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LouMac

Boston Meet Haiku

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 2:25 pm

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johnny5

I honestly Feel
I've witnessed the worst Haiku
Conceived by mankind.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 4:28 pm

krystyn

Your commentary
has been considered, johnny
hi, circular file!

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 4:44 pm

INCyr

I have to wonder
If the worst haiku was mine
or someone else's

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 4:55 pm

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johnny5

I fully admit
To having contributed
To the detritus.

And lest I forget
Before someone gets upset
It is all in fun

Razz

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 5:00 pm

INCyr

No offense taken
I know my haikus are bad
I don't mind at all

Curiosity
Made me ask if it was mine
Rheitoriclly

Sorry for that last
spelling, I know it's awful
too lazy to check

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 5:06 pm

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johnny5

Krystyn the subject,
not as harsh a critic, she
passes no judgement.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 5:20 pm

CoffeeJedi

the haiku's true form
is more than it's sylables
it is as follows:

the subject comes first
then a statement about it
finally, insight

Matt knows he's picky
but a good 'ku is beauty
too much time at work

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 5:44 pm

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INCyr

thanks, coffeejedi
instruction is always good
my haiku's improve

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 5:49 pm

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angelo · Unfettered Joined: 08 Sep 2004 Posts: 694

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 6:27 pm

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ThaJinx · Unfettered Joined: 24 Oct 2004 Posts: 430

Well Johnny couldn't
have been talking about mine.
It rocks way too hard.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 9:12 pm

archon · Decorated Joined: 24 Aug 2004 Posts: 250

ARG, advertisement
That's the name of I Love Bees
It was for Xbox

My lack of cool disc
Is emptiness in my soul
Please, 'O Lords, fill me

My whining was a joke, it's just that sarcasm doesn't play well online.
You should grab an Xbox and Halo 2 (and a LIVE subscription) if you get the chance, it's really fun. I got my single player fix from Half Life 2, too, but nothing beats Halo 2 multiplayer.

**Posted:** Tue Nov 30, 2004 10:03 pm

thebruce

**Posted:** Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:56 am

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angelo · Unfettered Joined: 08 Sep 2004 Posts: 694

**Posted:** Wed Dec 01, 2004 1:12 am

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Shad0

**Posted:** Wed Dec 01, 2004 2:07 am

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