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[VIDEO] Entry #60
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ReverendJ
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Whisku wrote:
pravado wrote:
Last thing I want to mention

Big Op practically let's jay go in this one. He zooms up to jay in an instant, than when jay reaches the pipes he turns around and the operator is gone. Why even bother showing up down there if you're gonna let him get away...

I never thought about the slender doll's eyes before, and I hate how there is always one past entry to throw off a theory (in this case, 45)


Hey, look. Something that's not irrelevantly critical.
Seriously, you're worse than my mom.


Your mom wasn't so bad last night.

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t3hkender
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pravado wrote:
t3hkender wrote:
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Also after frame by framing I gotta criticize that operator apperance

I don't think close up appearances of his face like that work too well. Entry 40 worked well bc it was only his body. In this one his face looks kind of wide and he has no neck.

And I kind of get what Troy is going for with the distortion, but if the distortion is what prolongs entries than I think less time could be spent on it. I love the split picture (top and bottom half of pic not matching up) and the distortion bars, but the 8-bit chunks taken out of the frame (sort of like entry 36) and random filtered operator faces probably take a while to edit in and go by way too fast for people to even notice them. Just my 2c

Slendy being in that tunnel just doesn't fit (no pun intended). I bet they were like "fuck our dumb fans saying he can't fit in there, lets do this just to prove them wrong"


I'm still waiting for you to make your own series so that we can criticize every minute detail of your storytelling.


Please don't be one of those guys who doesn't get the difference between criticism and hatred. I'm not saying I could do better than they could, doesn't mean i can't judge the material they put out.


Hard to tell the difference when I only ever see you post criticism. The last several entries you've been a buzzkill. It gets old. Just enjoy it like the rest of us, already. Jeez.


Maybe you only browse topics the night of entires being posted? I post plenty of non criticism in the downtime between entries.

You clearly don't know the difference between hatred and criticism. I enjoyed this entry. I think things could be improved and since the trio reads our feedback, it might help them. I like to spice things up for them in between the 15 year olds shouting that they won't be able to sleep now.


Let me rephrase myself: It seems like with every new entry, the first thing you go for is the things you didn't like, rather than the things you did like, and it makes you sound like you're negative about the whole thing. Your criticism comes across that way, is all.[/i]
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 		I think the doll is a deliberate reference to the house in Entries #16, #18, and #23. I suspect Hoody wants Jay to return to the house ("the origins" of Masky that Reference could be, well, referencing).

Masky attacked Jay when he entered the house: an act that, until now, seemed extremely out of character. It's plausible there is still something that Masky really doesn't want Jay to find in there.


Spoiler (Rollover to View):
I forget, does "the house" still exists OOG?


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 		People, you are all like as if no one has a right to have an oppinion. I see no problem with Pravado, and he makes some nice points sometimes. Just learn to accept what others have to tell easier.

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 		Maybe you should stop assuming it's negativity then. One can point out something's faults without being negative. Notice how I never said "this entry was utter garbage, im done watching this, blah blah." Posting what I did like about an entry seems pointless to me, because everyone has already talked about the best parts of the entry and I don't like just repeating what people have said.

I take the time to write those posts for the directors of the series, not the average viewer on this board. I'm pointing out what they could have done better. That doesn't mean I hate what they did.

One of these days I'm just going to learn to ignore people calling me a negative nancy, one of these days. Probably when Zargg gets fed up with entry topics getting derailed because of people calling me out (hopefully he has enough sense to see my side of the situation)

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 		This is my first post so sorry if it's kinda sloppy. I'm learning Smile

I have a few thoughts about the entry:

1. Tim wore glasses.... hmm. Probably not important.

2. OP moving through the tunnel so fast was amazing! He reminded me of an octopus swimming and that made it all the better. Marble Hornets can get my heart pumping without fancy special effects.

3. I don't think Jay teleported. I think that OP simply caused distortion and when it stopped, Jay was at the entrance of the tunnel.

4. I loved the return of the slendy doll and felt that this entry seemed a lot like Season 1. Did anybody else notice that the doll had EYES? What could that mean?

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 		Well, good entry. It was pretty scary. Could have been better, though.

Regarding the papers: I got the impression that each sheet of paper was a different file for a different person, perhaps the entire cast of Alex's film? Maybe they all had stayed at the hospital in addition to Tim?

Probably not, as Hoody seems to only be referring to Tim as the liar. But I just wanted to put it out there.

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Boros7 wrote:
I think the doll is a deliberate reference to the house in Entries #16, #18, and #23. I suspect Hoody wants Jay to return to the house ("the origins" of Masky that Reference could be, well, referencing).

Masky attacked Jay when he entered the house: an act that, until now, seemed extremely out of character. It's plausible there is still something that Masky really doesn't want Jay to find in there.


Spoiler (Rollover to View):
I forget, does "the house" still exists OOG?


It might now, but I'm personally taking a bulldozer to it tomorrow so that they can't reuse another location.

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Also, why does everyone think that Slendy CRAWLED after Jay?


From a personal standpoint, I think it's creepier that way. Logistically, the Operator would have to contort his limbs at unrealistic angles in order to follow Jay with any kind of speed. And we all know he can move super fast. It just seems more disturbing than him moving through the floor like a ghost, or shrinking his size.

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suggesting that Slendy teleported to intercept Jay.


Well, at some point, Slenderman definitely teleported. But I think, or at least would like to think, that he was crawling most of the time.

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Malckeor wrote:
Well, good entry. It was pretty scary. Could have been better, though.

Regarding the papers: I got the impression that each sheet of paper was a different file for different people, perhaps the entire cast of Alex's film? Maybe they all had stayed at the hospital in addition to Tim?

Probably not, as Hoody seems to only be referring to Tim as the liar. But I just wanted to put it out there.


Jay would have surely read them by now and put that at the end of the entry in the white text. He got back from the hospital wednesday so he's had plenty of time to go over them. More likely that it's just tim's reports from different years or something

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ReverendJ wrote:
Whisku wrote:
pravado wrote:
Last thing I want to mention

Big Op practically let's jay go in this one. He zooms up to jay in an instant, than when jay reaches the pipes he turns around and the operator is gone. Why even bother showing up down there if you're gonna let him get away...

I never thought about the slender doll's eyes before, and I hate how there is always one past entry to throw off a theory (in this case, 45)


Hey, look. Something that's not irrelevantly critical.
Seriously, you're worse than my mom.


Your mom wasn't so bad last night.


I just almost died laughing. Bravo.

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Malckeor wrote:
Well, good entry. It was pretty scary. Could have been better, though.

Regarding the papers: I got the impression that each sheet of paper was a different file for a different person, perhaps the entire cast of Alex's film? Maybe they all had stayed at the hospital in addition to Tim?

Probably not, as Hoody seems to only be referring to Tim as the liar. But I just wanted to put it out there.


I tried to get a better look at the sheets other than the top one, but I couldn't see anything. Hopefully Jay will give us the details.
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 		The doll isn't Slendy.

It's Jay.

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pravado wrote:
Malckeor wrote:
Well, good entry. It was pretty scary. Could have been better, though.

Regarding the papers: I got the impression that each sheet of paper was a different file for different people, perhaps the entire cast of Alex's film? Maybe they all had stayed at the hospital in addition to Tim?

Probably not, as Hoody seems to only be referring to Tim as the liar. But I just wanted to put it out there.


Jay would have surely read them by now and put that at the end of the entry in the white text. He got back from the hospital wednesday so he's had plenty of time to go over them. More likely that it's just tim's reports from different years or something


That makes sense. However, Jay said that he still had to take the time to "look through everything," so I figured that meant that he hadn't looked at the medical papers in detail yet.

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neko wrote:
The doll isn't Slendy.

It's Jay.


Jay has some super-long legs there then.
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