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EmeraldWind · Veteran Joined: 20 May 2012 Posts: 82

I do find one thing about this and the recent Tweets to be somewhat interesting.

Jay seems to be more worried about Alex than Hoody or the Op.

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:58 am

twistedpuppet

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 2:01 am

censura_umbra · Unfettered Joined: 13 Aug 2012 Posts: 494

Two things bug me about this entry.

1. Why no reaction about entry 67

2. Who was second bed?

Also If Alex really WAS screaming at Jay with no eyes. That better be caught on video.

Oh and why did jay include footage of his dark empty room? Just so we could hear him cough?

And who knocked at the beginning? (And why did he turn off the light? Like it would help him be stealthy.)

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:15 am

UseR1011100 · Veteran Joined: 26 Mar 2012 Posts: 81

I think this entry was actually great for the simple reason that it lets us see more of the human side of Jay's experience. I kind of forgot about that until his recent twitter posts in which I remembered that Jay, day to day, is just a scared shut in, moving from place to place in a state of constant paranoia. This entry really peered into the reality of a person in Jay's position, dragging his meager bag of possessions from hotel to hotel in the early hours of the morning. There is a difference between storytelling and plot development. Storytelling puts you into someone else's head, their reality, plot (oddly enough) actually tells the story, the events from A to B to C. This entry was a great example of storytelling, for four minutes I felt like Jay, Tired, helpless, scared, and in an odd way important, or at least different, part of something larger. I think this is just what the MH series needed at this point, an unexpected slap of humanity. Don't we all feel our most vulnerably real at 4:00 AM?

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:17 am

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Ryudragon · Decorated Joined: 21 Jan 2011 Posts: 263

I wonder what Jay was watching on the TV.

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 3:24 am

Dreveth

It's nice to see the white text at the end of this entry. Haven't seen that in a while.

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:55 am

Aeliott · Boot Joined: 26 Apr 2012 Posts: 48

10 pages in and I'm the first to mention a possible Operator sighting?

3:40, look at the reflection in the car window - to the left of Jay's reflection...

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 5:33 am

Sinkes

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 5:42 am

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Aeliott · Boot Joined: 26 Apr 2012 Posts: 48

Ah yeah, I see it now. Nobody else seemed to have actually talked about it though. "Alex will find us eventually"...and then look who it is. Certainly adds a bit more dramatic weight to an in-between entry.

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 5:53 am

Hazman

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 6:02 am

TheOperator

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 6:39 am

mokie · Unfettered Joined: 22 Mar 2011 Posts: 374

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:42 am

ermac26

Did the last sentence ring any bells to anyone?

"But we're not giving up. We've done too much to just quit now."

A la Ted the Caver, anyone? If this is the case, this is the last entry, folks. They aren't coming back.

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 8:14 am

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Lithp · I Have No Life Joined: 04 Mar 2012 Posts: 2058

Canon also means a recognized body of literature, especially Biblical canon. That's more likely to be where the "fandom definition" originated.

Also the process of Sainting someone. Not sure if that's related.

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 8:37 am

KTsteve · Unfettered Joined: 12 Sep 2011 Posts: 437

oog:

**Posted:** Sun Mar 03, 2013 9:36 am