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Jordan · Entrenched Joined: 19 Oct 2011 Posts: 845

A little creative exercise for everyone....

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:50 am

TheSupremeFace · Unfettered Joined: 24 Apr 2013 Posts: 306

Final scene:

*everyone is dead except for Tim and TO*

Tim: I KNOW YOUR SECRET
TO: *dafuq'd*
TIM: Armani suits suck
TO: *melts away*

TTA: *farts*

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 5:33 am

SpookyCron · Boot Joined: 15 Aug 2013 Posts: 17

The sun has gone down in Rosswood park. Jay has been chasing Tim for an hour now and losing more and more distance. Finally Jay stops for a breath, unable to see Tim now. His flashlight goes out and he is unable to see. He breaths heavy, anxiety in his voice. "Tim!....." A long pause before Jay hears a twig snap in the darkness.

His flashlight lights back up and he see's that he is completely surrounded. All around him are people wearing strange masks of varied shapes and qualities. Closest to him are the obvious masked silhouettes of Alex and Jessica.

Jay shudders and panics as he sees the masks through the trees for as far as he can see. His heart pounds and he starts to cough. He starts to feel that sickening feeling when He is near.

The figures are silent until one starts to hum. The rest of the figures start to join in the hum. The whole woods is filled with the hum then they start to sing Cara Mia Addio. Jay is startled by the peaceful melody, he is confused. Is this my fate? Is this when I die? The masks keep singing and begin to open a path just wide enough for Jay to walk through. He instantly takes the opportunity to escape, running as hard and as fast as he can while the masks keep parting.

The army keeps their melody and barely move as they lead Jay back to his car. When he finally see's where his destination is he turns around to look back at the horde, slightly confused. He see's Masky in front of the group singing like the rest of the masks.

The song finally stops and masky raises one hand and waves a farewell.

Jay gets into his car and leaves, never looking back.

EDIT:

After Jay leaves, Rapper's Delight starts to play and Slender appears, dancing.

The dance party has begun.

As the proxies join Slendy in his dance, the camera obnoxiously pans to Adam Sandler who starts rapping.

We all punch our computer monitors and kill ourselves together.

THE END

searchanddestroy · Veteran Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 71

I've always thought that it would be cool if it it turned out TO was actually trying to protect jay. At this point it would be hard to spin it but It would've worked as if Alex was a bad guy before all this happened. There's a theory that the operator wasn't a criminal killed in the trials in rosswood (entry 38 ) but rather a personification of the forest itself. There's a whole theory about that in the wiki page. So he punishes people who have done heinous crimes just like the forest once has many years ago. The ending would consist of the operator appearing to jay but this time without causing the sickness. Jay becomes intrigued and notices hoody walk next to TO. Hoody speaks and says something along the lines of "I am the voice of the operator" and speaks for it. THe operator waves his hand in a follow me motion and hoody tells the jay to come with them if he wants answers. Jay walks forward and the operator transports them back in time to a meadow in rosswood park. There's a person tied to a tree surrounded by people dressed in clothing from the 1800s. "don't worry they can't see us" says hoody "just listen". One of the people speaks "Alex krailie, you have been sentenced to death for the murder and rape of (you get the picture). We have decided death by stretching from a blessed tree for your fate". Hoody says,"somehow he was reborn to our time. So the spirit of the forest(the operator) came to the future to make sure alex krailie never hurts another person." It would be hard to make it work now but I think it would've been a great plot twist earlier in the series.

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 11:06 am

Jordan · Entrenched Joined: 19 Oct 2011 Posts: 845

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:13 pm

Serum · Guest

EXT. FIELD - DUSK

Jay stands over a funeral pyre of hundreds of video cassettes. Tim hands him a pre-lit torch and Jay ignites them.

JAY
Thank God, that's finally over.

TIM
The tapes are gone, but the nightmare is never over.

JAY
What do you mean?

TIM
Can't you see I'm trying to tell you I love you?

JAY
Kiss me you sideburned fool.

They kiss passionately as the tapes burn, causing embers to fly everywhere. The camera pans up to the dusking sky, to the night and a shooting star flies by.

THE END.

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 12:32 pm

Geneaux486 · I Have No Life Joined: 17 Mar 2011 Posts: 2423

Alex stands over the corpses of Jay and Tim, both having been posed with their arms and legs spread out within chalk-drawn circles, both resembling the Operator symbol. Jay's phone buzzes, and Alex picks it up. Marble Hornets has received a tweet from one of its numerous unfictologists. "Hey, Jay, it's been a few weeks, you guys still alive, or what?" reads the tweet.

Alex grins as he types out a response.

"lol no -Alex <3"

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 2:45 pm

Magyk

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aTL4qIIxg8A&t=1m15s

But, you know, with Tim.

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 5:15 pm

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**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 5:42 pm

Magyk

Serum, you know we don't talk about

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 7:36 pm

TheSupremeFace · Unfettered Joined: 24 Apr 2013 Posts: 306

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 7:42 pm

SpookyCron · Boot Joined: 15 Aug 2013 Posts: 17

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 8:52 pm

SpookyCron · Boot Joined: 15 Aug 2013 Posts: 17

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 8:53 pm

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**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 9:00 pm

TheSupremeFace · Unfettered Joined: 24 Apr 2013 Posts: 306

**Posted:** Sat Aug 17, 2013 9:02 pm