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Sumias · Decorated Joined: 24 Nov 2010 Posts: 271 Location: MD

I want to get into this. I really, really do.

However: the absolutely appalling grammar is keeping me from enjoying it. Sad

This is what I get for being such a writing stickler.

**Posted:** Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:52 pm

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"How do you plan on killing the tall man?"
"With the Hutus."

"I STILL SEE BONKBONK."

Guestguy2187

I have to agree, the grammar is a little off. It's not unbearably bad, but it looks like the sentence are chopped short (and up) on purpose.

**Posted:** Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:00 pm

TheBioGuy

Not sleeping well: common side-effect of Slenderiffic activities.

Also: common side-effect of finding a gross dead deer outside of your house and realizing it happened in the few seconds you weren't looking.

I'm still not sold on the Slenderman-ness of this blog, but I want more!

**Posted:** Wed Dec 01, 2010 8:20 pm

Ol'Slendy

**Posted:** Wed Dec 01, 2010 9:03 pm

Guestguy2187

So, how many points would this have across Slender Bingo?

And this is for sure a Slender blog.

**Posted:** Fri Dec 03, 2010 11:33 pm

ForgetWhatYouWrite

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 12:31 am

Stumblr

Now let's back up, who said there was no gun to be jumped?

Sorry, had to say it. At any rate, he sure took his time with the opener. Sure we could guess with all the drama, but it's not like others where it's BLAM SLENDY IN YOUR FACE!

On a related note, I should poke around more. What's Slender Bingo?

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 2:13 am

Compulsory Basket · Unfettered Joined: 06 Apr 2010 Posts: 362

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 5:33 am

Guestguy2187

We need 0pened here to find out how much of his liver he'll loose.

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 7:30 am

Endless_Serpents · Veteran Joined: 21 Nov 2010 Posts: 108

Awesome, really well written! Not how I expected Slenderman to act at all. Quite a different take while still keeping the fundementals.

So now the protaganist is going to show the police the damage and asked to be kept taps on! Of course! And shows them all the weird drawings and Slendy photograps he finds. Sure they'll just think its a violent stalker at first, but over time...
they'll...
then...ah well maybe not.

Really great blog though. Very Happy

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:06 am

I've become 0pened · Boot Joined: 01 Dec 2010 Posts: 39

Leave for a day to get sloshed and the world of bingo falls into shambles.

I shall update all related bingo cards accordingly. Liver failure determined in milligrams?

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:36 pm

TheMadCat · Boot Joined: 04 Dec 2010 Posts: 19

Maybe we shouldn't put this one through Bingo guys, the writer may not appreciate that.

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:22 pm

Guestguy2187

About the only point it has in bingo is "Hey forum, I 'found' another blog"

I think. 0pened will have ti be the judge.

**Posted:** Sat Dec 04, 2010 11:26 pm

ToTheTwilight · Veteran Joined: 09 Nov 2010 Posts: 145

I've been following this for a bit now, and with the post from yesterday, I think the gun CAN be jumped.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 05, 2010 5:14 pm

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Undertheark · Veteran Joined: 27 Nov 2010 Posts: 140

I saw this thread before and read this guys posts, he's taking a new aspect to Slenderman. A more "aggressive" approach. We shall see.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 05, 2010 5:21 pm