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[MrMole]

 [DEAD SERIES] WatchingWhiteBalance

[SoulHammer]

First off self promotion isn't allowed on this forum.

Second, your blog starts so unnaturally. In the second entry you're talking about someone moving your camera. I haven't read on but that's way to fast for a blog to have strange stuff happen in my opinion.

Thirdly, the video isn't very good. It's short which is a good thing. The blaring distortion makes me immediately turn off a video nowadays, if you need to rely on that to make people frightened then you need to rethink things.

[MrMole]

Oh right, I wasn't aware it wasn't allowed.

Also, the thing about someone moving my camera and breaking it was actually true, un-related to the blog.

Finally, thanks for the feedback on the distortion, though I won't be putting it in all the time, in fact very rarely. It was just there needed to be some kind of prompt for Cameron to go back there and Investigate.

But like I said, thanks for the feedback.

[taylortexas]

Yeah, self-promotion is a big no-no here and the same goes for posting in a thread about your series. You should consider it a good thing though, because nothing hurts a series quite like pointing out and explaining every little detail OOG. You don't want to pull back the curtain this early, it's all about mystery. Keep your audience guessing. There's not too much to go off yet, although I'll agree the distortion is a bit too in-your-face. The distortion has been a great tool in building suspense for these series, but don't go overboard with it. That said, you already mentioned that you plan on using it sparingly so no big deal. I'll have to keep watching before I get a solid opinion on it.

[The_Jewels_91x]

Personally, I will have to read the blog more and watch more videos you upload before I will tell you my true feelings and opinions on your work. I think that it's hard to give a solid answer when blogs and vlogs are just starting. I will tell you keep it original, try not to rip off the other established series. I can see some positional for this series. I would make sure everything is well thought out and really developed before posting another post on your blog.

[ChildOfAtom]

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