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Beidah
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Back on topic...

Jay runs through the woods, covered in blood. Suddenly, he comes upon the tunnel, Alex standing there.

Alex: We did it Jay. That thing is finally gone. This whole thing is over.

Jay: No, not yet it isn't.

Alex is momentarily confused, before Tim steps into view, holding a gun. Tim doesn't hesitate, and, a moment later, Alex is dead.

Tim: Now what do we do?

Jay: Get the other body. We need to burn the both of them, along with the tapes.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2013 5:30 am
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Sha Noran
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Wow guys, a mod is gonna read page 2 and have a fucking heart attack. I'm not easily offended, and I don't care at all, but there are undoubtedly people who would be quite offended, and especially since that was all COMPLETELY off topic, I don't see how that kind of discussion belongs on this board. People see that kind of shit and never come back to the forum. I'm quite familiar with the fact that usually anything goes online, but that Carlin quote is just too much... Especially IN CONTEXT which was the whole point of what Carlin was saying. Someone politely opposing to throwing around the word abortion and a slight confusion about the term white knight didn't call for a quote with every slur in the book. Next time private message things that are both off topic AND offensive and you might avoid a ban. Just sayin.

You can try to stay on topic to keep this open (I'm enjoying a lot of the answers), but A) there already at least 1 thread for speculating about how it will end and B) mod lock for page 2's vulgar, off topic sideline.

Tl;dr: Ya'll are nuts.

PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2013 6:57 am
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CenturyChild
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Again, I'm still rooting for a dance number. Wink

In all seriousness, though...I have no idea how it's going to end, except that it'll probably be on some unsettling, uncertain note. I don't want to say cliff-hanger, because it sounds so clichéd. But there will be a lot of unanswered questions, a lot of uncertainty. I'm wagering that the very last scene/video is either filmed by Tim or TTA, either un-narrated or narrated very little and we'll all be unsure of what their intentions are, what they plan to do next.

And then we'll never hear from them again...

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MistrPibb
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Jay is seen frantically scribbling on a piece of paper. He leaves it on a table and leaves the house. A shadow crosses the wall and distortion fades in. The Operator is seen.

Cut to random shots of driving and important locations.

(Don't You (Forget About Me) by Simple Minds begins playing)

Voiceover from Jay: we accept the fact that we had to sacrifice a whole Saturday in detention for whatever it was we did wrong.
What we did *was* wrong. But we think you're crazy to make us write an essay telling you who we think we are.
You see us as you want to see us... In the simplest terms, in the most convenient definitions.
But what we found out is that each one of us is a brain...

Brian: an athlete...

Tim: a basket case...

Jessica: a princess...

Alex: and a criminal.

Cut to Alex walking across the field at Rosswood Park

Jay: Does that answer your question? Sincerely yours, the Breakfast Club.

Alex raises his fist in the air and the frame freezes.

The Operator puts the note down after reading it. He somberly puts on a hat, walks out into the rain and gets into a taxi. Fade to black.

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Sha Noran
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MistrPibb wrote:
Jay is seen frantically scribbling on a piece of paper. He leaves it on a table and leaves the house. A shadow crosses the wall and distortion fades in. The Operator is seen.

Cut to random shots of driving and important locations.

(Don't You (Forget About Me) by Simple Minds begins playing)

Voiceover from Jay: we accept the fact that we had to sacrifice a whole Saturday in detention for whatever it was we did wrong.
What we did *was* wrong. But we think you're crazy to make us write an essay telling you who we think we are.
You see us as you want to see us... In the simplest terms, in the most convenient definitions.
But what we found out is that each one of us is a brain...

Brian: an athlete...

Tim: a basket case...

Jessica: a princess...

Alex: and a criminal.

Cut to Alex walking across the field at Rosswood Park

Jay: Does that answer your question? Sincerely yours, the Breakfast Club.

Alex raises his fist in the air and the frame freezes.

The Operator puts the note down after reading it. He somberly puts on a hat, walks out into the rain and gets into a taxi. Fade to black.


Omg ROFL this a thousand times.

EDIT: Can't resist...

Sha Noran wrote:
Jay will volunteer to detonate the nuclear device, but Tim tricks him at the last minute, detatching his air hose and shoving him back onto the spaceship elevator. Despite Jay's cries to the contrary, his damaged suit will leave him with no choice but to merely film as Tim fights through last minute steam vent explosions to reach the detonator. Just as he is about to detonate the atom bomb which he and his team have drilled into the asteroid, he will have a montage flash through his mind of his life, the good times and the bad. The Operator will appear and try to stop Jay's spaceship from leaving, but Alex will have just the right one-liner, and the racially diverse cast of the ship will narrowly escape to a triumphant, orchestrated song. The Operator then turns to Tim, but it's too late; the camera focuses and we see Tim's grin and sideburns, and he says some badass one-liner, like, "Sorry, slim. Not on my watch." He then detonates the nuclear device, heroically sacrificing himself and splitting the asteroid into two perfect halves which barely miss the planet. The credits roll to an Aerosmith hit, then after the credits, in TTA font, the following pops on the screen:

DON'T WANNA CLOSE MY EYES
DON'T WANNA FALL ASLEEP
BECAUSE I'D MISS YOU BABY
AND I DON'T WANNA MISS A THING

Single frame of the Operator as the final frame after that. Maybe in a dark, creepy, heavily wooded area.


PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:40 pm
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TheSupremeFace
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adaminator1 wrote:
EXT: A small field. A breezy wind. Just... Calmness for ten seconds.

[OVERLAY TTA TEXT]: YOU HAVE FAILED

Strange, soothing music. Distorted. Clearly TTA uploaded this entry after our heroes previous expedition.

The camera begins to vibrate a little, unesttlingly.

[OVERLAY TTA TEXT]: YOU HAVE LEFT NOTHING BUT A WAKE OF DESTRUCTION IN YOUR PATH.

The camera is picked up. Flash to black. Colorful distortion. Then text.

[OVERLAY TTA TEXT]: the time has now come

Camera again. Operator out in the field. Camera rotates around. TTA revealed.

Behind him, the corpses of Alex, and Jay.

Boom. Slenderman next to them.

Boom. Corpses gone.

Boom. TTA gone. Camera falls to the ground.

[OVERLAY TTA TEXT] the keys to the ark are mine.

[Boom. A thousand slenderman in the park. THE ARK was where the Slenderman came from. And now... There are a million times more.

SMASH TO BLACK

[OVERLAY TTA TEXT] my salvation is at hand
[OVERLAY TTA TEXT OVERLAY DISTORTION SPLIT SECOND CHANGE] your doom is at hand

====ENDTRANSMISSION====


How about we forget page 2 and agree that this is a very awesome ending

PostPosted: Sun Aug 18, 2013 9:32 pm
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Lithp
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SpookyCron wrote:
Jordan wrote:
SpookyCron wrote:
The sun has gone down in Rosswood park. Jay has been chasing Tim for an hour now and losing more and more distance. Finally Jay stops for a breath, unable to see Tim now. His flashlight goes out and he is unable to see. He breaths heavy, anxiety in his voice. "Tim!....." A long pause before Jay hears a twig snap in the darkness.

His flashlight lights back up and he see's that he is completely surrounded. All around him are people wearing strange masks of varied shapes and qualities. Closest to him are the obvious masked silhouettes of Alex and Jessica.

Jay shudders and panics as he sees the masks through the trees for as far as he can see. His heart pounds and he starts to cough. He starts to feel that sickening feeling when He is near.

The figures are silent until one starts to hum. The rest of the figures start to join in the hum. The whole woods is filled with the hum then they start to sing Cara Mia Addio. Jay is startled by the peaceful melody, he is confused. Is this my fate? Is this when I die? The masks keep singing and begin to open a path just wide enough for Jay to walk through. He instantly takes the opportunity to escape, running as hard and as fast as he can while the masks keep parting.

The army keeps their melody and barely move as they lead Jay back to his car. When he finally see's where his destination is he turns around to look back at the horde, slightly confused. He see's Masky in front of the group singing like the rest of the masks.

The song finally stops and masky raises one hand and waves a farewell.

Jay gets into his car and leaves, never looking back.


Ohhh...I love this ending. Jay get's closure about Jessica and what's left of Tim and Jessica save Jay from turning into one of the mask. It's achingly bittersweet and actually made me tear up just by thinking of it. (Good job, you made me cry Smile

Search and Destory, your ending remidned me of something...I just haven't finished yet (I don't know what it is, it's probably just my paranoia talking), but your conclusion sounded really intresting, but I had to stop reading becuase I'm autistic and kind of need books/movies/ things just to keep everything in my life in check. But, it sounded really great Smile


Bro, this is the ending to portal 2.

Im glad it got you emotional though.


If Jay somehow goes to the moon & banishes The Operator to outer space, I'm satisfied with it.

PostPosted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 7:34 pm
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DHawk314
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Text on screen: Entry #77

*Cut to footage of Jay filming an abandoned house. He's holding the picture of Amy, looking at the back with the address on it.*

Jay: Well, this is...wait this is really just Brian's house! How did I not realize this? I've been here like a bazillon times. How spaced out am I...ya know what. Forget this. I'm not going in there. I've made enough dumb decisions. Today I quit. Not fake quit where I "Keep tryin' to quit but they keep ropin' me back in!" I'm just gonna get a job at Blimpies. If the faceless thing kills me then so be it.

*Jay turns around and Tim immediately knocks him over. You can see he's wearing his mask. The hooded guy is in the background. Distortion start, the scene cuts. Jay is tied to a chair, as are Alex and Jessica. Each of them to their own chair. The hooded guy comes on camera and takes his hood and mask off. It's Brian. Everyone is surprised by this. This is a shocking development*

Brian: Okay here's the dealio guys. I've taken you all here cause it's become apparent that Tim *points at the camera* spread the Operator to us. And then we've been spreading it to other people. I mean look at her *points at Jessica. Or her *takes out picture of Amy Jay had*. She's dead by the way. I know everyone is surprised by this. This is a shocking development. Anyway the point is you're all gonna die now. I'm gonna kill you all and then kill myself and then all of this will be over.

*The camera is put down somewhere, but the shot only changes slightly. Tim walks on screen wearing the mask. Really high tempo Japanese Pop music starts to play. Brian gives Tim a knife and he slits his own throat. Brian then takes the knife proceeds to do the same with the rest of the cast, all with the music playing. The Operator appears and Brian runs away. The music continues playing. As a matter of fact, it gets louder. The Operator disappears with all the bodies. The music turns off. Brian come back on camera and turns the camera off.*
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