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[SPEC] Marble Hornets, the ending
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Randoman96
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WhyYouBawwing wrote:
That's a Michael Bay-Platinum Dunes climax if I ever read one!


MICHAEL BAY PRESENTS:
MARBLE HORNETS

[explosions, leaving (X) in the ash]

FEATURING EXCITING AN ALL STAR CAST:
EXPLOSION #1
EXPLOSION #2
FALLING BUILDING JR.
EXPLOSION #3
SLENDER MAN WITH FIRE FOR A FACE
EXPLOSION #74

AND INTRODUCING:
JAY WITH A FLAMETHROWER
TIM WITH C4 PLASTIC EXPLOSIVES
TOTHEARK WITH M16s
ROBOT SETH
GIANT DINOSAUR JESSICA
AND FORTY-THREE NEW CHARACTERS YOU'VE NEVER EVEN SEEN.


THIS MEMORIAL DAY WEEKEND, WE'RE GONNA BLOW YOUR FUCKING MIND.

MICHAEL BAY PRESENTS: MARBLE HORNETS.
Rated R for retarded meaningless special effects every three seconds
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Timur
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Dont expect to actually understand what is going on; that is unnessecary. All you really needed to understand is that a blackflipping Operator is firing rockets out of tentacles (That have weird drilly-sawy-pointy things attached). This makes obvious sense.

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Randoman96
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Also disregard the robots fighting in the background of the new version of Entry #19, where Masky breathes fire and breaks the window with the guitar in the corner, which shatters into millions of CGI pieces, which then turn into little glass robots and they fight until they shatter again.

You don't even want to know what goes on in the new #35.
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Son of a bitch, I want this to be real SO BAD.
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Randoman96
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Not necissarially the ending, but a random idea I had.
REMINDER: This is not a valid theory, nor an expectation. Simply an idea.

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[Entry 48]

[I decided to go back to the hotel.]

(Cut to camera shot of Jay moving up the stairs of the hotel. He comes into the hallway, and makes his way down to the two rooms he and Jessica were staying in. He tries his card on his room, it beeps red and does not open. He tries to open Jessica's room, it does not open either. The camera points down at the bottom of the door.)

JAY: -sigh-

(White envelope can be seen sticking out from the bottom of the door. Jay's arm reaches down to grab it, opens it, revealing a key card for the door. He tries it, it opens. He walks inside, the room completely cleaned up, no sign of mess from the last time he was there. The television remote lies ontop of a VHS tape on the bed. Jay inspects it. The label reads: 'PLAY'. Jay picks up the remote and turns on the television and inserts the tape into the VCR at the bottom. The tape plays and shows Jessica walking around her room, packing clothes, seemingly in a rush. The timestamp in the lower left reads 1/19/11. Her cell phone rings, she answers.)

JESSICA [ON TAPE]: Hello? -pause- Uh, who is this? -pause- His name is Jay, why? -pause- He never mentioned anything like that....Who are you?

(She pulls the phone away from her ear and looks at it. The caller has hung up. She puts the phone down and moves closer to the camera. She focuses it on her face.)

JESSICA [ON TAPE]: Entry...14. Jay's told me that we're leaving today. I'm okay with that. I don't like it around here. I just got a call from someone asking me if Jay had told me about something called the ark. I wonder if that has anything to do with what I found a couple months ago... -pause- Anyway, we're leaving, and I don't know when I'll be able to update again, and I-

(A loud bang is heard from the next room. She takes the camera and stands up, going to investigate. She opens the door to Jay's room, he is not there. His room safe is open, and empty, the bed covers a mess and no evidence of his belongings. She looks around the hallway. It's different than what Jay went through in #33. A low humming noise is heard. She turns around, and Tim, still in his mask, runs through the doorway after her, limping slightly, and reaching for her.)

TIM [ON TAPE]: [low, gutteral, almost inhuman sounding] NO!

(She runs down the hall, near the stairs, but before she can get there, the low hum amplifies. The camera turns to reveal The Operator standing in the doorway leading to the stairs. The video cuts to static, and ends.)

-end of entry video-
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onetruepurple
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I want this ending. With the marble hornets characters, of course.

0:17 was totally a nod to Entry #1...

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pravado
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i want it to end with jay/alex figuring out the secrets to the operator and find "the ark" only to realize it's a room where the cast members of marble hornets had been taken and kept for 4 years, all of them look sick, weak, and near death. as they enter the door closes behind them and they can never get out. jay uploads the entry from his laptop that he brought with him, but once the battery on it dies they're left to rot in there for all of eternity. kind of grim but i don't want a supernatural ending or a "we killed slendy" ending.

i feel like it can't end on something like jay being dragged away b/c then who will upload the entry?

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The Kempest
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Live Ustream. We'd just need Masky or some shit to look at the webcam and shut it off.
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The Kempest wrote:
Live Ustream. We'd just need Masky or some shit to look at the webcam and shut it off.


^This.

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bobthecrusher
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Randoman96 wrote:
Not necissarially the ending, but a random idea I had.
REMINDER: This is not a valid theory, nor an expectation. Simply an idea.

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[Entry 48]

[I decided to go back to the hotel.]

(Cut to camera shot of Jay moving up the stairs of the hotel. He comes into the hallway, and makes his way down to the two rooms he and Jessica were staying in. He tries his card on his room, it beeps red and does not open. He tries to open Jessica's room, it does not open either. The camera points down at the bottom of the door.)

JAY: -sigh-

(White envelope can be seen sticking out from the bottom of the door. Jay's arm reaches down to grab it, opens it, revealing a key card for the door. He tries it, it opens. He walks inside, the room completely cleaned up, no sign of mess from the last time he was there. The television remote lies ontop of a VHS tape on the bed. Jay inspects it. The label reads: 'PLAY'. Jay picks up the remote and turns on the television and inserts the tape into the VCR at the bottom. The tape plays and shows Jessica walking around her room, packing clothes, seemingly in a rush. The timestamp in the lower left reads 1/19/11. Her cell phone rings, she answers.)

JESSICA [ON TAPE]: Hello? -pause- Uh, who is this? -pause- His name is Jay, why? -pause- He never mentioned anything like that....Who are you?

(She pulls the phone away from her ear and looks at it. The caller has hung up. She puts the phone down and moves closer to the camera. She focuses it on her face.)

JESSICA [ON TAPE]: Entry...14. Jay's told me that we're leaving today. I'm okay with that. I don't like it around here. I just got a call from someone asking me if Jay had told me about something called the ark. I wonder if that has anything to do with what I found a couple months ago... -pause- Anyway, we're leaving, and I don't know when I'll be able to update again, and I-

(A loud bang is heard from the next room. She takes the camera and stands up, going to investigate. She opens the door to Jay's room, he is not there. His room safe is open, and empty, the bed covers a mess and no evidence of his belongings. She looks around the hallway. It's different than what Jay went through in #33. A low humming noise is heard. She turns around, and Tim, still in his mask, runs through the doorway after her, limping slightly, and reaching for her.)

TIM [ON TAPE]: [low, gutteral, almost inhuman sounding] NO!

(She runs down the hall, near the stairs, but before she can get there, the low hum amplifies. The camera turns to reveal The Operator standing in the doorway leading to the stairs. The video cuts to static, and ends.)

-end of entry video-


This, I like

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guillaume
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totheark video
The following are raw footage excerpts from Jay(whatever Jay's last name is)
Jay and Alex walking through the woods
Jay says theres only about a minute on the tape
(entry 38 ending)
Alex says wait, and hands Jay the chestcam.
Jay still puts another tape in, and is recording with both cameras.
They walk for a bit and Alex begins to get paranoid.
Alex: wait here *goes up the trail*
There are screams heard
Jay runs to where alex is, it is the location of entry 29.
Jay yells for alex, then sees the Operator at the end of the tunnel.
Jay sets his camera down, and runs towards the operator(switch to chestcam footage)
Chestcam keeps getting more and more distorted, different angles of the operator are shown
(switch to camera that is left behind)
Hoody(TTA) comes up to the camera, and picks it up.
Hoody takes off his mask. he is alex. Jay and the Operator are nowhere to be found.
(cut to footage of alex driving)
His phone rings, the caller ID is Jay.
He answers.
Alex: Found you. Forever

Cut to black
(X)ver.

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guillaume wrote:
totheark video
The following are raw footage excerpts from Jay(whatever Jay's last name is)
Jay and Alex walking through the woods
Jay says theres only about a minute on the tape
(entry 38 ending)
Alex says wait, and hands Jay the chestcam.
Jay still puts another tape in, and is recording with both cameras.
They walk for a bit and Alex begins to get paranoid.
Alex: wait here *goes up the trail*
There are screams heard
Jay runs to where alex is, it is the location of entry 29.
Jay yells for alex, then sees the Operator at the end of the tunnel.
Jay sets his camera down, and runs towards the operator(switch to chestcam footage)
Chestcam keeps getting more and more distorted, different angles of the operator are shown
(switch to camera that is left behind)
Hoody(TTA) comes up to the camera, and picks it up.
Hoody takes off his mask. he is alex. Jay and the Operator are nowhere to be found.
(cut to footage of alex driving)
His phone rings, the caller ID is Jay.
He answers.
Alex: Found you. Forever

Cut to black
(X)ver.


I definitely like the idea of tying in old entries that have yet to make sense.
However, that ending seems a bit too cheesy for the overall mood of the series... Hm...

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Randoman96
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A sudden ending is not a just fitting for the series. As long as a majority of the questions we have were resolved, and the stories were wrapped up, it would be interesting to see something like, Jay dying, the last entry uploaded by TTA or Masky.

But a sudden "hurr durr end" type of ending is not good enough from the series, and that is not what I expect.
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The Kempest
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Yeah, in all honesty, I can only see the last episode(s) being TTA footage. Particularly aimed at us for being targeted by the Operator now that we've seen it.
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Just threw this together.

Setting: Dead of night

{Jay finally reaches the warehouse ToTheArk has been leading him to}

{Jay enters the warehouse and is soon pushed to the ground}

{Someone grabs the camera and starts filming Jays struggle}

{The warehouse lights are flipped on and light up one row by one}

{camera focuses on hoody}

Hoody: Hello Jay and welcome to the ark!

{Jay starts to panic}

Jay: What do you want?!

{Hoody tilts head}

Hoody: For you to stop fucking breathing! {kicks Jay in the face}

{Jay spits blood as he screams in pain}

Jay: Why are you doing this to me!

{Hoody quickly takes off mask to reveal Jessica}

Jessica: Are you telling me you don't remember?!

{signals camera man}

Jay: Jessica? WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!

{camera man puts down camera (still focused on Jay and Jessica) and leaves the warehouse}

Jessica: Stop avoiding my question!

{kicks Jay again}

{Jessica kneels down to Jays level, grabs Jay by the face and brings it close to hers}

Jessica: {whispers} I gave you plenty of hints…..

Jessica: Messages, {voice gets increasingly louder to the point of screaming}, signal, broadcast!

{throws Jay back to the ground}

Jessica: You're pathetic {pulls out knife}

{Alex rushes in}

Alex: Jessica stop!

Jessica: Alex? What are you doing here?

Alex: Please, I beg of you! Let Jay go…

Alex: He had nothing to do with this!

Jessica: You're delusional…

{turns back to Alex and goes to finish Jay}

Alex: I'M THE ONE WHO KILLED SARAH!

{Jessica freezes and turns back around}

Jessica: You lie!

Jessica: Jay killed my sister! YOU SAID SO YOURSELF!

{Brian walks in carrying Tim who is gagged and tied up}

{Brian throws Tim to the ground}

{Brian grabs camera}

Alex: Tim?

{Tim goes crazy when he sees Alex and tries his hardest to break free}

Jessica: LOOK AT ME WHEN IM TALKING TO YOU!

{stabs alex}

{alex falls to the ground screaming in pain}

Alex: {choking on blood} I f-framed Jay. A-and told Brian that Jay was coming after him next (heavy breathing). Tim found out about me and I di-did anything in my power to keep him quiet. I was so caught up in the film that I mixed my ambien with my ibuprofin and a and an

Jessica: and you went on a delusional rampage and killed my sister…

Jessica: You son of a bitch!

Jay: {trying his best to get up} Bu-But what about the operator? And my memory loss?

Jessica: THERE WAS NEVER ANY OPERATOR! Those were just the side effects of the drug combination I gave you…

Jay: YOU'RE WRONG JESSICA! I CAUGHT EVERYTHING ON TAPE AND YOU KNOW IT!

Jessica: You know what? I don't really care any more!

{lunges towards Alex with knife}

{video starts distorting}

Brian: JESSICA WATCH OUT!

{Jessica is pierced by one of the operators tentacles}

{Brian drops camera}

{Screams and struggles can be heard}

{Video distortion gets progressively worse}

{video cuts to black}

Seth received this video footage and jays account info from an unknown individual. Seth uploads the video to Jays account explaining after that Jay, Alex, Jessica, Tim and Brian were all found dead at the warehouse.

I just pulled this ending out of my ass, but it's pretty damn cool.

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