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TheFallenenvoy · Entrenched Joined: 08 Apr 2011 Posts: 847

[DEAD SERIES] The dreaming room (deeply terrible vlog)

**Posted:** Thu Apr 14, 2011 2:53 am

BoatWithAHoleInIt · Decorated Joined: 27 Feb 2011 Posts: 268

Yeah, he wasn't trying. I mean, the guest name was "idontlike2080twetyeightY". It would be like calling myself "BoatWithAHoleInItSucksAss"

**Posted:** Thu Apr 14, 2011 6:02 am

IonCharge · Veteran Joined: 03 Mar 2011 Posts: 131

I'm loving the amazing *random cough* acting skills

Well it looks like they might have planned this, but its just them reading random stuff off a computer while they have funky distortion going on. Plot? What's that?

**Posted:** Thu Apr 14, 2011 6:25 am

DaLadybugMan · Decorated Joined: 15 Dec 2010 Posts: 186

Serious advice, Dreaming Roomers: make stuff, but don't put them out for the public to see. Find someone who will give brutally honest advice, but won't troll like everyone here is inclined to (myself included, admittedly). Get feedback, learn how to do things better, get experience, and then work on improving your skills. Come back in a year or two, maybe. Your hearts are in the right place, but (and you're not going to want to hear this) your work's not particularly good. You have ideas, and you have heart, but you don't quite know how to make those ideas *good* ideas, or how to execute them properly. That comes with time and experience. Keep making videos, but if you keep showing them to us, we'll just keep mocking you, and that's not exactly healthy for you guys.

Or, you know, embrace that your series is cheesy and just take us mocking it in good humor. Because while our feedback isn't exactly constructive, we are giving you guys feedback.

**Posted:** Thu Apr 14, 2011 5:58 pm

SadlyChamo

My first thoughts.

**Posted:** Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:32 pm

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**Posted:** Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:14 pm

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JustAQ · Decorated Joined: 22 Mar 2011 Posts: 155

Are they old enough to be using youtube?

On a serious note, this is bad. I couldn't write scripts for shit when I was their age (and I can't now) but I never made a video of it. I like the concept, just the execution is shit.

**Posted:** Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:28 pm

TheFallenenvoy · Entrenched Joined: 08 Apr 2011 Posts: 847

**Posted:** Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:50 pm

FreakayBrandon · Boot Joined: 31 Mar 2011 Posts: 12

I'm not going to see this one. Even though I haven't seen 2080, I don't want to risk it.

This is what worries me when I want to make my series someday. I have no experience with acting and I always have that worry about criticism. If anyone can give me tips, that would be awesome.

Anyway, I'm skipping this series.

**Posted:** Fri Apr 15, 2011 8:52 pm

IonCharge · Veteran Joined: 03 Mar 2011 Posts: 131

**Posted:** Sat Apr 16, 2011 3:01 pm

TheFallenenvoy · Entrenched Joined: 08 Apr 2011 Posts: 847

**Posted:** Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:20 pm

tarantulatook

Sub'd!

EDIT: Gigantic SIGH at their distortion.

**Posted:** Mon Apr 18, 2011 4:40 pm

Das Omega · Unfettered Joined: 07 Oct 2010 Posts: 345

Just going to toss my views in here, but I'm not really that bothered with this series. It isn't a wonderful, quality show out there, but I have nothing against them trying to make a series. When you first start working in a creative field, most of your early stuff is going to be bad. When I look at the stories I wrote when I was their age, about 90% of it is complete utter crap. But that crap was part of the learning process, and it helped me improve. People who are younger and more inexperienced aren't going to be producing things as high quality as those who've had practice. Now, this doesn't make them immune to criticism; in fact, it means they need criticism more, as it helps them improve. But it's no reason for them to stop making things entirely.

So long as they don't keep posting here about the series, I have no problems with it existing. I'm actually a regular follower; there's a soft spot in my heart for things which I can't take seriously. Very Happy

**Posted:** Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:37 pm

The Kempest

I just noticed that Jeff is subscribed to thedreamingroom. Heh.

**Posted:** Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:50 pm

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IonCharge · Veteran Joined: 03 Mar 2011 Posts: 131

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=epBwh8r2jC4&feature=feedu

Looks like the series is actually going somewhere.
Even though the acting is shocking

**Posted:** Sun Apr 24, 2011 5:14 pm