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andrewjneis · Greenhorn Joined: 21 May 2011 Posts: 5

THE WATCHER - New web series inspired by Marble Hornets

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 4:37 pm

JohnSmith · Boot Joined: 08 May 2011 Posts: 48 Location: Belgium

decent quality, not bad acting, although the beginning is a lot of monologue but I'm probably just a lazy watcher haha Wink

This looks promising though, cheers! I enjoyed watching it

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 5:06 pm

JohnSmith · Boot Joined: 08 May 2011 Posts: 48 Location: Belgium

in all fairness, I just watched everything of that series, enthousiast yes. But your compadre playing the cop isn't very convincing

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 5:14 pm

andrewjneis · Greenhorn Joined: 21 May 2011 Posts: 5

Sweet, thanks! I am also trying to figure out how to publicize it - does anyone know what Marble Hornets did?

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 5:25 pm

JohnSmith · Boot Joined: 08 May 2011 Posts: 48 Location: Belgium

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 5:43 pm

Anonymousity · Entrenched Joined: 20 Aug 2010 Posts: 1125

Hey man,

OK, so don't panic - but this thread may well be deleted.

See, the problem for the admins is that it's forbidden to post about your story/ARG/series yourselves. Especially if you post it out of character as you did. I didn't make that up, so don't blame me. Wink

However, your series is good, and there are some ways to promote it. For example, PM one of the posters on here who post a lot, and ask them kindly to promote your series by making a thread. This works wonders. Smile

There's also one poster who publishes every link he'll get sent, as long as the show is good. I'll leave it to you to figure out who it is.

So yeah, what else?? Pretty good series from what I've seen so far, but be sure to lock this thread or prepare for its deletion and get a new one started by contacting somebody. Cool

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 6:03 pm

andrewjneis · Greenhorn Joined: 21 May 2011 Posts: 5

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 7:07 pm

JohnSmith · Boot Joined: 08 May 2011 Posts: 48 Location: Belgium

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 7:21 pm

andrewjneis · Greenhorn Joined: 21 May 2011 Posts: 5

Ah okay. Well onwards to deletion, then.

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 7:47 pm

Sebastrios · Veteran Joined: 03 Dec 2010 Posts: 93

Is your series even Slenderman related?! Confused

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 9:03 pm

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ChildOfAtom

andrewjneis, we'll give you a pass on posting this yourself, but next time take it to the TrailheadTroll if you can't find anyone else. He's taken on the job of posting stuff like this for people.

The real rule, and the one we won't tolerate being broken, is discussing your own project within this thread. Lurk, read along, enjoy the compliments (or learn from the criticism) but let your audience enjoy it without your input.

I would like you to PM me though and let me know if this story is Slender Man related, or just inspired. It may determine where this thread lives. Thank you!

**Posted:** Sat May 21, 2011 9:15 pm

WhyYouBawwing · Unfettered Joined: 05 May 2011 Posts: 516

Looks promising but the dialogue sounds very awkward and wooden.

**Posted:** Sun May 22, 2011 3:46 am

Corvus42 · Veteran Joined: 07 Feb 2011 Posts: 138

I like it. though your characters seem to have missed the fact that lying to the police after posting the evidence on youtube may not have been the best idea. Very Happy

A question though - is this actually slendy or a separate, slendy inspired character?

**Posted:** Sun May 22, 2011 7:38 am

andrewjneis · Greenhorn Joined: 21 May 2011 Posts: 5

Thank you for all the awesome feedback! Let's delete this thread, then, and start over from scratch with a re-post from someone else.

**Posted:** Sun May 22, 2011 1:22 pm

ChildOfAtom

Locking this thread at the request of the OP. Look for news regarding this series in the News and Rumors section.

**Posted:** Sun May 22, 2011 1:28 pm