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[DEAD SERIES] No Escape Nightmare

**Posted:** Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:19 pm

Chukwa · Decorated Joined: 09 Oct 2010 Posts: 170

Least Creative ToTheArk ripoff ever.
Haven't looked at anything else, I might check it out when more entries are posted. But for now, seems like a carbon copy of MH's style.

**Posted:** Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:31 pm

Compulsory Basket · Unfettered Joined: 06 Apr 2010 Posts: 362

I had to watch the first video a few times to work out what he was saying. The second is pretty difficult to make out too. When I worked it out, the first one sounded a bit interesting, but the second one quickly became a chore to watch.

The visuals need work - why make a vlog if he's just going to be a talking head, or if all we see is blackness with the occasional glimpse of a car interior? I ended up skipping chunks of the second video, because nothing interesting was happening. It was just dispassionate exposition on a black screen.

**Posted:** Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:26 pm

zbeeblebrox · Unfettered Joined: 10 Nov 2010 Posts: 420

Eh, it took Tribe Twelve about 7 videos to come into its own. These things need time.
Until a series has enough videos that I can count them on two hands, my opinion on it is "pending"

That said, I would recommend that the guy at least script out what he wants to say and what point he hopes to make before rambling into the camera. The second video is 7 minutes and it should have been 2.

**Posted:** Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:29 pm

Ol'Slendy

**Posted:** Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:07 pm

Bartok · Decorated Joined: 06 Oct 2010 Posts: 271

**Posted:** Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:35 pm

Compulsory Basket · Unfettered Joined: 06 Apr 2010 Posts: 362

This does seem to have a story, it's just nigh impossible to tell what the devil it is.

**Posted:** Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:37 pm