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[CyberHawk]

Great entry. It felt tense the whole way through. I loved loved loved how Tim got some serious development this time around, and coupled with his acting skills, we really got a good insight into Tim's character. We see a man recovered from being haunted by the Operator who had somehow recovered, just to be drawn back in by a clueless guy with a camera. This is good story-telling.

From here, Jay is on his own. Since Tim has no answers for him, Jay is probably going to search for Hoodie, probably at that building near the annex. I see Jay going into that maintenance tunnel pretty soon.

[slendydreaming]

Wow, that was amazing! I'm glad they went this way, with Tim discovering the Youtube channel, but I do wish they'd at least mentioned the Operator. From what Tim said, I wonder if maybe he didn't watch every episode, but I do find it interesting that he blames Alex for everything (and now Jay, of course) and I don't blame him for wanting to just leave it alone and be normal.

[badluckshadow13]

[sweetgums]

Lots of self-lampshading in this entry. My favorite bits:

[Dr.Block]

Tim seems to imply that he once went into masky mode and didn't come out of it for a full three weeks. Why would that be? I thought he just slipped into masky at night.

[rand__althor]

[Star Kindler]

Wow, this entry was very raw, emotionally. And while Tim makes some excellent points, he seems to forget some things, like

1) If not for Jay that wouldn't be a broken leg Tim woke up with but a good case of the deads.

2) Jay knows exactly what it feels like to wake up in a car miles from nowhere with no memory of how he got there. Don't know about the blood in the hair part though

3) Um, why didn't he tell you, Tim? Did you miss all the times you attacked Jay on camera? Or the time you kidnapped him from his bed and placed him the same hallway as The Operator? I might be leery with my trust after that too.

4) Jay has done something. He attacked The Operator, the only character so far we have seen to do this. And that camera work is good for detection when memory wipes are common.

But that said I understand Tim's reaction entirely. And it's why I liked this entry so much, despite how uncomfortable it was. It should have been uncomfortable and awkward, this isn't exactly an easy thing to talk about. I think Tim will calm down eventually and come to Jay again, albeit grudgingly, because he is going to realize he can't run away from this. That it will just keep finding him until he puts a final stop to it.

[Ithilwen22]

[Keegah]

Maybe I'm just a dick, but I wouldn't have been as meek as Jay was here. I would have mentioned that Tim as Masky inserted himself into the investigation when he fucking tackled me, and then watched me while I was sleeping in my own house in my own bed, and then - odds are - burned my goddamn apartment. I sure as hell wouldn't have just let him drive away.

Again, I understand Tim's anger, but in my view, he doesn't have a right to a calm life, when he's already inserted himself into Jay's.

[Theory SH]

[saksxalmo]

[Flyleaf(IntoTheMist)Wolfi]

[Enzd]

[Masky]

I'm surprised that no character has searched for MH sooner. [/spoiler]

[sweetgums]