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dotman4114
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Dray wrote:
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_. heer. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qRLPsQ7TEYc I got bored and made this, sorry about it being sucky I'm a bit new to the flash scene XD


Everything looks pretty neat (animation, WOW, tough stuff!) but there are some real posing issues in two places.

Masky's line of action looks very unnatural when he's sitting on the chair. If he's slouching, his butt should not be crammed into the part of the chair where back meets seat-cushion, it should probably be leaning forward. Similarly his legs shouldn't be over the side of the chair (where are the chair-arms? XD) they should be over the front edge by quite a ways. (I did up a redline sort of image to try to explain better!)

The second issue is with the seizure scene; it looks very awkward to watch and not how I think you mean for it to read, if you get my drift. >_>" I think that for that to be successful you need to show his entire body, or at least not just cut it off right above the waist.

The transitions are nifty and all of the flashing frames of lolz are entertaining. XD I wish there was a little more time between a couple of the frames, at least the ones pertinent to where you're going with this (Jay making a "8U" face would be one! I dunno!)

Anyways, are you going to keep adding to it, is it a WIP? Or is it a finished thing? (I think you should keep going on it... XD But that's just me.)
Thank you very much for such a detailed critique! It definatly gives me material to work on XD I do plan on doing more MH flash, I just wanted to experiment a bit with my abilities now. ( FRAME BY FRAME BLOWS)and OH GOD I had no idea about the seizure scene! ( I thought it was hilarious when I first saw but I digress) I'll DEFINATLY fix THAT in the future! XDD Side Note: If anyone has any material that they think I should put into a flash that's MH related then feel free to let me know! My brain isn't designed to be constantly thinking stuff up @___@
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 		Aww, thanks you guys.

And I totally would not mind if you guys printed 'em out, too.

Don't tempt me, Dray, there'd be an army of tiny little Maskys and Tims. xD ...which totally isn't a bad thing, come to think of it.

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Dray wrote:
Here, MagicNein, I did some random-hopping through my list in order to try'n find some songs to add to your mix! Here's a .zip

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=DWJXXSO6

There's about 6 or 7 actual songs and 6 or so gag FST songs. Feel free to pick and choose any that you'd actually like to include, they're fairly eclectic! Included a readme with reasons for including 'em. Smile


I love Lemon Demon! This is really helpful, thank you!

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dotman4114 wrote:
Thank you very much for such a detailed critique! It definatly gives me material to work on XD I do plan on doing more MH flash, I just wanted to experiment a bit with my abilities now. ( FRAME BY FRAME BLOWS)and OH GOD I had no idea about the seizure scene! ( I thought it was hilarious when I first saw but I digress) I'll DEFINATLY fix THAT in the future! XDD Side Note: If anyone has any material that they think I should put into a flash that's MH related then feel free to let me know! My brain isn't designed to be constantly thinking stuff up @___@


Frame by frame DOES blow. XD I am NOT an animator by a long shot and I have a lot of respect for people who can do it. The best thing that I can suggest is to start with a REALLY simple idea, because chances are that it'll get more complex as you go along. This always happens with anything sequential or narrative. You need to hone in on a core idea and keep trying to keep it simple or else things just get muddy and confusing and blargh. Putting that into practice, if you work with storyboards first (aka, a single drawing to represent a single action, movement, transition, piece of conversation, etc.) and then fill them in with narration you may have an easier time going through the process.

Because, you know, storyboarding doesn't double+ the amount of time you're working on something. XDD

As for ideas, just have fun! Even if it's not MH-related, do some experimenting! If there's a movie or a clip of something you really like, try emulating it, see how the makers broke it down in terms of camera angles and lighting, etc. Really helps with the observation skills, which will translate into the quality of what you're drawing. :3

Mops wrote:
Aww, thanks you guys.

And I totally would not mind if you guys printed 'em out, too.

Don't tempt me, Dray, there'd be an army of tiny little Maskys and Tims. xD ...which totally isn't a bad thing, come to think of it.


XD Please to be making a Slendy also~? It would be cute to have a setup of all of the characters fleeing from him or something!

MagicNein wrote:
I love Lemon Demon! This is really helpful, thank you!


I urged JKatkina to look through her tunes, also. She has more music than I do, or at least it's more likely to be applicable. XD My stash is all too... cheerful, or drums or girly or old movie/show title rips. How's the rest of the conglomeration going?

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 		http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QPnl894fKDU
it's horrible I know...

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 		I've cranked out another painting. Woo!
(It would have been done sooner, but I was too busy hanging out with my friend xD; )
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dotman4114
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I've cranked out another painting. Woo!
(It would have been done sooner, but I was too busy hanging out with my friend xD; )
I...I-I just... I give up T___T
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 		Keep being amazin', Miss D. <3 I absolutely adore your paintings. They're tempting me to pull out my own watercolors again!

Dray wrote:
XD Please to be making a Slendy also~? It would be cute to have a setup of all of the characters fleeing from him or something!


I'm wondering how I'd turn Slender Man into a fat lil stubby thing or at least stylized like the rest of them. xD

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Mops wrote:
Keep being amazin', Miss D. <3 I absolutely adore your paintings. They're tempting me to pull out my own watercolors again!

Dray wrote:
XD Please to be making a Slendy also~? It would be cute to have a setup of all of the characters fleeing from him or something!


I'm wondering how I'd turn Slender Man into a fat lil stubby thing or at least stylized like the rest of them. xD


Oooh, that sounds like a challenge~!

(I... I tried. XD)
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 		Iiii think we have another sticker! XD

This makes me wonder, actually, who they had dress up and play Slendy. He'd be the only actor that we'd never be able to identify. >.> But whoever it is does some keen scary headtilts.

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 		I drew Tim!
Haha, I love his obvious distaste for Alex's ~artistic genius~ in Entry 17. (aah my handwriting is so bad sorry you guys)



IDK, it looks kind of weird to me. Maybe I drew his face too round?
(Also hello everyone, this is my first post ever. A-Am I doing it right?)

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MomoMaurici wrote:
I drew Tim!
Haha, I love his obvious distaste for Alex's ~artistic genius~ in Entry 17. (aah my handwriting is so bad sorry you guys)



IDK, it looks kind of weird to me. Maybe I drew his face too round?
(Also hello everyone, this is my first post ever. A-Am I doing it right?)


Loved it.

LOVED IT. xD

Made me laugh.

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dotman4114
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Serenity wrote:
MomoMaurici wrote:
I drew Tim!
Haha, I love his obvious distaste for Alex's ~artistic genius~ in Entry 17. (aah my handwriting is so bad sorry you guys)
IDK, it looks kind of weird to me. Maybe I drew his face too round?
(Also hello everyone, this is my first post ever. A-Am I doing it right?)


Loved it.

LOVED IT. xD

Made me laugh.
Seconded.
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Dray wrote:

Oooh, that sounds like a challenge~!

(I... I tried. XD)


Ahahaha, I love it! Perfect, totally yoinking that for future chibis. xD

JKatkina wrote:

This makes me wonder, actually, who they had dress up and play Slendy. He'd be the only actor that we'd never be able to identify. >.> But whoever it is does some keen scary headtilts.


I always thought maybe Jay, since he's so damn SKINNY, (eat a sandwich, gawd,) but 'Return' kinda kills that. xD Maybe Seth?

MomoMaurici wrote:
I drew Tim!
Haha, I love his obvious distaste for Alex's ~artistic genius~ in Entry 17. (aah my handwriting is so bad sorry you guys)
IDK, it looks kind of weird to me. Maybe I drew his face too round?
(Also hello everyone, this is my first post ever. A-Am I doing it right?)


You are doing it right. Oh, you are doing it right. <3 That's hilarious! (Welcome, by the way.)

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 		i think at one point it was stated they are using a manequin to be slendy.. at least int he stand still shots (aka when hes on the stairs)

But for the leaning in the window I dont think it was any of them... LOL

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