself, let alone place his trust in others. Still, it would be interesting if something along the same vein were put into use some time this season


I've always felt that way about Jay, that it's the paranoia and concern for self-preservation that kept him from interacting with the audience. That said, I'd love to witness one of those tweetfests, be it him going to the house (albeit not a tweet FEST, but at least 'in real time' and keeping the ARG feeling going).

Maybe we'll get an explanation for three weeks gone by... screwing OOG complications, they have to have some IG reason (or at least an excuse) for Jay taking almost a month to look at the tapes. My hope is that Masky made a few more appearances...

awakeasaurusrex wrote:
You have to wonder why he's bothering. If he's not accepting any help from outsiders in the first place, why advertise his movements to Masky and the Slend*? Why not go dark completely and hope that the obscurity will at least help him to hide?

I don't think the series has ever provided good answers to that. The only reason I can think of for Jay to continue posting to Twitter and YT at this point is so that we, the audience, can see what happens to him - and again, if the only motivation you can scratch together for a character's actions is "because the audience needs to see them do it", that's a pretty clear failure of characterisation.


I think I missed your point at first here (I thought you were referring to the Twitter account, and was about to disagree with you) but I see what you mean now. My guess is he doesn't want to be alone. Even at the risk of exposing himself a bit, he doesn't want to deal with this on his own and possibly lose himself (like Alex ultimately did). I wish Jay (IG) would be a bit more willing to connect with the audience, rather than just provide us with updates about himself and the tapes, but maybe that's something we'll see more of later into the season/series...? [hopesanddreams]

awakeasaurusrex wrote:
* Sudden mad thought:
"What are we going to do tonight, Slend?"
"The same thing we do every night, Masky - stand around and stare at Jay!"
They're Masky, they're Masky and the Slend, Slend, Slend, Slend, Slend...


This just made my evening. Amazing.

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Dray wrote:
Who knows, maybe they have some reason for posting everything that we're just not seeing yet, beyond the creators "WE ARE TELLING YOU GUYS A STORY, SETTLE DOWN!"

That's very possible, but that doesn't stop the whole thing hurting my suspension of disbelief until such reasons become apparent.

Honestly, I think Slendyvloggers/Slendybloggers really need to answer two questions in the planning stages of their story or ARG:
- Who is posting this material online?
- Why are they doing it?

EMH and TribeTwelve both go for the obvious answer to question 1 - "the protagonists" - and they both had good answers to question 2: in EMH they were doing a web fitness series with a trollacious Slender Man Easter egg, in TT Noah was memorialising Milo. SEESME (at seesme.tumblr.com) goes for a different answer to question 1 and keeps the answer to the second question mysterious (but you at least get the impression that they've thought about it), and is cool and interesting and different as a result.

You don't have to be consistent about those answers, of course - they can change over the course of the series. More people may start posting videos, the first poster may get killed/Slenderised, and the reasons for posting material may change and evolve - in most cases, in fact, it should as the crisis the characters find themselves in overtakes their original reasons for posting stuff. Both EMH and TT have actually done this really well; the creators interact with the audience just enough to establish that we're helping, even if we're only really helping by being here and offering support. The HYBRIDS might have given up on the web fitness show and Noah's no longer just memorialising Milo, but it still makes sense that they are continuing to give us this material.

What you can't do is straight up ignore those questions altogether. I would also argue that you have to tip your hand and hint at the answers - or at the very least hint that there are answers to be found, because the alternative is fatal to immersion. If it doesn't make sense to the viewer that the protagonist would keep posting videos to their YouTube account of this shit, then immersion is wrecked, even if there's a really good reason for the protagonist to do it which hasn't been disclosed or hinted at yet.

I think this has happened to MH. It made sense at the start - Jay was posting extracts from the Marble Hornets film project that had anomalies in them, and then later also let us in on his continuing investigation. But in completely failing to acknowledge the existence of the audience - or, even worse, never showing that the audience's presence or reaction has affected Jay's behaviour or emotions in any way - it's got to the point where I just don't understand why Jay is posting these things. It can't be to make sure he has the videos there to remind himself of stuff he's forgotten, because by this point he should understand perfectly fucking well that his YouTube account and Twitter are NOT secure - there's no guarantee anything he uploads won't be deleted by whoever's accessing his accounts. And if it really is to ease his loneliness, you'd think he'd say something about it.

If you can't come up with a good answer to "who is posting this, and why are they posting this?" then you may want to reconsider using the typical first person presentation for your story/ARG in the first place - your idea may work better if you just go for a third person perspective like a regular story or something. Not that I'm saying that'd be a good idea for MH - it's gone too far in the first person mode to change horses now - but still, Slendyvlogs and blogs always go for a first-person perspective by default, even when it hurts the story they want to tell.

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These are all really good points; the only thing that I have to add is that, if you're watching MH all the way through from the beginning, you lose that problem. So in a sense, if they're able to finish the series the way they want to, they'll have a good final product that newbies can watch and become excited about.

It's only that, along the way, we are having issues with their in-game time management, and their reasons for posting.

It could just be that these considerations were made, and that the guys creating the work have decided that keeping the audience abreast with things as they happen is secondary to having a finished piece that looks good. Extra content to keep us satisfied about the time between posts could wind up looking cluttered after all is said and done. Leaving it out hurts the audience's immersion while we are going through updates as they happen, but doesn't hurt the immersion of newbies who are watching and reading things that have already happened.

That said, there is a median that I think could be reached. It doesn't involve extra content so much as incorporating quick nods here and there (and they have done this from time to time; in fact, they seem to be going about it more regularly this season! The waiting had been less of an agony for the most part!) -- quick nods to note that time has really passed in game the same way that it has here. Quick nods, like Jay muttering to himself, or getting sassy on twitter... he's showing more characterization, but if those could be hinting towards his motivation, like you were saying, Awakeasaurus, yeah, I think they could appease everyone.

Maybe that's going to come out as a reveal later on all at once... or maybe the guys writing it have decided beforehand that they are more interested in making the final product more cohesive and coherent than in acknowledging the gaps of time between entries at all!

Jay did mention, in #26 I think, that he appreciated the support that he got from everyone, which was a very gratifying moment. We may be simply waiting for something like that to occur again.

For the hell of it, what kinds of things would you like to see if Jay were to show some more interactive tendencies, or motives? Personally, I don't think that it would need to be much. The tone of the series would probably be altered a lot if he suddenly became personable... but I think that characterizing him a little has helped a lot (especially because most of what he says are such quiet asides that people have to be listening for them!)

I think that it would be interesting to see some indication of how he's come to terms with the fact that his accounts seem to have been hackable; what prompts him to think that a simple password change will be enough? Why has he continued to use the same ones (IG, obviously; switching accounts would be very confusing OOG, probably too difficult to keep up!) and what prompts him to continue using them despite considerable danger to himself? I can imagine he's tried going quiet before (after... 23, I think? He lurked for a long freakin' time!) Is he posting to show that he is doing something, to keep Masky or even the Operator away? I'm highly skeptical that he'd simply be posting these videos for our benefit, IG... while it seems like he acknowledges our existence and was grateful for support, is he really relying that heavily on us to want to compromise his safety? (Posting that he and Jessica were leaving, on hindsight, seems like a silly thing to do; 'I'm uploading this just in case something happens to me'... okay... in that case, what? So that you have an online memorial? We as watchers obviously are incapable of actually doing anything...)

Anyways, tl;dr: Yeah, what Awakeasaurusrex said, but with considerations for the final product as a whole, and my own questions and confusions about Jay's MO and weird anti-social-but-broadcasting-to-everyone dichotomy. O_o I mean, seriously.

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Yeah, I really like the little asides from J and the small jokes he's made on Twitter this season. If there's one thing I think Tribe Twelve has done monumentally better than everyone else, it's the Twitter updates. J always seems to disappear for such long stretches of time that it gets a bit odd that he even has a Twitter.

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Looks like Troy's been reading the last few posts!

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onetruepurple wrote:
Looks like Troy's been reading the last few posts!


Just saw his latest Tweet and I was thinking the very same thing. Cool

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Ba ha haha, nice. Didn't think that would happen so quickly.

Not thinking that we're going to get anything today; he'd probably have had a caveat with that last non-reply tweet if he had anything worth sharing!

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Dray wrote:
Ba ha haha, nice. Didn't think that would happen so quickly.

Not thinking that we're going to get anything today; he'd probably have had a caveat with that last non-reply tweet if he had anything worth sharing!


I'd take a small series of "I noticed this one thing in a single-frame" screenshots at this point.

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Has there been any evidence of attacks on anyone while in their cars in MH, yet? O_o I'm wondering why Jay films himself while on the road so much, given we don't see him ever really being attacked!

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