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I saw someone at my school writing this blog.
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PsychoBreath
Greenhorn

Joined: 04 Apr 2011
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 		I saw someone at my school writing this blog.
I was in the library this morning and I saw them typing on what looked like a blogspot account. I was on a computer in the row behind them and I could see just above their head the name of their blog once they had submitted their post. 'Not Another Ghost Story'. They just started it the other day, apparently.

http://notanotherghoststory.blogspot.com/2011/04/my-story.html

PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 10:42 pm
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Hospitaller
Boot


Joined: 21 Mar 2011
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 		Is this other person you?

Come on, you can tell me.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 2:08 am
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PsychoBreath
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Joined: 04 Apr 2011
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 		No. I've seen them around school, but other than that I don't know them. He's a senior and I'm a junior, so I don't have any classes with him, and he doesn't really hang out with anyone other than other seniors.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:24 am
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awakeasaurusrex
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Joined: 12 Oct 2010
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 		Is your name Scott?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:30 am
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AfterHours
Decorated


Joined: 05 Mar 2011
Posts: 160
Location: San Diego, CA

 		The pacing seems off. Like, way off. It kind of dived right into Slender Man, which if done correctly could work, but here it just feels out of place.

Quote:
At first glance the puddle looked like mud. But it wasn't. It was actually blood, but not normal blood. I don't know how I can explain it. It was like dry blood, but it wasn't dry. It had that dark red-brown color but it was still a liquid. I knew that it was blood even though it was so different from normal blood.


This is just so... repetitive.

The rest of the dreams seem OK, so that's good. I kind of liked the whole "four" thing. Now, this is the only thing that just doesn't make sense: "Don't get involved in this. If others find out he's real... I think he'll go after them too. He's probably already after you too." If you don't want *him* to go after others, why make a blog, that people will read, about *him*?

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distilled
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Location: Midlands, UK
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Something was pouring from his mouth. He examined his sleeve. Blood? Blood. Crimson, copper-smelling blood. His blood. Blood. Blood. Blood. And bits of sick.



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dfw
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Joined: 12 Feb 2011
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Location: NC

 		Guys guys, this is obviously a crossover of Slenderman and Day of All the Blood

Spoiler (Rollover to View):
They're going to end the story by sending the bloody slenderman into space. AND THE SCARIEST PART IS THAT THE SLENDERMAN IS YOU (OR HE IS A LADY IF YOU ARE A LADY).


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Agent Tobias
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dfw wrote:
Guys guys, this is obviously a crossover of Slenderman and Day of All the Blood

Spoiler (Rollover to View):
They're going to end the story by sending the bloody slenderman into space. AND THE SCARIEST PART IS THAT THE SLENDERMAN IS YOU (OR HE IS A LADY IF YOU ARE A LADY).


Did I forget this happened?

Anyway, this blog isn't all that bad, it's just...weird. I think it's mainly the pace that bugs me. In the first post, it starts out a little bit like a personal blog, then SUDDENLY SLONDORZ. A little quick...

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dfw
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Agent Tobias wrote:

Did I forget this happened?

Why yes. Yes you did.

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PsychoBreath
Greenhorn

Joined: 04 Apr 2011
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awakeasaurusrex wrote:
Is your name Scott?

Yeah. I have no idea how he was able to find out my name or that it was me.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:32 pm
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awakeasaurusrex
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Joined: 12 Oct 2010
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 		That's because HE IS YOU (plot twist!!!).

PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:06 pm
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PsychoBreath
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 		Anyone know Chinese? His latest post is just a sentence in Chinese, and it's an image so I can't post it into Google Translate.

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Nimbus
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Location: Bumfuck, Egypt - Florida

 		The truth here is so obvious, it hurts. Confused
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