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[BrianV1]

Guys, walkabout_girl HAS to come BEFORE the interrogation, or esle it makes no sense. She was obviously seen while trying to get the keycard back, the alarms went off, then walkabout_girl is what two security guards are saying to eahc other as they watch her make a desperation attempt to get away, she's caught, and questioned by the police officer.
I mean, she explains everything she's done during the interrogation, so the only logical thing to assume is that it happened before that. Plus, after they leave, the police station catches on fire.

[Bobman]

Re: We think we've got it!

[Alzheimers]

Missing some files makes this difficult, but I agree with most people except for the placement of two files: Walkaway Girl and Emergency. Here are the two most likely possibilities:

...Nervous -> | -> Emergency -> | -> ?? -> Walkaway Girl -> ?? | -> Law Abiding -> ??

Explanation:
Nervous is the last file in the interrogation. After the interrogation, where James James goes to the waiting room, instead creates a diversion to help spring his daughter (and eliminate any evidence of those tests). Emergency is the result of his diversion. By Walking Girl (note sirens in the background -- from fire in Emergency), it's becoming apparent that Jan is not a normal troublemaker. Either some info came back on her, or until-now-silent-watchers Frank and his partner were there the whole time, but now decide to make their move. Jan makes her amazing escape, which would segue into "Law Abiding". Her sarcastic "That was fun..." leads to mean perhaps more than the interrogation -- hence, the placement of the prior clips.

*OR*

?? -> Walkaway Girl -> ?? | PQI -> Stupid Cop -> Yes or No -> Hey Dad-> Nervous -> | -> Law Abiding -> ?? -> | Emergency

Explanation:
In a missing file leading into Walkaway Girl, we find out Jan was somewhere she shouldn't be. She's trapped and although she escapes Frank and the other guy following her, she's caught by police and brought in for interrogation. In questioning Jan, not-so-smart-cop pointedly asks "What were you doing up there?" Indicating that she was somewhere high (3rd floor of a building, perhaps?) Her father shows up, and after the interrogation, James takes Jan home, then returns to destroy the evidence.


Maybe we'll know more after we fill in those blanks. Right now, it's tough to say either way.

[keybsnbits]

[Bobman]

[Alzheimers]

On a separate note, I think we're missing a file in the Jersey/Durga thread too.

I have it listed as this way:

Dizzy -> Escape -> ?? -> Jersey -> Reflected -> Durga

The problem is that the dialog doesn't run smooth between Escape and Jersey:

[LazarusLong42]

[LazarusLong42]

[LilSerf]

Yup, the last line of escape is an emphatic "Don't." from Durga which ties nicely into jersey.

My two cents on Jan James:

I agree with some others that in the clips we're missing, Jan escapes the interrogation. She's at the least allowed to do this by her father, and very possibly assisted by him.

In my mind emergency and walkaway_girl take place nearly simultaneously during this escape sequence, and after jumping Jan joins her father for the drive home in law_abiding. The fact that she makes a sarcastic comment about them being law-abiding is one clue to this in my mind. Obviously we need the rest of the clips to have any idea if this is accurate, but that's my current theory.

[BrianV1]

Here's my version, I put a lot of thought and effort into it, so I hope it's not flamed to death heh.

KEY
(begin) = tape speed at beginning of file
(end) = tape speed at end of file
[ ] = Speculation

Prologue

[1. Hey Solider]

Main Story

(begin "Jersey Meets Durga") dizzy --> escape --> jersey --> reflected --> durga (end)

NOTE: [This could be where Durga begins to show Jersey, various things about Jane, i.e. memory files, which is why we get the next two "Stories" ]

Story A

A- (begin "The Dare") ______ [2. blip] --> walkaway_girl --> ______ [3. pillow] (end)
B- (begin "The Interrogation") Pqi --> stupid_cop --> yes_or_no --> hey_dad --> nervous (end)
C- (begin "Ride Home") law_abiding --> [4. you_knew] (end)
D- (begin "Protection") emergency (end)

Story B

A- (begin "Failed Date") parasites --> eyes (end)
B- (begin "Sulking") beer --> four_goats (end
C- (begin "New Date") our_hoodlums --> much_lifting (end)
D- (begin "Aiden") meditape --> [5. you_could] --> say_something (end)
F- (begin "The Truth Revealed") message_saved (end)
F- (begin) "Spy") "guilty" (end)
G- (begin "Revenge") tuna --> hi_aiden (end)



Missing: blip, pillow, **hey_solider, you_could, you_knew,

** On the file dump site, I found hey_solider, any thoughts on this one?

Speculations:

Note: Every file name seems to be a line from each scene, so I will explain my decisions for where I put the missing scenes, by offering an idea about a possible line of dialogue in that scene

2. blip
Guard 1 : "Hey, there's something on here."
Guard 2: "What do you mean, something?"
Guard 1: "I dunno...it's like a..like a blip in the security.
Guard 2: "Well, pull it up and see if we can find something."
*alarm sounds*
Guard 2: "Shit, I think that's our blip."
Guard 1: "Who is that? Is that a girl?"
Guard 2: "I think that's Janes kid."
Guard 1: "Who's Jane?"
Guard 2: "Double J, James Janes, he's part of the Special Operations branch."
Guard 1: "Special Operations?"

3. pillow
Nurse: "Hey...everything's okay miss, you're at the hospital, you had quite a fall young lady, is it true you jumped?"
Jane: "Ugh...my head."
Nurse: "Oh here, would you like another pillow?"
*door opens*
Cop: "Hello ma'am."
Nurse: "Hi, are you her father?"
Cop: "Not quite."
*Shows badge*
Cop: "Detective ______, Miss Janes has to come with me, she's under arrest."

4. you_knew
Jane: "Look I'm sorry Dad, I didn't kno..."
JJ: "No, you knew! You knew what would happen if they caught you, that is a big compromise to our safety!"
Jane: "Look don't yell at me alright? I was trying to be a normal kid!"
JJ: "Yeah well your 'normal' behavior could've gotten us in big trouble...Did you manage to get rid of the urine samples and the rest of the tests?"
Jane: "...No..."
JJ: "Damnit. I'll drop you off at home, and then I'm going back to the station."
Jane: "What for?"
JJ: "To protect us."

5. you_could
Sophia: "You can spy on people through the chatter-net?"
Kumal: "Oh, sure it's easy. I do it all the time."
Sophia: "Don't get out much do you?"
Kumal: "...well..."
Sophia: "Relax, I'm just kidding. Besides, I thought everyone had encryption in their chatter PDAs to stop hacking?"
Kumal: "Ha. Encryption. I can hack anybody, anytime, anywhere."
Sophia: "Take a look at my PDA and see if you can hack me, Mr. Big Shot."
Kumal: "Alright, I will, let's take a look here..."



Whoo. Okay that's it I think hehe. That took so long, I'm afraid it'll be totally out of date when I finally post it! Let's hope not! *crosses fingers*
EDIT: Tiny errors, had to fix.

[Thistle]

Re: Speculation: Rampancy?

[Nova]

Re: Speculation: Rampancy?

[Diplomat]

Emergency on planet Earth

[Cu Roi]

Ahi

[Skyfall]