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Lucas Auraelius · Boot Joined: 26 Jul 2012 Posts: 66 Location: Connecticut

[ABANDONED SERIES] TheEyeofEnvy

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Asherah

This is adorable! I can't tell that it's a slenderseries yet, but it seems really realistic and interesting. A slendervlog from the POV of kids is awesome!

**Posted:** Sat Aug 18, 2012 2:26 pm

Rabadash · Veteran Joined: 17 Feb 2011 Posts: 70

Why would somebody take time out of their day to hate on a 10 year old 's series in the comments? That guy needs a life.

Also, how did you find this?

**Posted:** Sat Aug 18, 2012 8:13 pm

Lucas Auraelius · Boot Joined: 26 Jul 2012 Posts: 66 Location: Connecticut

Some guy posted on the then-newest video in my series, saying:

**Posted:** Sat Aug 18, 2012 11:27 pm

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Little_Socrates · Boot Joined: 02 Aug 2012 Posts: 30

Is it bad that I think these kids might have the most chemistry of all the Slenderseries protagonists?

Already super-excited, tone seems like a cleaner "Super 8," which was one of my absolute favorite movies last year. I imagine a parent or older sibling is helping them to edit the videos and stuff, but so far it's really good.

**Posted:** Sun Aug 19, 2012 12:50 pm

Rabadash · Veteran Joined: 17 Feb 2011 Posts: 70

**Posted:** Sun Aug 19, 2012 1:00 pm

Ithilwen22

You know, for kids, this is pretty decent. "Since we're near a church, maybe God will forgive us." That line made lol. XD

I'll watch the other two a little later, but I liked this intro.

I think that guy on the comments is just your average troll. Who decides to pick on children. O_o

**Posted:** Sun Aug 19, 2012 2:34 pm

Lucas Auraelius · Boot Joined: 26 Jul 2012 Posts: 66 Location: Connecticut

I feel like pointing them to a video editing program though. That watermark in the second video made me cringe.

**Posted:** Sun Aug 19, 2012 6:09 pm

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HunterEris · Unfettered Joined: 10 Feb 2011 Posts: 600

Eh, not bad for kids, but they lost me after the first video.

The second video is a little bit boring and the darkness in it is distracting. The third video has the camera going all over the place and it's far too quiet to hear properly.

Plus the operator symbol. I have no problem with symbols being used so long as they are fairly unique and make sense within the story, but the operator symbol is not the way to go.

Advice I'd give to the creators is this: Practice editing a bit more, make sure the camera is pointing in the right direction, and make a unique symbol (if you want it to mean something, else just have no symbol at all). Practice and try again, I'd say, but I will keep an eye on this to see if it improves.

Also, no one has mentioned that they have a twitter account, which is linked on their channel page.

**Posted:** Sun Aug 19, 2012 8:45 pm

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