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DrStevzious117 · Unfettered Joined: 18 Sep 2012 Posts: 316

[DEAD SERIES] CantSleep0

**Posted:** Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:10 pm

OhWhatProvidence

Uhm...uh...uhm....

Okay, only one video in. Is this supposed to be a parody? This is, really pretty ridiculous, IMO. Stealing direct screencaps/photos from other creator's works... "I'm not saying I saw the slender man, but I have what's called slender sickness" and it just gets worse from there...

Nice try, I think?

I just... okay. I don't understand this at all. Maybe when I watch the other videos?

....maybe?

The texting is...new, but the rainbow distortion is just... no.

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rand__althor · Unfettered Joined: 05 Apr 2011 Posts: 745

Well, that was certainly a thing.

Also, haha, Tiny Tim.

**Posted:** Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:18 pm

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OhWhatProvidence

Within just four episodes, the unFiction SlenderBingo is about 80% filled up. Nice.

Okay, I'm being a bit mean, sorry. But it is pretty cliche...Like, a lot. Needs something fresh, a hook to make it stand out. (or more than one)

**Posted:** Mon Nov 12, 2012 11:23 pm

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DrStevzious117 · Unfettered Joined: 18 Sep 2012 Posts: 316

It is pretty cliche, you're right about that. There's just something about this one I kinda like. It's not great, but it's okay.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 13, 2012 8:37 am

Fotzepolitic

**Posted:** Tue Nov 13, 2012 12:59 pm

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OhWhatProvidence

http://forums.unfiction.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=30941

There's a clear (no xs) sheet somewhere, but I forgot where.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 13, 2012 1:51 pm

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Fotzepolitic

**Posted:** Tue Nov 13, 2012 3:06 pm

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Oscar Langley · Unfettered Joined: 14 Aug 2010 Posts: 322

I had to literally facepalm at the intro video.
The actual videos are not as b......nope. They're pretty bad too.

There isn't really anything original (though thinking he might be his own proxxy is a nice touch, I suppose). Showing Symptoms, in particular, is just a remake of scenes from MH. I feel like it's just one of those things where somebody wanted to make a Slendervlog to make a Slendervlog. Unless it's a parody, judging from the last video. In which case it still needs to work on being funny, because the rest of the videos just looked bad-bad.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 13, 2012 6:02 pm

Seraphim · Decorated Joined: 21 Jun 2011 Posts: 239

I feel like we need to come up with a higher standard than "the grammar's okay" for our slendervlogs.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 13, 2012 6:11 pm

thatbeastaroundthecorner

New Video

**Posted:** Sun Nov 25, 2012 7:31 pm