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[LOCKED] TJ and Amy Film Projects
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mokie
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I may be alone on this, but I like not having a fancy camera and nightvision that catches every damn twig in full green glory and which is always conveniently pointed in exactly the right spot to catch full-on Slendy action, carefully sandwiched between earrape and technicolor distortion. It's more believable to me, and it makes the prank discussion more believable.

Fave thing at the mo: offhand mention of a nosebleed. Nice sideways nod to TT and its contribution to Slendersickness?

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Luipaard
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mokie wrote:
I may be alone on this, but I like not having a fancy camera and nightvision that catches every damn twig in full green glory and which is always conveniently pointed in exactly the right spot to catch full-on Slendy action, carefully sandwiched between earrape and technicolor distortion. It's more believable to me, and it makes the prank discussion more believable.

Fave thing at the mo: offhand mention of a nosebleed. Nice sideways nod to TT and its contribution to Slendersickness?


Ditto all this. Subscribed!
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J.Fawkes
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Guess what everybody!

http://youtu.be/C2ZlAjeFUTM

My net is being slow, but I shall post feedback as soon as I can watch the video

EDIT:

Alright, so, finally being able to see them in daylight, I really like their characters even more, they're very interesting. They're very natural, and even when Amy (I think?) was acting crazy it was natural to the story. It was hard to figure out why they were carrying the camera around though, at this point in the story it has little purpose. Also, the guy is a terrible actor.

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I really like the distortion effect, and their Slendy looks pretty good too. I can't wait to see him more in future entries. Could use some audio distortion though. And the transition between Slendy showing up and opening the door was a little poor, this could be easily fixed and should probably be paid more attention to in the future


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ZomgShaylex
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Yay! This is looking good so far.
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SuperPopsicleThorn
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ZomgShaylex wrote:
Yay! This is looking good so far.

The blood and everything looks good, but I'm just not sold on the whole women thing.

Her friend was violently assaulted and had her arms torn open and she's assuming that their buddy did it. And now a whole week later she still thinks that her buddy, who is not even in the same state, is responsible. AND HOW THE BLOODY NUTFUCK DOES NOBODY ON THE CAMPUS NOTICE THAT THERE'S A GIRL RUNNING ABOUT WITH HUGE FUCKING GASHES IN HER ARMS. IT'S BEEN THAT WAY FOR A WEEK, WOULDN'T SOMEBODY FUCKING SAY SOMETHING?

And she has said nothing about calling the cops or seeking help from anyone except the internet. This is why women shouldn't be allowed to do things.

But yeah, I'm going to keep watching this.

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astrella_cami
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Update.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9-wQRoqx4LQ&feature=feedu

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Demongel
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All aboard the crazy train! Next stop: Amy.
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mokie
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J.Fawkes wrote:
It was hard to figure out why they were carrying the camera around though, at this point in the story it has little purpose. Also, the guy is a terrible actor.


I took it as documenting the crazy, since the opening bit was commenting on the crazy and asking for help.

I like the comparison of shopping habits, though. Alex goes for extra tapes so he can keep taping, Noah goes for Doritos so his cousin can be molested by tentacles, Amy goes for energy drinks for to never sleep again.

@SuperPopsicleThorn: Amy's not running all over campus. Amy doesn't want to leave the room. Probably not that many people taking notice of the big bloody gashes. She's also acting like a meth freak, and people do love to avoid that kind of trouble by pretending they just didn't see it.

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astrella_cami
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I've got a theory on why Amy has become unstable so quickly. Maybe when Slenderman 'grabbed' her, her mind couldn't handle it and she's terrified he's marked her and made Amy not see or not believe. That's just my 2 cents.

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Ouroborus
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I'm a little bit more down on it after the last two entries. From a storytelling standpoint, I wonder if they should take a less is more standpoint. They probably could have taken the first 4 videos and turned them into just two, combining the first 3 into something more concise. And I understand what they were doing with the 5th video, it probably shouldn't have been longer than 5 minutes.

I still like what they're doing. I really appreciated the quick updates. The business with Jake seems uber odd.

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I am convinced the girls filming this live in my hometown. The scenery is way way way WAY too similar to not be where I live. Shocked

Also, I dig the tone and direction this one is taking. It's very different from most other vlogs.

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Cire
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Anybody else noticed they freaked out the little girl in the store? How's she going to deal with that?

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Ouroborus
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Watson wrote:
I am convinced the girls filming this live in my hometown. The scenery is way way way WAY too similar to not be where I live. Shocked

Also, I dig the tone and direction this one is taking. It's very different from most other vlogs.


I'm assuming it's Champaign, due to the info they give. Dunno about the first four videos.

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J.Fawkes
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http://youtu.be/iV2ZMi_pYKU

Further proof that Slendy just standing still in the background is far more terrifying than anything you can possibly think of

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Ouroborus
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another one? These girls are MACHINES

edit: It's weird. You can't really tell, but it looks like that Slendy isn't behind the car. It look's like a reflection in the rear window...like he's in front.


But like I said, it's not really clear.

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