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[Trynian]

Looks good, thebruce, but you can put "gone" up with the Sleeping Princess story, at the end.

[meta]

the Sleeping Princess was {gone}

[thebruce]

[danteGA]

[spunkinator]

edit: never mind

[CoffeeJedi]

[midas777]

chaotic mind

[meta]

/I promise /

you need to move that to the the flea's section

[Sunyavadin]

This thread's moving fast. I probably can't keep up, but at least we can compare results.

/ Fluorescent lights. Smell of formaldehyde. Still// feel the new implants, itchy little bumps along my spine.// Eggs waiting // to hatch. Gross. Try not to think about it./

/ Into lab 7. Wait. Tongue depressors, swabsticks // monitors. Wait. Happy birthday to me, happy birthday to—Footsteps in the hall/

/ Door swings open. It's her. Coffee stains on labcoat. She gives me the queenly smile. Calls me// by name not number. Why not? She took my name away.// She owns it now, can use it if she likes. Tactical option reflex: unarmed;// swabstick through the eye; monitor wire// garrote. Linger there. /

/Happy birthday to me, happy birthday to- Lab day, honey. But can't I have a slice // of- Later. This will just take a few minutes. /

/ More footsteps. Door opens and nurse comes in, steel tray rattling with// needles and scalpels and little evil scissors with hooked blades. // Halsey picks up a needle. Tests the plunger. Something yellow sprays out. Venom colored. // Don't worry, she says. The queenly smile. This will hardly hurt a bit./

/The Sleeping Princess lay in // the deepest chamber//of the dungeon //in a coffin of glass /

/ But when the Widow opened the casket's lid// she saw the glass was //cracked, // and though ancient prophecy foretold that only // the kiss //of a handsome prince could wake//her, the Sleeping Princess was //gone. /

[midas777]

completion of the text?

[chaotic_mind]

/I'm sorry I'm sorry /
{/I promise/}
/it won't /
/your majesty /

And I'm probably tardy with, but here it is anyway.

Luke P.

[midas777]

Great compilation

[thebruce]

just listened to the call again, and I'm 99% sure the order on the wiki page is correct now... it's your majesty, it won't, no please, no

[spunkinator]

[Smoke]

We could just send several versions of the stories.