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Anonymousity · Entrenched Joined: 20 Aug 2010 Posts: 1125

Talking about King, "solid" is the word that aways came to my mind. He has great ideas and comes up with some amazing scenes and visuals, his writing is good at times, spotty at others. If you look at his style though, he's no Nabokov - but who ever said he needed to be?

I don't read many Kings - some I read I liked, others I found not that well written, STARK then again certainly was a stylistically well done book. It all narrows down to what you're into, and if you are find with somebody writing in a "blue collar" sort of style Wink

or fancy a more intellectual approach a la Danielewski.

**Posted:** Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:31 am

Dust King · Boot Joined: 06 Jul 2010 Posts: 62

I have to agree with Anonymousity, this isn't over. From how I read it it's a set up for the real slenders to show up, it has all the classic elements; introduced by other blogs/MH, fear of slenderman, starts seeing him, dismisses it as imagination, tries to fight subconsciously (by altering the belief) and now he's come clean and is on the verge of a breakdown.

Enter slender man...

Honestly if you were giving up on a blog would you leave with a post that long with that much exposition in it.

I have a strong feeling this is only the beginning.

If not, sorry mate, I hope you find another way out.

**Posted:** Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:18 am

Undertheark · Veteran Joined: 27 Nov 2010 Posts: 140

Is this guy for real, like no troll?
"Was Sanctem Mount because I didn't want this to be about Slenderman, but I ate an arm of one of them and I started getting some of their powers. On top of that, I Hallowed a Slenderman, and I have no idea what to do with him. His name is Breaker. I renamed the blog after him."

If we have learnt anything from other Slendy blogs/vlogs is that Slendy doesn't fall to Jack Diddley Squat.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 05, 2010 2:51 pm

I've become 0pened · Boot Joined: 01 Dec 2010 Posts: 39

This is the story of when 0pened had eyes. 0Pened was at peace seeing thing, seeing them with his eyes. Then this happened and 0pened was no longer happy for his eyes had abandoned him.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:00 pm

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i am the marker of the squares.

Now ARGing:
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A New Blog That's Not Mine
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Seeking Truth

NoMoreGaems · Unfettered Joined: 17 Sep 2010 Posts: 627

**Posted:** Mon Dec 06, 2010 3:05 am

slendymcslenderson

I kinda like the whole "I kicked slenderman's ass" thing. Reminds me of when I was in 8th grade and wrote storys about fire breathing platypus's from outerspace taking over North Korea.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:57 am

Guestguy2187

**Posted:** Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:00 am

jarnaez · Boot Joined: 28 Oct 2010 Posts: 35

Honestly I know this guy's other fanfic writings and it's more of the same. He has a bad tendency for over the top badass and the idea that if you try to force awesome that makes it so. His writing in and of itself isn't bad but the way he approaches it is a huge turn off.

**Posted:** Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:10 am

KamenZero · Entrenched Joined: 05 Sep 2010 Posts: 860

**Posted:** Sun Dec 12, 2010 1:12 am