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Keegah · Boot Joined: 15 Mar 2012 Posts: 30

Looks like two white shoes on my end.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:45 am

Toadbert · Decorated Joined: 11 Mar 2012 Posts: 292

I really liked this one. The character interaction/development was nice and made up for lack of developments. Tim pretty much summed up what people here seem to gripe about Jay nicely.

Another in game mention to the youtube channel was really cool as well.

Anyone else notice the bug at 4:00?

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:51 am

Zurtrinik · Boot Joined: 11 Jun 2012 Posts: 29

My money is on Tim goes home and in his anger trashes his place, but then finds the mask and either goes masky or goes back to Jay and demands that Jay help him figure out how to make him stop blacking out.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 2:53 am

aidansean · Unfettered Joined: 03 Mar 2012 Posts: 495

Tim: Tonight? Not last week when you dragged me out to the hospital...?

Tim just lost two weeks. Egads.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:03 am

Geneaux486 · I Have No Life Joined: 17 Mar 2011 Posts: 2423

Amazing entry! Still feel bad for Jay though. He films himself because otherwise he'd be like Tim and have no idea what's going on, and he pursues the issue because he seems to be the only one out of all of them to realize that it isn't simply going to go away on its own. Tim's situation sucks, sure, but Jay's lost his home, his memory, and his past life trying to get to the bottom of a situation that he may not have even been a part of before he watched Alex's old tapes. Hopefully his rational doesn't waver, he may very well still be able to save Jessica, maybe even Brian and the rest.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:12 am

mokie · Unfettered Joined: 22 Mar 2011 Posts: 374

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:27 am

Zebez · Unfettered Joined: 17 Jul 2011 Posts: 618

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:38 am

Stanislav

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:57 am

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mokie · Unfettered Joined: 22 Mar 2011 Posts: 374

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:04 am

Nex

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:17 am

pravado · Unfictologist Joined: 22 Apr 2011 Posts: 1833

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:29 am

Xman · Decorated Joined: 15 Mar 2011 Posts: 280

This entry kind of bummed me out a little bit. I loved it as an entry, but it left me feeling sort of like "how is this going to progress now?"

I hope Tim realizes that Jay isn't entirely to blame here.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:31 am

Jamocha101

I usually read the entire entry thread before I comment on it, but I can't resist right now.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:42 am

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--Tom Lehrer.

Yuki · Decorated Joined: 17 Apr 2011 Posts: 225

Er... Tim was flat-out wrong; Jessica and Jay talked more than twice, didn't they? Before the hotel, then the few times after the hotel.

More annoyingly to me, why didn't Jay bring up the fact that Tim appeared after Jessica disappeared, or that it had seemed like Tim was trying to hurt him when he went after Alex?

Great entry, plot-wise, but Jay didn't even stand up for himself when he knows Tim's been there. I really like Tim calling Jay out for solely recording things, although it's not like Jay can actually do much without knowing anything. If he had, he would've gone after Timasky maliciously far before finding out Alex was the bad guy.

I really don't want Jay to be the bad guy. Maybe an unwitting pawn, and maybe some stuff behind the scenes is done because of him/by him, but pulling a complete Unreliable Narrator on us would be a cop-out, in my opinion.

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:49 am

Keegah · Boot Joined: 15 Mar 2012 Posts: 30

**Posted:** Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:59 am