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Slender Mystery · Boot Joined: 02 Oct 2010 Posts: 10

[ABANDONED BLOG] Joseph Haelo

**Posted:** Sat Oct 16, 2010 11:31 am

WestRoadSal · Unfettered Joined: 06 Oct 2010 Posts: 326

Seems very amateurish to me....

But hey that's how all of these thing's start off so i'll stick around see how it floats.

**Posted:** Sat Oct 16, 2010 12:48 pm

Dariel Zekka · Boot Joined: 27 Sep 2010 Posts: 44

Rule of thumb when doing a Slender Man story: never ever ever mention other stories unless it is a joke or there is an in-universe reason - a good one - to explain it. Just saying 'I saw this and I remembered it from my childhood' is not good enough.

**Posted:** Mon Oct 18, 2010 2:11 am

blahblah · Unfettered Joined: 04 Aug 2010 Posts: 351

these blogs need to take time on developing character.

**Posted:** Mon Oct 18, 2010 2:35 am

Slender Mystery · Boot Joined: 02 Oct 2010 Posts: 10

Btw, I didn't make it, just found it. And wow.. I found it a few seconds after it started Very Happy

**Posted:** Mon Oct 18, 2010 5:09 am

Dariel Zekka · Boot Joined: 27 Sep 2010 Posts: 44

**Posted:** Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:00 am

Slender Mystery · Boot Joined: 02 Oct 2010 Posts: 10

Wow, that was quick, first "tapping" then apparently a man in a suit? Can't wait for the pictures! Very Happy

**Posted:** Wed Oct 20, 2010 12:39 pm

Unwanted4Murder

This seems pretty lame, no offense to whoever made it. Just kind of seems like somebody's trying to shoe-horn their way in on the Slender Man popularity with no real planning or thought put into it.

**Posted:** Wed Oct 20, 2010 4:56 pm

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KrazehPenguin · Boot Joined: 10 Oct 2010 Posts: 53

Notice how he says a black man in a suit and not a man in a black suit.

**Posted:** Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:05 pm

Das Omega · Unfettered Joined: 07 Oct 2010 Posts: 345

**Posted:** Wed Oct 20, 2010 6:14 pm

Unwanted4Murder

**Posted:** Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:54 am

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lexley · Veteran Joined: 17 Aug 2010 Posts: 118

**Posted:** Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:51 am

Axcelissearching

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AxMxK · Unfettered Joined: 25 Oct 2009 Posts: 327

**Posted:** Fri Oct 22, 2010 12:55 am

Undertheark · Veteran Joined: 27 Nov 2010 Posts: 140

Pacing is horrible, he just jumps in and shouts
"SLENDORMANZ IS HAUNTING MEH AMAAGAWD"
"OMMAGAHD WHO AM I D00D"
"ORLY NAO I REMEMBOR SLENDORMAN"

**Posted:** Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:05 pm