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[DEAD SERIES] Shaun Torrence
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[DEAD SERIES] Shaun Torrence

Why Slendy? Why do you hate college kids SO MUCH?!

http://www.youtube.com/channel/UC1CAGwVaw_ABAEOqtoDui5g

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Above average start

I'm currently going through the videos posted and have to say that I do like the start.

I'm half way through the "Damn It" video and have to say I've already found my new favorite Slendy quote.

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While becoming increasingly worried with the stuff found in the package, Shaun finally gets the nerve to check what's on the CD.

"It's times like these that I'm glad I have a Mac"...especially when slendy/potential TTA/potential HABIT is threatening to kill you. LOL


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That's it, I'm up to date on the episodes, and apart from getting the impression that it's a diluted version of EMH...

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in fact Shaun hints at it being in the same universe


... I didn't think it was all that bad.

The acting was a little scratchy from Shaun and I think he gave a lot away too soon, but I'd be interested to see where this goes.

One thing that worries me, is that he's asking for help but seems to be only asking for help via YouTube. In my opinion, I think he needs to open up further method's of interaction (i.e. twitter) so that he can post more information. (This may also help in resolving the issue of cramming so much information into the videos...sometimes less is more!)

In fact I may suggest that to him on YouTube.

But, as I said before, seems he's built a sturdy platform on which to build a potentially interesting slendyARG... I'm looking forward to further entries.

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I agree, it does seem a little similar to EMH, but I think it's unfair to write it off as a knockoff because he used the "it was a joke" bit. I think it's pretty good, actually. I like the guy's acting – he's convincing and likable enough. I'm interested in seeing where the plot goes from here.
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YouTube link is broken.
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Kashiratama wrote:
YouTube link is broken.


Seems to be getting me through just fine... here it is again.

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It's giving me an invalid user ID error. It's probably the site's(YouTube) fault, not yours. :/
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Check Video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=QyE7PTD45MI

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Proxies, proxies everywhere!

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That's definitely more involved than the stereotypical early proxy videos. Someone's looking for a promotion in Slendy's ranks.
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Probable cause likes trying people upstage Coyote likes think.

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DaveBGood wrote:


One thing that worries me, is that he's asking for help but seems to be only asking for help via YouTube. In my opinion, I think he needs to open up further method's of interaction (i.e. twitter) so that he can post more information. (This may also help in resolving the issue of cramming so much information into the videos...sometimes less is more!)

In fact I may suggest that to him on YouTube.


He has rectified that situation

Facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100003729804312
Twitter: https://twitter.com/#!/ShaunTorrence

I feel bad for him. I want to give him a hug... and some coffee.

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Likes There.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=nLQmfSM6TgU

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Scottums wrote:
DaveBGood wrote:


One thing that worries me, is that he's asking for help but seems to be only asking for help via YouTube. In my opinion, I think he needs to open up further method's of interaction (i.e. twitter) so that he can post more information. (This may also help in resolving the issue of cramming so much information into the videos...sometimes less is more!)

In fact I may suggest that to him on YouTube.


He has rectified that situation

Facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100003729804312
Twitter: https://twitter.com/#!/ShaunTorrence

I feel bad for him. I want to give him a hug... and some coffee.


That'll help with things!

I was a little curious about him having liked MH and EMH linked to his FB page. It might be worth while for him to establish if these two things are "in-game". Just to establish legitimacy else otherwise it becomes a little confusing.

I'm loving the proxy video. A nice way to introduce a new character.

I think we really need to hear his friend's side of events of the night in the "I made a mistake" video, it should help piece things together.

I'm really starting to enjoy this series....plus it's good that there are regular updates, keeps me and my short attention span gripped!!! Smile

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Am I mistaken but is the proxy's look based on an anime character?

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