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TJ and Amy Film Projects

**Posted:** Wed Apr 06, 2011 6:16 pm

Punk V · Veteran Joined: 29 Nov 2010 Posts: 118

So I watched all of these, and I have to say they set the atmosphere and story up for something good. Not to mention the makeup was good quality. I really hope this wasn't just a 4 episode thing because this could probably go somewhere.

**Posted:** Sat Apr 09, 2011 1:59 pm

J.Fawkes · Veteran Joined: 06 Jan 2011 Posts: 147 Location: Earth

I really like the premise and the pacing to this. I hope this isn't all that you have to offer. It looks like it's well produced.

I like the characters. Both of you are certainly very attractive, and the way you play your characters is very interesting. I don't know if TJ and Amy are your real names, but you established yourselves very well very quickly, which is always good, it leaves more room for story.

My only complaint is that your camerawork needs some improvement. It was mostly the lighting, which I can understand how that can't really be helped, but it made just about every episode hard to watch because I wasn't seeing what you were seeing.

I've subscribed though, definitely looking forward to more.

**Posted:** Sat Apr 09, 2011 3:00 pm

Demongel · Unfettered Joined: 12 Dec 2009 Posts: 500

Subscribed.

**Posted:** Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:56 pm

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This really isn't too bad. It's a lot better than most of the poorly produced series that get put up every week.
I do like you two as characters; you show yourselves naturally without trying to force personalities that don't work. I'm also glad that you don't go overboard much on the distortion effects; something I've noticed that newly surfacing series often suffer from. Oh, and the makeup was nice too.

Although the lighting worked well in some parts, it could use improvement in the future. (I think you mentioned in the cemetery that you wanted to use better lighting equipment for your camera) My main complaint is that most of the scares consisted of you saying "Run!" while the screen was too distorted that I couldn't tell if Slenderman was even there or not. I know this doesn't have the highest production, but I would like to see Slendy more clearly.

I think you can do a good job if you continue.
As a warning though, if you're not already aware, it's against unfiction rules to continue posting in this (your own) thread.

**Posted:** Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:45 pm

Mira · Unfettered Joined: 10 Aug 2010 Posts: 718

Aw yeah, finally some kick ass ladies! I hope you guys keep at it!

**Posted:** Sun Apr 10, 2011 12:43 am

Ouroborus · Unfictologist Joined: 13 Jan 2008 Posts: 1352

**Posted:** Sun Apr 10, 2011 1:05 am

katsieb · Veteran Joined: 27 Feb 2011 Posts: 77 Location: Australia

I have subscribed but due to the darkness of the videos I am not sure if we are supposed to have seen Slender Man yet. I really do like the characters though and am interested to see where this goes.

**Posted:** Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:06 am

VoidCaste · Decorated Joined: 22 Feb 2011 Posts: 251

Really nice to see some female leads in a slender-story, I think. Good job so far subscribed

**Posted:** Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:22 am

katsieb · Veteran Joined: 27 Feb 2011 Posts: 77 Location: Australia

Agreed good to see female leads! Plus the burn(?) makeup was A+. I am just assuming that is where Slendy has grabbed her. Great effect.

**Posted:** Sun Apr 10, 2011 2:44 am

BoatWithAHoleInIt · Decorated Joined: 27 Feb 2011 Posts: 268

I'm liking it! Subb'd.

**Posted:** Sun Apr 10, 2011 11:31 am

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