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[Slenderman Side Story] MLAndersen0
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awakeasaurusrex
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Maybe the pills dull his senses enough that he doesn't notice low-key haunting stuff...

PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:26 pm
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Mr. Azare
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Maybe all the Slender Craze is being controlled by the pharmaceutical companies that want to sell you antislendy pills!!

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J.Fawkes
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New video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u-tQqNfWI0E

Holy crap the Slendy appearance in this video is absolutely incredible. I've never felt such an atmosphere in a long while

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ThreeDiceGame234
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Wow I suggest watching this in the dark

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Slendery
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J.Fawkes wrote:
New video

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u-tQqNfWI0E

Holy crap the Slendy appearance in this video is absolutely incredible. I've never felt such an atmosphere in a long while


I wouldn't give it the 'absolutely incredible' label that i'd give to TT's and MH's Slender Man appearances, but it was certainly better than most. I didn't quite like the glove on the shoulder, it made Slendy too...well...human. But, oh well. This may be Johnclubs 2.0, but it's a better version, how it SHOULD have been done. I like it.
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J.Fawkes
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I agree the hand on the shoulder was a little inappropriate considering Slendy's nature, but the idea that he was trying to get across came through well I think. That is an incredibly close encounter with Slendy, makes me excited for future episodes

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TastyVapor
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So Michael mentioned in the fifth video that he was taking a drug called "Quetiapine" (or at least I think that's what he was trying to say). Here is a wikipedia article on the drug if we can find any clues through there:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Quetiapine

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VoidCaste
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I will have to respectfully disagree about the hand on the shoulder here...considering what angle I believe they are going for.. did anyone else catch the timing of his dialogue with the slender man appearing beside him?

"I just needed someone there with me" (or beside me?)

Anyways, I actually found it WAY more creepy that way and +1 for no damned ear rape to go with it.

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SlendoMusic
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I agree, the Slender Man apperance was done very well. This video made me excited at the potential MLAndersen0 has.

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J.Fawkes wrote:
I agree the hand on the shoulder was a little inappropriate considering Slendy's nature, but the idea that he was trying to get across came through well I think. That is an incredibly close encounter with Slendy, makes me excited for future episodes


You use the work 'incredible' too much to describe this. Confused

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Rebus
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I do like the added touch of the big broken mirror in the background. A lot of thought has gone into these vids, and I like little details like these.

The Slendy appearances had me on edge, and I didn't mind the glove on the shoulder. It leaves me thinking 'what the hell?' which is always a good place to have your audience.

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Mira
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Woh, good catch on the mirror, I didn't even see that!

ETA: Looks like I'm oblivious, because it's been broken since the first video.

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Silvestri
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I'm going to have agree that the hand on the shoulder was too much, too soon. It was obvious that Slendy and Michael have a history together, but the nature of the relationship is too vague, and thats the series biggest problem - None of the characters interact with each other the way they should.

For example, Eric's behaviour suggested that he has dealt Michael's illness for a while and he resents him for it for whatever reason; Slenderman switches between wanting to rip off the character's faces to well, nurturing Michael.

I would've expanded on this a bit more, but the pizza man is here and in my list priorities, food always comes first.

Feel free to dispute my interpretation, I'm just anon here, after all.

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Robodashy
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I am LOVING this. It's very well done, and I love the direction they're going with it. Anyways....

Slendy was not "in between the blinds" reflection of said blinds.
I love the sneaky slendy in the doorway of the accusing vid - you can see him in the left side of the doorway just as they leave the room before the camera interference.

I also love the latest video where slendy was there as his emotions started running high. The touch on the arm adds to the projection theory, and I think we'll find that Slendy is going to do some damage when people start getting in Michaels way. Can't wait!

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noskirt6
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Hm. Mixed feelings on the "gloved hand" ... wish you couldn't see the separate fingers (I've always assumed that Slender man didn't have actual "hands" ... to add to his less than human-ness). Otherwise though, that was pretty well done.

"I didn't want to hurt him. I didn't hurt him."

Did he attack Shaun at some point perhaps? Before or after going to the hospital? Or maybe he walked in on Shaun recording him that message and... fought with him then? Who knows.

Another thing I found interesting is the tag "entry8FINAL2"

So... final entry is #8?

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