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SlenderA · Kilroy Joined: 16 Jun 2011 Posts: 2

[ABANDONED BLOG] Dolphin Inn Chronicles

**Posted:** Fri Jun 17, 2011 2:00 am

OmniMan · Decorated Joined: 09 Jun 2010 Posts: 199 Location: Germany

**Posted:** Fri Jun 17, 2011 2:49 am

wtfkirk · Decorated Joined: 14 Apr 2011 Posts: 243

This is a good read.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 17, 2011 4:55 am

MichaelDj54 · Decorated Joined: 17 Sep 2010 Posts: 216

Won't lie, it's not bad.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 17, 2011 6:23 am

TrailheadTroll · Boot Joined: 30 Apr 2011 Posts: 67

Well, yeah. With my last breath before I starve to death, I'll give it this here:

*dies*

**Posted:** Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:13 am

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LaurenB

I'm actually enjoying this and the incorporation of children into it.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 17, 2011 1:43 pm

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taylortexas · Veteran Joined: 13 Jun 2011 Posts: 119

I like this a lot! It's a fresh idea in the land of Slenderblogs, and is able to put a new spin on things we've seen before. I especially like

**Posted:** Fri Jun 17, 2011 2:58 pm

taylortexas · Veteran Joined: 13 Jun 2011 Posts: 119

I apologize for the double post, but we've got an update.

**Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2011 4:09 pm

TheFallenenvoy · Entrenched Joined: 08 Apr 2011 Posts: 847

Bookmarked.

**Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2011 5:04 pm

Lewa

Hmm. It isn't bad, and it has some neat new ideas.
But I have some nit-picking. The writing style is all fancy for both characters, with no explanation, and it distracts me. Also, I'm unsure why Joseph automatically calls Slendy a being instead of a man even based on the first carving. And I didn't like the sudden vulgarity, though that is more realistic than the fancy stuff.

**Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2011 6:47 pm

slendywasphone · Unfettered Joined: 19 Jun 2011 Posts: 327

I gotta say, I was a little bit hysterical about reading this, seeing the name, but it turned out to be a good read

**Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2011 7:13 pm

calfI · Kilroy Joined: 19 Jun 2011 Posts: 1

opps

ChildOfAtom

Please tell me that isn't an in-character post.

Go read this please:
http://forums.unfiction.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=32573

**Posted:** Sun Jun 19, 2011 11:54 pm

taylortexas · Veteran Joined: 13 Jun 2011 Posts: 119

Update.

**Posted:** Mon Jul 04, 2011 4:35 pm

GameGodOfAll · Unfettered Joined: 25 Feb 2011 Posts: 705

*reads from start*

Hmm this could be good.

*sees OPERATOR symbol*

FFFFFFFFFFFF!

Sorry, but that is a big pet peeve of mine.

**Posted:** Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:15 am