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Monstrous
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The Water Tower

A spec script I wrote to be a short film.
It's a monster film, so if you liked Cloverfield, you might like this.

Could you please review?
http://pc.celtx.com/project/Qv4LtjZQoHD4

To read it, there's a link that says "Screenplay" on the left side. It took me a while to find it the first time.

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avpruler
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great screenplay, just one question, why is he having visions(or in actuality,) of people killing themselves from the tower, why not other places?

i give it a 4/5 Very Happy

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Monstrous
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It's hard to explain. It's like some sort of vision that when somebody actually does fall from the tower, it brings with him a new life. The life of the smaller monster which in Lucas's ultimate realization is innocent. So that each of those falling people could be guilty and condemned, but bring with them the life of an innocent animal.
It's really hard to explain. I don't even understand it really.

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avpruler
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lol innocent animals that kill you o.0
but seriously, it was great.

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Monstrous
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Thanks for the feedback.

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