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[Dray]

Ha ha, this is going crazy already? It seems odd that they're creating a state-wide curfew over this already.

[Dray]

Sorry for the double-post, but I just want to commend the PM for this story. I mean, there's not a super duper amount of interactivity and puzzle solving, but the fact that they're writing regular updates is great, and that they're keeping their character true is pretty fun to follow.

Great job, PM, if you're a part of the unforums! I like this a lot so far. Pulpy atmosphere for the characters and story, and lots of fun. I look forward to the next post so that I can bug cheer Zeke on. XD I wonder if he'd be amicable to leaving an AIM window open at work or if that's forbidden... Heh.

[biblicalvermin]

the thing i like about this is that zeke is activily interacting with the audience as well through the comments section not only that but it is a brillant story can't wait for the next bit.

[Dray]

new post!

Waiting for them to find out that Conaghan has gone missing and that he's not just skipping town.

[GhostK]

New post again. Lizzie is making the SM connection; Zeke and Lizzie have a fight.

I think we could subtitle this one "how and why Zeke is not married."

[Dray]

Isn't he only about 24, or 26? XD Lizzie also sounds like more of a work-a-holic than Zeke does!

Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Still wish we could yammer at Lizzie, though I think that at this point, we'd probably only drive her to do MORE SM research, thus driving the two apart even further.

[MetalGearSamus]

Hmm, maybe their irritability is a sign of SM?

[lifegospel]

Man, If I wasn't adopting a cool, calm persona for this, I'd tell Zeke to find Lizzie, then go **** and make up.

[Serenity]

Oh, new post! I found some of that really cute, haha.

[guestydude]

I'm calling it

A child gets abducted at the carnival.

[Dray]

A swing and a miss for Guestydude!

New post: http://openthedoorandyouwillfindme.blogspot.com/2010/04/carnival.html

Keep your arms and your legs inside the vehicle at all times; here we go!

[sketchy_dog]

Just started following this blog and it's well written and entertaining. Looking forward to more.

We all knew what she saw

[Dray]

I don't think that we should tell Zeke what we think she saw... that'd totally set him off again. Don't want him getting furious and, I don't know, throwing a garbage can at her!

Maybe we should point him towards seeing how long the victims seemed to be followed by 'Slendy' before they disappeared? That will give him a time frame for how long it will take Lizzie to go poof. D:

And, according to the blood on the ceiling, perhaps we should take this as a sign: Lizzie's a generally righteous person; she doesn't sound like a sinner the way that our baddy was. Zeke (or maybe us, as players) have the opportunity to sway whether she lives or dies.

[GhostK]

[lifegospel]

Calling it right now: Lizzie gets kidnapped