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Saevitia
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Joined: 30 Mar 2005 Posts: 688 Location: Rochester, NY
Gamer's Law [Chapter3 is up!!] I have started a novel based on playing ARGs. It is called 'Gamer's Law' and is a suspense/action/drama type. Think The Dav Vinci Code.
If you want to read it, go here for chapter one: http://www.livejournal.com/community/notanarg/601.html#cutid1
Gamer's Law will be posted chapter by chapter as I write it. If you would like a cameo, feel free to ask for one.
If you do read it, please tell my your opinion. Constructive critisism is apreciated, but I like blatent compliments too.
EDIT: Chapter 2 is now posted http://www.livejournal.com/community/notanarg/2467.html
Edit: Chapter 3 up
http://www.livejournal.com/community/notanarg/4931.html
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:30 pm
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TJ229ER
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Joined: 09 Sep 2004 Posts: 292 Location: Los Angeles
Looks great I like the concept. A couple of grammer errors to fix... "The meeting, it seemed, had been successfully."(should be successfull) and there is another one in there somewhere but I can't find it now. But still an awesome story. Can't wait for the rest of it.
Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:52 pm
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Saevitia
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Joined: 30 Mar 2005 Posts: 688 Location: Rochester, NY
Thanks TJ! I fixed the grammer error you pointed out.
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:54 pm
spaceboy
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Joined: 06 Aug 2004 Posts: 475 Location: Cambridge Mental Hospital
I like the story so far. It kind of reminds me of Pattern Recognition , but with the ARG twist. Keep up the good work!
Oh, and I'll take one of those cameos.
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:16 pm
Saevitia
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Joined: 30 Mar 2005 Posts: 688 Location: Rochester, NY
Ah Pattern Recognition. Long live Gibson, eh?
One cameo, coming up.
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:21 pm
TJ229ER
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Joined: 09 Sep 2004 Posts: 292 Location: Los Angeles
Saevitia I'll take a cameo also. Name is pronouced TJ-Two-Two-Niner
Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:52 pm
Tiny
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Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 502 Location: Cincy, OH or there abouts!
Oh, daaayumn, I like! I've always been a stickler for Mystery novels!
That's quite a cookie you've got there, or so it's starting out to be. I'd love a cameo, I go by Dante to most and The Poet to some, Tiny's just the generic user I use for all my accounts. Seriously, keep us updated on that, because that is looking pretty kick ass so far!
Tj-
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Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 10:03 pm
tsondie21
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Joined: 01 Jun 2005 Posts: 227
that...makes...me...happy.
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 1:02 am
Saevitia
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Joined: 30 Mar 2005 Posts: 688 Location: Rochester, NY
Thanks again to everybody.
There will likely be another chapter within the next 24 hours. I will put a couple of cameos in it, but I will save many for later use.
Oh, by the way, I will not sacrifice story or plot just to stick a cameo in, so if you don't get a huge part, I'm sorry. <3
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 1:38 am
OmegaX
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Joined: 08 Sep 2004 Posts: 360 Location: Dartmouth, NS, Canada
I'd ask for a cameo, but a)no one here - or in the community in general - really knows me, and b)the only ARG I ever seriously played was ILB - and Synagoga, until the WI merger (or possibly, I don't know as I stopped around then, revelation that they were connected all along).
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 1:42 am
Axys Denyed
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Joined: 10 Feb 2005 Posts: 456 Location: Houston, TX, USA
Sorry to nitpick, but found a spelling error in the first chapter
Quote:
He lasy down on his bed
Should be lay. Just thought I would point that out. Good job on this, I like it so far
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:37 am
Saevitia
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Joined: 30 Mar 2005 Posts: 688 Location: Rochester, NY
Tch, Omega, just because you're not as popular as say Me *cough*notreally*cough* dosn't mean I won't give you a cameo.
*is not stingey with the cameos*
EDIT: I fixed the lays/lay error
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:37 am
konamouse
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Joined: 02 Dec 2002 Posts: 8010 Location: My own alternate reality
/me isn't afraid to suggest a part for a cute squeeker.
I seem to have a habit of using flirtation as a means to interact with ingame characters - sometimes works, but usually has been quite entertaining.
At one point I was BTS as an ingame character that was "dating" another ingame character (although we didn't know who the other was IRL) and IRL I was also flirting with that same ingame character. Sort of a strange ARG love triangle between two people.....the poor PM kept getting confused when contacting me - used my ingame character name, my ARG name, or my real name. I answered to all three.
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:16 am
Saevitia
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Joined: 30 Mar 2005 Posts: 688 Location: Rochester, NY
That's hilarious Kona. I'll make sure to remember that when you get your bit.
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Posted: Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:22 am
OrlandO
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Joined: 20 May 2005 Posts: 64 Location: a lume spento
since i'm a newbie, i won't ask for a cameo, but may I be so bold as to suggest "snippet" instead of "snippit"?
liked the story so far....
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