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[SPEC] Marble Hornets, the ending
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Spritey
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awakeasaurusrex wrote:
The final entry depicts Jay driving to a dark, forested location. He stops suddenly when he finds the Operator, standing in the middle of the road. He does not run. He does not even speak. He leaves his camera on the dashboard and gets out the car. After a bit we see him dragging a gagged and bound Jessica out of the car and lays her at the Operator's feet. He talks to the Operator for a while; there's no sign of the Operator's "mouth" moving and we can't quite here what Jay is saying. After a bit Jay gets in the car and turns off the camera.

A series of splash screens state the following:

"It's over."

"The condition for my safety is that I cease producing videos concerning the Operator."

"I have been permitted to post this Entry to announce my retirement."

"The investigation is over. I still don't know who the faceless man is."

"At this point, I honestly don't care."

"I'm sorry, Jessica."

Last frame is an operator symbol.


I actually really like this.

It would have to be post-climax though. As an ending alone, it seems like kind of a letdown.

The climax has to somehow involve teaming up with TTA to find the ark.

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I want this ending. With the marble hornets characters, of course.

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freyathedark
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ThinSuit wrote:


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I want this ending. With the marble hornets characters, of course.


Holy crap. Where did you get that? That is.. wow. Very creepy, oddly enough...

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ThinSuit
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freyathedark wrote:
ThinSuit wrote:


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I want this ending. With the marble hornets characters, of course.


Holy crap. Where did you get that? That is.. wow. Very creepy, oddly enough...

It's r33mix videos, he got more creepys videos with tf2 on his channel

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freyathedark
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More with Slendy too?

I think I just found my new timewaster.

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freyathedark wrote:
More with Slendy too?

I think I just found my new timewaster.

Yup, there is more with Slendy

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WhyYouBawwing
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Thanks much Thinsuit!

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Spritey
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TF2theark?

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Spritey wrote:
TF2theark?


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awakeasaurusrex wrote:

The final entry depicts Jay driving to a dark, forested location. He stops suddenly when he finds the Operator, standing in the middle of the road. He does not run. He does not even speak. He leaves his camera on the dashboard and gets out the car. After a bit we see him dragging a gagged and bound Jessica out of the car and lays her at the Operator's feet. He talks to the Operator for a while; there's no sign of the Operator's "mouth" moving and we can't quite here what Jay is saying. After a bit Jay gets in the car and turns off the camera.

A series of splash screens state the following:

"It's over."

"The condition for my safety is that I cease producing videos concerning the Operator."

"I have been permitted to post this Entry to announce my retirement."

"The investigation is over. I still don't know who the faceless man is."

"At this point, I honestly don't care."

"I'm sorry, Jessica."

Last frame is an operator symbol.


This is a fantastic scenario; it'd be a hell of an ending and it wouldn't be uncomfortably happy and unrealistic. That being said, I'd actually hate to see something like this happen. I can't see Jay doing something like this. I wouldn't feel let down by it--like I said, awesome idea--but I'd feel so betrayed just by Jay as a character and my affection for him. The whole series he's impressed me as being such a nice, normal guy at base. I'd be borderline heartbroken to see him driven to this. XD

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WhyYouBawwing
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Here are two non-serious endings I've imagined for Mh recently:
1. Jay finally encounters TTA, Tim, and the Operator simultaneously and being sick and tired of having to keep track of all these new people appearing in his life, he finally develops the brain cells necessary to shoot each villain, then get shocked at what he's just done before proceeding to run back to his car and drive away into the unknown while we hear Imogen Heap faintly playing on his radio.

2. We receive another months long gap between episodes and when we finally get a new entry, we find out what happened to everyone: Tim got arrested and sent to prison in Florida while Alex was arrested alongside Tim but had to have his left arm amputated due to unsanitary heroin use. Meanwhile, Jessica was dragged into sexual slavery by Slenderman and Brian became addicted to diet pills and is now in a mental hospital receiving electrotherapy because fuck Brian. Wait, I've seen this story somewhere else before...something to do with darkly colored lake birds and Mickey Rourke?

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The Kempest
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I've been toying with this one for a while:

Jessica, in her new apartment, free of any paranormal entities, or even the memory of her time with the Operator, finds a box on her doorstep. She opens the box to reveal tapes. And a camera. She makes a Youtube account, and posts a video.

"I've decided to begin going through the tapes later tonight. If I don't do it now, I probably never will."

The first two videos she uploads are as follows:


Jay finally finds out who TTA is, and calls Alex with the good news. Alex says they should meet up, and tackle this thing together. Jay holds the camera up to his face, revealing a smile. He says he's glad they've finally solved this mystery, and that they're one step closer to being free.

The first video ends.

When he gets to the meeting place, Mr. Unreliable Narrator realizes he was wrong, and Alex is TTA. He knows this because TTAlex attacks him. TTAlex lunges for Jay, overpowering him easily. He grabs the camera, because why not, and drags him off towards the red tower. Before they reach the tower, however, Timasky shows up and stabs TTAlex again. The two fight for a while, with neither coming out on top.

TTAlex gets the knife from Timasky, and drives it into his gut. Timasky produces a handgun (the same one Brian used; I'll get to that later) and shoots TTAlex. He stumbles toward Jay and the camera, but collapses due to blood loss. Jay recovers some time afterward, and, misunderstanding the scene, picks up the gun and turns it on Timasky, who is still alive, but barely.

Jay kills Timasky.

Alex coughs, and Jay runs to his side. In his last moments, Alex taunts him, telling him that Seth and Sarah were killed by the Operator--because of Alex. He tells Jay that Brian would have been killed too, if he hadn't killed himself with the very gun Jay used to finish off his only remaining ally with.

Jay, rightfully horrified, turns to look at Timasky. The Operator is there. Jay tries to get away, but the Operator is behind him again. With nowhere else to run, Jay dives into the red tower, gun and camera in hand. For the remaining minutes of the entry, Jay runs through the creepy Slendercave. He runs down what turns out to be a dead end, and he turns to see the Operator, moving closer and closer. Almost as if he's gliding down the hallway.

Jay pulls the trigger.

On himself.


Black screen. White text. Jessica's words. She vows to find the Operator and kill it. For Jay. For everyone the Operator's killed. For herself.

The story, we're left to imagine, has begun again.

(It should be obvious from this post, but I feel it needs to be said: I am totally rooting for a dark-as-hell ending.)
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WhyYouBawwing
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That's a Michael Bay-Platinum Dunes climax if I ever read one!

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I like your second ending. Good movie. Very Happy
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"I'm gonna find this thing and kill it! For me, for every-"
"Jessica.....err"
"Its right behind me, isn't it"
"Yep"
"fuuu-"
*Camera cuts out and Kempest's MH ending ends*

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