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Kerlo
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Haiku Competition: Discussion! Which submissions do you like? Hey Guys!
In case you don't already know, Rose started a Haiku competition for UnFiction or Slusho prizes. Contest is located here: http://forums.unfiction.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=21879
Some of these submissions are great and I'm sure the authors would like to hear if you like their work or not!
As well, as the submissions increase, your comments may help Rose and others narrow down the playing field a bit based on public reaction.
So instead of mucking up the contest thread with comments, I created this one!
So far here are my Favs:
CloverfieldClues.com Wrote:
Quote:
Slusho Happy Drink
Mix your Favorite Flavors
You Can't Drink Just Six!
I like it cause it's simple, captures the main Slusho themes and slogans.
Lambo_Diablo_Svtt Wrote:
Quote:
L4wlz, 1 R t3h h4x.
7h1s h4i|<u 1s m4d3 0f wyn.
s!ush0 1s p33ps. Pwnt.
This one made me laugh out loud! Good Work!
Edit: Stickied because it got lost. -SpaceBass
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 2:11 pm
Lambo_Diablo_Svtt
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Joined: 18 Aug 2007 Posts: 914
Yay! You liked mine.
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 2:37 pm
Polar Bear
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Joined: 06 Nov 2007 Posts: 232 Location: North Palm Beach, FL
There are so many.
And so quick.
We should keep track of who has the most entries...
as of today, I have 15.
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 3:14 pm
Polar Bear
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Joined: 06 Nov 2007 Posts: 232 Location: North Palm Beach, FL
My Favorite:
jedi1josh wrote:
I will miss you Rob.
How can I even survive?
You're like my main dude
Almost straight from the trailer
Polar Bear wrote:
When I hear its name
It better be really good
Or else I'll be pissed!
I think we can all agree
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 3:28 pm
Dib
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Joined: 28 Jul 2007 Posts: 246 Location: Puerto Rico
I really like these:
CloverfieldClues.com wrote:
69 Degrees
In the middle of winter
Who wants a Slusho?
notgordian wrote:
Dear Mister Abrams
We've been waiting for four months.
TELL US THE DAMN NAME.
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:12 pm
Euchre
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Joined: 29 Aug 2007 Posts: 3342
I like what that guy Euchre put up there...
I'm having a lot of fun with this competition. Some of it's going to be really stiff I'm sure, but it has actually gotten me to take a closer look at some of the information and characters involved.
I'm just waiting for someone to read one of mine and ask "wtf does that mean?".
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ŠEuchre 2007
Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:46 pm
Uninvited
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Joined: 30 Jul 2007 Posts: 112
Quote:
The Hawk picks lilies
The Lily gathers people
For the Penguin's books
Quote:
if New York crumbles
and everyone there is dead
does it make a sound?
Two of my favorites.
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Posted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 7:46 pm
Animaniac
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Joined: 03 Oct 2007 Posts: 389
Quote:
Run Run Run Run RUN!
Holy Christ God almighty
It's right behind *squish*
Not the best example of poetry (Vogon excepted) but made me laugh out loud at work.
Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 6:36 am
HerOdyssey
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Joined: 17 Sep 2007 Posts: 276 Location: Oregon
This is my favourite one, hands-down:
Theatreboz:
Quote:
Little did Rob know
It was a going away
Party for New York
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 4:12 pm
Euchre
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Joined: 29 Aug 2007 Posts: 3342
The winner announcement has been delayed until Monday, Dec. 3rd...
My head may explode before then.
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 4:50 pm
bryanflurry
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Joined: 02 Aug 2007 Posts: 477 Location: Mississauga, Canada
I just realized I havent posted my entry yet
Posted: Mon Dec 03, 2007 11:30 am
Euchre
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Joined: 29 Aug 2007 Posts: 3342
Do we have a winner or winners?
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Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 1:29 pm
SpaceBass
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Joined: 20 Sep 2002 Posts: 2701 Location: pellucidar
Allow me to apologize on behalf of rose for the slight delay in announcing winners. She was out of town for the weekend and is now a bit under the weather. We should have an announcement up soon, though.
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Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 4:37 pm
djspankypants
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Joined: 03 Oct 2007 Posts: 264 Location: Tennessee
i may be a bit biased but i like mine
Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2007 6:23 pm
bryanflurry
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Joined: 02 Aug 2007 Posts: 477 Location: Mississauga, Canada
get well soon rose.. the entries a handful, theres alot of good entries, I prefer the funny ones, good luck to everyone
Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 5:58 am
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