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[DEAD SERIES] Watching Whispers
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Another_Creator
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 		[DEAD SERIES] Watching Whispers
Please use this playlist to watch the series:
http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLCA44A8105A94E7AC&feature=plcp

So I came across this series on SN and it was meh at first, but I talked it out with the creator and things were reworked. Honestly, I have never come across a person more open to constructive criticism and improvement. I think that this series is definitely headed in the right direction.

Before it is brought up I will already inform the forum that the creator, Zetto, was heavily influenced by MH. That reflects in the early stages of this series, but he has plans to go in an entirely different direction.

(Storyline)

Leo is concerned about his friend Steve. Leo and Steve were working on a short film project for Steve's college class when Steve just stopped showing up to work on it. Three months have passed and Leo has not been able to reach him or any of his roommates. Tired of waiting Leo feels that it is time to go and find out what has happened to his friend.

Here is the first sighting of the Slender Man:



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Here is the latest upload:



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PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2012 11:07 am
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Another_Creator
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And Slender Man is all like "I'll be taking that, thank you!"

PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2012 8:11 pm
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HunterEris
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 		Where to start? Let us see...

1: How many actors are in this series? Entry 2 was supposed to be Steve, correct? Yet it appears as though it is Leo. Just something that has me a little confused. Seems to have been corrected for later Entries.

2: Yes, yes, Marble Hornets, moving on. Glad it's moving away from that, but he could have used a completely different mask design.

3: The latest Entry has a noticeable downgrade in video quality. What happened there?

4: I like the star symbol on the tin.

5: No offence to the guy, but that hair. I've never been a fan of that style. Please note that this comment will not effect whether I watch or not. The guy is free to have whatever hair he chooses. But I still had to say it because I'm a bad person.

Overall, I'd say it's a bit meh so far, but (exluding that quality drop in Entry Cool it seems to be improving slowly. I'll keep my eye on this to see where it goes but I won't be subscribing just yet. Basically, what I'm saying to the creator is: "Convince me. Keep trying and I'm sure you can."

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