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[Weezel]

[jasper]

moviĝanta. . . . . get moving? start moving?

[Weezel]

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Se vi havas vojan komunikadon per {omphalos}, ke vi povas vidi sed ne esti vidata, vi devas studi la informon kaj viziojn kiujn vi ricevas el via celata mondo kaj uai tiujn por krei eventon en via mondo kiu plej paralelos aktivecon ki un vi anticipas en via celata mondo.

Jen la situacio en kiu ni aktuale trovas nin.

Nia celo estas profiti la kutimon de danci la labirintan dancon, tiel se sur la granda planko de Ariadno mem. Ĉiuj ni ses memoras ke ĉi tiu kutimo kazas ĉiunokte dum la unua dusemajno de aŭgusto en ĉiuj niaj hejmaj mondoj.

Dum niaj vojaĝoj ĉirkaŭ la mondon por prepari la vojaĝan {omphalos}, ni estis instruantaj al aliaj la labririntan dancon, kaj pludona(nt)aj la tradicio de nia mondo danci ĝin tra la malfrua somero, je la horo se la sunsubiro en Kreto.

Ni povas nur esperi ke ili memoros tion, kion ni montris al ili, kaj ke ci tiu estos sufiĉa por sendi nin hejmen.

Pruvo de Rehavigo: DHJF/ALK8/DF59/X0F8/9743

[Weezel]

Great work on the initial translation jasper! Its gives a jist at least until the finer nuances are translated too...

[jasper]

[Oriza]

Not to be presumptous, but I'm thinking there might be a better way to explain/translate some of the parts of this....

[jasper]

[Weezel]

[Khaos]

I'm about to finish my french translation (which may be easier for you to translate in english than to start from the esperanto) and i can already point a major disagreement with your first try :

The custom of dancing in the labyrinths is done "each night during the TWO FIRST WEEKS of august" and not only the first of august.

[jasper]

[Khaos]

If you're interested in, my french translation is now on the wiki and lucie's forum

[jasper]

Thanks for posting your translation.
And thanks for helping us understand more.

I just fixed a couple more errors in my translation here.

Navigation by means of flares
Even if we can construct travel {omphalos}, safe travel home is not certain.

Millions and millions of worlds exist and it is no simple matter to navigate from one specific world to another. Indeed it is an extremely complicated matter. It becomes necessary to master the technique known as flare navigation.

As best we could determine, the traveler is automatically transported to the one world with the most strong correlation of human activity upon the precise moment when the trip occurs. In other words, the multiverse {blank} sends the traveler along the shortest possible distance- to the world moving the same as the door world.[the world where you create the portal]

For reasons that we still don't fully understand, coordination of geography, building and other immovable differences [is] a lot less important during the trip than the synchronization of living movement.

Therefore, when you try to travel multiverse {blank}, you should create human synchronization between your world and world you are aiming for- flare of movement which guides your way more nearly towards the world you are aiming for. In order to create enough powerful flare you must be exactly in front of the place and activity of many thousands of individuals in both worlds. And if you can't, your trip may cary you to any place entirely unanticipated.

If you fail to make the strongest possible coordination, still you will arrive [in] the world that is sufficiently close to your aimed for world that you still find that your friends and family exist but their lives may be very different from what you remember.

How to prepare the flares

Huge quantity of prior communication by {omphalos} is necessary before your departure to make sure of the success of your flare.

If you have two-way communication by {omphalos} you can work with {agonithetai} in the aimed for world to prepare a common event that synchronizes as many human bodies as possible.

The more complicated the movement, the stronger will be the coordination that you create.

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If you have one-way communication through {omphalos}, that you can see but not be seen, you must study the information and visions that you receive from the aimed for world in order to create an event in your world that will most parallel activity that you anticipate in your aimed for world.

Here is the situation in which we actually find ourselves.

Our aim is to profit the custom of dancing the labyrinthine dance, as if upon the large floor of Ariadne herself. Each of us six remembers that this custom happens nightly during the first two weeks of August on each of our domestic worlds.

During our travels around the world to prepare the travel {omphalos}, we taught others the labyrinthine dance, and also gave the tradition of our world to dance it through the late summer upon the hour of sunset in Crete.

We can only hope that they would remember that, which we showed to them, and that you will be enough to send us home.

[Oriza]

*sigh*
Even though I know that no one