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Lumine · Unfettered Joined: 12 Jul 2011 Posts: 467

It's not that bad, Loris. The distortion is pretty intense. The Slenderman looks alright. I cant really judge something that's only 2 videos in. Though, the voices truly are distracting.

**Posted:** Sun Apr 01, 2012 1:32 pm

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Faceless · Veteran Joined: 02 Sep 2011 Posts: 137

The name is a real turn off for me, but as soon as I saw that there would be commercials in this new series I stopped watching. I'm not even going to bother.

**Posted:** Wed Apr 04, 2012 9:49 pm

HuntedAndForgotten · Greenhorn Joined: 31 Mar 2012 Posts: 5

**Posted:** Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:00 pm

Archaic Devices · Boot Joined: 08 Mar 2012 Posts: 54

With this series, I would like some sort of backstory beforehand. There's two videos before the episodes, and that wouldn't be too bad except that the episodes have nothing to do with the videos before them. You go from two leisure videos to two videos where you're randomly walking near the woods. It also seems to be different people in episode 1 and episode 2 so I'm not sure who we're supposed to be focusing on. I don't mind the guy from episode 1, but the two people in the second episode give off a wannabe gangster vibe and it feels awkward. The slender man isn't terrible, but it's kind of obvious that he was digitally put in there. The location is good, gives a good slender vibe. I think what you guys need to do is just gradually to your big reveal of the slender man. Having it right away kind of destroys the suspense. Frankly what I would like to see is a start over. You're only two episodes in so it shouldn't be too bad. Make a new channel and plan everything out. Plot, character development, props, location, etc. Unless of course you pull a TT and say "It originally started as a tribute series to another series" and you also pull an EMH and say "Oh hey guys that's not our real slender man!". Then things would get interesting...

tl;dr It has some potential, but lack of story, etc isn't helping.

**Posted:** Wed Apr 04, 2012 11:08 pm

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Faceless · Veteran Joined: 02 Sep 2011 Posts: 137

**Posted:** Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:26 am

zbeeblebrox · Unfettered Joined: 10 Nov 2010 Posts: 420

Can you even monetize your videos before becoming a partner? I thought there were limitations.
By all means, if they're a partner, they deserve to be allowed to have ads.

Not gonna lie though....I adblock the hell out of Youtube. I tried. I really tried to tolerate them, but I just couldn't. They were driving me insane. Porn sites have less obnoxious ads than Youtube. And I already have a beef with them about their horrid UI, broken flash player, and disorganized site layout. I don't need to deal with their crappy ad system on top of all that.

**Posted:** Thu Apr 05, 2012 4:04 am

HuntedAndForgotten · Greenhorn Joined: 31 Mar 2012 Posts: 5

Yeah... the story isn't great, the actors aren't doing very well, but maybe the next video would change everyone's mind. I hope.

**Posted:** Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:14 pm

Jaames · Boot Joined: 18 Mar 2012 Posts: 27

This series is ok, I guess. Doesn't really make sense.

One thing...

Eff the voices! >:[

**Posted:** Thu Apr 05, 2012 7:56 pm

Tharol

So nods the horrible video.

**Posted:** Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:25 pm

MegaDarkAngel

The series was removed. I will restart it on a different channel and use different, less annoying people. I apologize for wasting everyone's time. I also thank everyone for giving me feedback. Negative or positive, it was still feedback. And I can technically comment since I don't own or am apart of a series anymore. So... meh. =P

**Posted:** Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:14 pm