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[KrisTrauma]

[ABANDONED SERIES] Brandon Moore

[Rabbit-Recycle]

I think I'll give this series a shot, this first episode seemed rather promising. What I find nice is that it starts off fast, I'm so used to seeing a series start with a crawl usually under the pretense of "I'm doing this for a school project" or "Oh I just think I'll vlog for fun". So seeing something pick up this quickly is nice. I hope they can keep it up.

[7brokenboundaries]

I like this. It's definitely a quick start, like rabbit-recycle said, which is pretty refreshing every once in a while. I'll follow this and see where it goes.

[Lumine]

Phenom, you always said the verse' needed more diversity, lol.

But they really set a good tone for this video, like they were partially in disbelief of themselves until the creature attacked. The distortion was realistic, as most video defects happen at certain intervals/areas of real film: The beginning or end.

[punxtr]

I like the characters enough, and hope for another video soon.

[Lumine]

The character development is going nicely. They are bringing new distortion to the plate too. Though a few dialogue and lines could've been delivered better most of the dialogue is clever. If this is improv, I'll be shocked.

[KrisTrauma]

As I've said before, this really ain't bad. It's shaping out to be very good. Still no sign of slendy but

[Rabbit-Recycle]

Still really impressed with how well this is going so far. There are a few slight hiccups in the dialog but otherwise everything is essentially streamlined and engaging.

[7brokenboundaries]

well I'm pleasantly surprised by this series so far. Jumping straight into the action was a nice turn of events, and all of the dialogue and stuff happening actually keeps me constantly interested and seems all to be pretty important, no filler. they've really developed the characters well considering this only the second video, too

[Lumine]

What do you think the red monster is?

[Phenom]

[HunterEris]

Seems interesting so far. Couple more good videos and I'll subscribe.

[Nathan]

I really like this so far, there is a few awkward moments but I enjoy it.

[7brokenboundaries]

new video! I've really been enjoying this series (as little as there has been) and this video was pretty good. my only real gripe with it is their reactions to being chased by the red faced thing. they are way too chill about it, i mean the cameraman stops and tries to fix his camera when its right behind him, and they clearly knew of its presence.

this video is also severely lacking in context, i would think intentionally. it seems that they went into this place looking for their friend who was taken by the red faced thing, so it's probably the same location as is seen in event 1. they seem to have no recollection of the time or their location, though, having lost a considerable gap of time (evidence toward slenderness?). From the sound of things they did find who they were looking for, although he clearly isn't with them. and, the cameraman (don't know their names quite yet) seemed to incapacitate, or possible even kill, the red thing. I'm wondering if they've had more encounters with it in between this and the second video.

also, in the beginning of the video, as static on a black background comes in intermittently, there is a web address in the lower lefthand corner. it looks like it says www.alunablne.com but that leads nowhere.

[Lumine]

Holy shit.


That is all I can truly say to this episode. Holy shit. This was the second time I've ever seen something that isn't the slenderman attacking someone, that scares me. The first being Vinny and the Rake.